cheating with the enemy

[jemmaaaaa]

Hi, i have a story in mind that is loosely based on a real life incident, however its more of situation that in real life nothing happened, but i cant help think it would have been hot! so am looking for an author to write what might have happened for me.

the true part

im jemma, 23, from uk, my bf Dan, 27, plays a lot of football, a few weeks ago he had his ankle broken in a really bad tackle, i was there wathing, anyway, he got taken to hospital, and unfortunately had to spend the night in there, i wanted to stay with him, but i had a night out planned with my gfs, i would have cancelled however Dan insisted i went, as he didnt want to ruin my night, just staying with him in hospital, so i went out clubbing with my girls as planned. anyway later that night in the club i saw the guy who had put my bf in hospital.

thats where the truth ends, this is the fantasy bit

the guy was a tall well built black man, so i thought it would be hot if he recognised me, started off by trying to apology, ending up hitting on me and taking me back to the flat i share with my bf while he is in hospital.

thats the rough idea, am happy to work with any authors who wish to take this on, feel free to pm me

jem x

 

[jemmaaaaa]

Bump!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[loquere]

Bump!!!!!!!!!!!

I like it but where the real part ends off, instead the black footballers girlfriend comes in to the hospital? Apologizig and comforting him while you've abandoned him to go clubbing. She also apologizes by sucking his cock.

 

[The_shadow_rising]

Ah, a delicious story idea, with so many possibilities - especially for sequels.

I think that while the boyfriend is in hospital this 'rival' of his is nailing his own girlfriend in their bed, shower, lounge, and so on. Does that sound about right? The next day she regrets it despite how hot it was...and yet...deep down she wants more.

It could be so subtle, and she could dislike the guy at first...yet his arrogance wins out in the end. Maybe a phone call just before/during the sex from her boyfriend too. Hm?

I think there are a few who would write this story well. Especially with the details as they are

 

[chiro]

Love this idea. The girl should also let the enemy do things she wouldnt let the bf do like drink his cum etc. possibly fuck all night in all thinkable places

 

[Stryke_Infinite]

Truth be told I could see this story going in some really interesting directions.

Good solid foundation for a great story.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Wow, this made it over an hour without getting flamed literally to hell.

Why the hell would you think it was hot to go fuck the man who hospitalized your man?

 

[Leslie22]

sounds so hot

 

[chiro]

I have an idea that's similar: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=815199&page=5

 

[chiro]

Girl fucks fiance's enemy

Can somebody write a story where a girl has sex with a guy who beats her fiance up in a bar? When the fiance is in the hospital, the girl confronts the bully but ends up fucking the shit out of him all night.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Why would she do this? I mean she's pretty much about the worst woman ever at this point.

 

[MyRubiLips]

Why? Maybe because that's the only story idea chiro asks for. (Girl fucks boyfriend's bully, and something about wife fucks husband's enemy. Now this one, too.)

 

[Sean Renaud]

I just want to know where this gets hot? I'm not advocating violence against women, violence is wrong. But if a man put me in the hospital and my fiancee's reaction was to fuck his brains out while I ate pudding through a straw it might be in her best interest to make sure that I don't ever find out. If I do I'm probably going to spend a few hours watching Saw to get myself in the right head space. Hell depending on the circumstances of the original fight I might not even be pissed at the guy. We were fighting, he wanted to rub it in. I'm probably kicking his ass on principle but he didn't betray me and as much as I'm against "Christian" Morality. (Fully Aware that Dante's Inferno isn't at all supported by scripture despite centuries of it being treated as cannon) but Hell has a special place for betrayers and it's worse than what they do to murderers, rapists and theives because they are worse people.

Now if you were to change the story up to something happening amongst some kind of tribal society where the woman was little more than a prize and she was with you because you were the biggest strongest man and when you got your ass kicked that automatically meant you were no longer worthy then it makes sense and can be a fun story but in contemporary America? Dear God. This is like chapter 1 to the revenge story that has you rooting for the serial killer. Yeah, this is like the opening chapter to the male counterpart to Kill Bill.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I just want to know where this gets hot?

That, I'm afraid, I do not know. Hopefully chiro has some insight.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That, I'm afraid, I do not know. Hopefully chiro has some insight.

Do you practice being adorable or does it just come naturally?

 

[MyRubiLips]

lol Not sure. But, we better not hijack this thread.

 

[sirhugs]

Why would she do this? I mean she's pretty much about the worst woman ever at this point.

because she slips him a sleeping potion. When he wakes up there are pictures all over the internet of him sucking cock & being anally fucked.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That's an idea. Not one I'd write but at least I understand the motivation now!

 

[The_New_Guy92]

Chapter 6 of Roommate Relations has something like this. Boyfriend is knocked out at a party by the guy his girlfriend is fucking (though he isn't aware of that little fact), and they take him home and have sex in the same room as him while he's unconcious.

http://www.literotica.com/s/roommate-relations-ch-06

 

[sh0wst0pper]

Why would she do this? I mean she's pretty much about the worst woman ever at this point.

I browse Literotica on a fairly regular basis. I sometimes wonder to myself "Why would a person want to have sex with his mother?" "Why does that girl fantasize about being taken against her will by a hobo?" The questions could go on for hours. Then I look in a mirror.

The answer is because it's taboo. It's fantasy. Which is why many of us come on here. Save your criticism dude. I understand you don't find it erotic. But he does. I'm not sure why you even clicked on the link, much less commented on it. Move on with your life.

 

[MatthewVett]

because she slips him a sleeping potion. When he wakes up there are pictures all over the internet of him sucking cock & being anally fucked.

I like this angle, too.

 

[Corbal]

Why would she do this? I mean she's pretty much about the worst woman ever at this point.

Apparently, I am the only person who read this and nearly hit the floor in a fit of laughter. Perhaps, I'm easily amused.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I browse Literotica on a fairly regular basis. I sometimes wonder to myself "Why would a person want to have sex with his mother?" "Why does that girl fantasize about being taken against her will by a hobo?" The questions could go on for hours. Then I look in a mirror.

The answer is because it's taboo. It's fantasy. Which is why many of us come on here. Save your criticism dude. I understand you don't find it erotic. But he does. I'm not sure why you even clicked on the link, much less commented on it. Move on with your life.

Not remotely the same.

Apparently, I am the only person who read this and nearly hit the floor in a fit of laughter. Perhaps, I'm easily amused.

I too can find silly things funny!

 

[sh0wst0pper]

Not remotely the same.

Oh, but it is. This "weird" story makes his dick hard. At the end of the day, that's what it's all about.

 

[Tmmldr]

....This is like chapter 1 to the revenge story that has you rooting for the serial killer. Yeah, this is like the opening chapter to the male counterpart to Kill Bill.

And Kill Bill did a bang up job of telling the story, didn't it?

LOL