Cliche Reversals

SEVERUSMAX

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Even if some of the ones that come to mind have been tried before, I doubt that they are anywhere as prolific as the cliches themselves....more can be done to completely invert cliche plot devices....

I will start out with the cliche of the mom catching her son jacking off and wanting to fuck him right away.

Followed by the ever popular white (usually blonde) wife fucking around on white hubby with the black guy who has a large cock....sometimes resulting in cuckold themes, creampies, and/or bisexuality (as a bi guy, I find the implication that you can BECOME bi rather offensive myself, not to mention the suggestion that we are all a bunch of cuckolds with small dicks who like to watch, jerk off, and eat creampies....grrr...)

How can we reverse these two?

With mom/son, I imagine that the most obvious are: daddy catches daughter touching herself and wants her; son catches mom and wants her; dad catches son; mother catches daughter; daughter catches mom; daughter catches dad; son catches dad....just to name a few....or we can make the mom more typical of a lot of moms and repulsed by it....she angrily confronts son or daughter and it leads to a fight that results in sex....

With the white wife/black lover/white hubby theme, we can go with a white man, his white wife, and his black female lover (maybe he dominates both women, or maybe the black mistress is really a Mistress and dominates the couple)....the wife gets a creampie....or maybe a black hubby, white wife, and white lover....or black hubby, black wife, and white lover....or it's exactly like the normal thing except that it is the husband who takes a black man as a lover....just some thoughts...
 
definitely fertile ground

I think there's a lot of merit to taking so many of the stereotypes ( schoolgirl and Teacher, babysitter and Father, etc ) and spinning them differently. It's a win-win; you get to enjoy the cliche ( there's a reason it's a cliche, of course... it's such a hot idea ) and also as a writer develop yourself a bit by spinning it differently. As a reader, you get something probably new.

I'm also a fan of the idea of taking those cliche scenes and using different settings to make them fresh; ancient Polynesia where mom catches the son masturbating. A sculpted virtual reality where the naughty blond wife experiments with black cock.

Leo DiCaprio as Romeo, Korn remaking "Word Up", and so on are works done in this spirit.

: )
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Followed by the ever popular white (usually blonde) wife fucking around on white hubby with the black guy who has a large cock....sometimes resulting in cuckold themes, creampies, and/or bisexuality (as a bi guy, I find the implication that you can BECOME bi rather offensive myself, not to mention the suggestion that we are all a bunch of cuckolds with small dicks who like to watch, jerk off, and eat creampies....grrr...)

This brought something to my mind... :) I'm not sure what the whole screen name is (if there were numbers, abbreviated spelling, and so on) but there is a man on Lit named Cuckolded Black Male and his av has a pretty black woman sucking a rather large white cock. ;)

I agree with You that the above quote is a cliché and it seems at least one man on Lit is working on breaking that. ;) Not sure if he's an author here, too, or not.
 
ParkerDupris said:
( there's a reason it's a cliche, of course... it's such a hot idea )

Leo DiCaprio as Romeo, Korn remaking "Word Up", and so on are works done in this spirit.

: )

Of course "cliché" basically means "over done", but stereotypes are in existence because they originate from some truth. :)


I like Korn's Word Up. It's edgier.

Same with Manson's Sweet Dreams (though I love Eurythmics' equally, ironically enough), I Put a Spell on You, and especially Tainted Love. (His version of T L just sounds sooooooo damn dirty! ;))
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Of course "cliché" basically means "over done", but stereotypes are in existence because they originate from some truth. :)


I like Korn's Word Up. It's edgier.

Same with Manson's Sweet Dreams (though I love Eurythmics' equally, ironically enough), I Put a Spell on You, and especially Tainted Love. (His version of T L just sounds sooooooo damn dirty! ;))

And reversing the cliches is also fun...especially since there is probably some truth to the inverted form, too.... ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
This brought something to my mind... :) I'm not sure what the whole screen name is (if there were numbers, abbreviated spelling, and so on) but there is a man on Lit named Cuckolded Black Male and his av has a pretty black woman sucking a rather large white cock. ;)

I agree with You that the above quote is a cliché and it seems at least one man on Lit is working on breaking that. ;) Not sure if he's an author here, too, or not.

