Cheating Wife Story - Any Good?

[Velia]

I am asking for your help.

I have written two chapters of a cheating wife story, and I would really like to get some feedback from those who might like that type of story. It is hard to tell if it is working (as a good "cheating wife" story) or not, because I get so many bad votes being in Loving Wives.

If you prefer, please feel free to send me private feedback if you wish not to comment here. Either way is fine.

Thank you so much in advance.

Chapter 1 is here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=476111

Chapter 2 is here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=482112

Velia

 

[Velia]

Thank You

I wanted to thank those of you who have sent me messages. Since many of them are sent anonymously, I cannot respond through email, but I do want to say, "Thank you," and this is the only way I know how to do that. And for the record, I understand your desire to remain anonymous.

To those of you with return addresses, I have responded directly.