co-op help on lesbian story ?

SlaveMasterUK

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Hi all,
new member on-line and looking for a little help if anyone is interested.

I have written a few short erotic/pornographic stories in the past but have not had anything published. I've also been writing sci-fi and fantasy stories since my early teens.

I'm in the process of writing an erotic sci-fi novella based on a mistress/slave lesbian relationship, the main underlying theme being a story of slavery, teasing and denial, and the resulting change in the character of the slave through the story.

I feel the story would benefit from the input of someone who has been in a lesbian situation. I always find that lesbian stories written by women seem to feel 'right' whereas those written by men often feel cartoony or charicatured.

If you are a gay or bi woman and want to read through my scenes and add your creative input etc, please drop me a mail or leave a reply here. Of course I would be willing to split the credit for the project down the middle.

The story is not yet anywhere near completion although the majority of the plot is in my head and on various scraps of paper, rearranging itself until I'm sure it's right.

Sometimes I fall short of motiviation on this sort of thing. Just like with my music, if someone else can get sufficiently excited about this project I'm sure it will convince me to carry on.

Thanks in advance for any replies.

Ax
 
hey

i'd be willing to help

pm me if you want.

chicklet
 
I am afraid I am unqualified to help, but would be interested to read anything produced. There just isn't enough teasing in lesbian/slave Sci-Fi erotica.
 
I'm glad someone else thinks so! Do you write in this genre?

Watch this space for the finished version.

ax
 
I have only submitted 2.5 tales, but they ALL fall roughly in that genre. embarrassing really. I think my freudian slip is showing. :rolleyes:

Not exactly teasing, perhaps, but the word has promise :cool:

I am hoping to resubmit the 3rd after feedback. It is seriously flawed at the moment. I added a thread requesting help on that yesterday but I cannot seem to find it right now... I wonder if Lit had a server crash or something?
 
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