Fascinating, since it's not usual.... :D :devil:
 
I think you are really onto something here. I watch the Sleuth Channel alot, and awhile back they did a thing on the 20 Most Popular TV Sleuths. As they did their count-down they interviewed the writers of these TV WhoDunIts and the writer of Rockford Files got my attention.

He said that in creating his character (James Garner) cast as a Private Investigator, he took the cliches and sterotype and did the exact opposite. His character could not fight, his character had a reluctant cop that helped him out on his cases, he had an answering machine instead of a sexy secretery, he had a nasty old trailer instead of an office...that sort of thing.

Myself I get kind of tired of the big breasted, tall and slender characters in some LIT stories who are part-time escorts to make a little extra cash for college....yada, yada, yada. I think we all know the story types.

I think you have an excellent idea. Heck you might have just given me a few ideas..Thanks
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Fascinating, since it's not usual.... :D :devil:

Yeah, I haven't seen him post in a while. (I think he's a member who's been around for several years.) His av always brings a smile to my face. :eek:
 
I miss him too. I tried to look at his profile to see that last time he posted, but I wasn't getting anything. I'll try again later. I like the cliche reversal with the black female. I feel inspired . . .
 
Mona said:
I miss him too. I tried to look at his profile to see that last time he posted, but I wasn't getting anything. I'll try again later. I like the cliche reversal with the black female. I feel inspired . . .

Cool....hehehe...I do love to shake things up...
 
Mona said:
I miss him too. I tried to look at his profile to see that last time he posted, but I wasn't getting anything. I'll try again later. I like the cliche reversal with the black female. I feel inspired . . .

On a side note, I miss the sexy avs you usually have. ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
On a side note, I miss the sexy avs you usually have. ;)

Awwww. Thanks, I can't find my disk with my AV's. After Cristmas, everything disappeared, but I'm on the lookout though and will update as soon as I find them.
 
Mona said:
I miss him too. I tried to look at his profile to see that last time he posted, but I wasn't getting anything. I'll try again later. I like the cliche reversal with the black female. I feel inspired . . .


I'm not sure, but I think Cuckolded_Blk_Male now posts on the message boards under a different name. His stories are still there, though:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=154150&page=submissions

Both are definitely conscious reversals of cliche interracial stories, with "Mrs. Auden's Weakness" telling the story of an overcivilized black woman who finds she can't resist the crude big-dicked white man, while "Who's The Boss" reverses the cliche interracial/cuckold story, making it the sexy black wife who's addicted to the big white cock, with the weakling black husband submitting.
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
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With mom/son, I imagine that the most obvious are: daddy catches daughter touching herself and wants her; son catches mom and wants her; dad catches son; mother catches daughter; daughter catches mom; daughter catches dad; son catches dad....just to name a few....or we can make the mom more typical of a lot of moms and repulsed by it....she angrily confronts son or daughter and it leads to a fight that results in sex....

....just some thoughts...

lol...I was just looking at the mix of it all, a family of curious people.

1) dad spies on daughter masturbating, after the daughter's climax hears noise at her door. She covers herself quickly, then dresses to go find out who it might have been. It could only have been her father, he is across the hall in the laundry room fixing the lamp with a hard-on pushing out the front of his pants. The father acts as if nothing is going on.

2) son spies on mother, during he shoot off his spunk while watching her climax. The mother jumps up and finds a large amound of seman on the door and frame. She investigates only to find her son innocently reading. She notices the sweat pouring from his brow. She does not confront him.

3) daughter spies on brother while he jerks off with a pair of dirty panties. The daughter can tell that he has panties to his face, but can't tell who they belong to. The daughter goes to spy on her brother again, but finds her dad jerking off to a different pair of panties, but he has a small pile of panties that he has been sniffing.

4) The mother spies on the son while he is jerking off and sees him rubbing her dirty panties all over his face.

5) The daughter spies on her parents having intense sex. The mother can tell that someone is spying, but she doesn't know who. The daughter hears her brother and slips away to her own bedroom without being detected. The son hears the sound of his parents wild sex and spies on them until they climax. The son goes to jerk off and the daughter then spies on her brother.

Spying and Masturbation...that's what I got out of this.
 
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