Cheating Under His Eyes Twist

[UnkownGhost]

I came across several stories recently one humorous one not so humorous. Whoever wrote them has a very interesting mind. I found myself just laughing at the satire version and saying you magnificent bastard to whoever wrote it. It was a tablet device so the author didn't really stick out.

Long story short. The MC in the stories has developed some kind of embalming chemical that basically kills someone instantly.

Of course me dumb ass was thinking about using the stuff in a military application. In both instances the husband is killed by accident.

However in this twist version I think it would be neat if the husband were merely unconscious. And when the time is right he's extracted to work a secret organization. Making tons of money. We can watch this character who was treated quite horribly turn into a villain.

Everyone that has helped the wife dies. He moves on. Kind of thing.

That's what I was thinking but of course those are the simply the thoughts of an idiot so feel free to ignore obviously.

 

[Hypoxia]

I think you read my (Right) and (Still) Under His Eyes stories, which had a precarious genesis. Yeah, I have a sick brain. Especially since I know those people; they're real. I guess they're revenge tales.

Your idea of unfreezing the chemist and wreaking revenge on the slut and her lovers is interesting. (I approached that in Still Under His Eyes.} Making him a supervillain or the tool of a nefarious agency could be fun. It would help if he had some personal focus, like he develops his potions to selectively attack people based on DNA aspects of ethnicity, height or weight, IQ, body chemistry, whatever. He hates and targets some group. But his potions are unstable; the results aren't perfectly predictable. Hilarity ensues.

 

[UnkownGhost]

I think you read my (Right) and (Still) Under His Eyes stories, which had a precarious genesis. Yeah, I have a sick brain. Especially since I know those people; they're real. I guess they're revenge tales.

Your idea of unfreezing the chemist and wreaking revenge on the slut and her lovers is interesting. (I approached that in Still Under His Eyes.} Making him a supervillain or the tool of a nefarious agency could be fun. It would help if he had some personal focus, like he develops his potions to selectively attack people based on DNA aspects of ethnicity, height or weight, IQ, body chemistry, whatever. He hates and targets some group. But his potions are unstable; the results aren't perfectly predictable. Hilarity ensues.

Maybe the groups he can target would be those that betrayed him? If going personal.

The corporation that uses him can target specific people for their own agenda. Ie some HVT (High Value Target) needs to be eliminated in a manner that can't point back to the employer or should point to another entity.

You know the. The ACE of Spades is can't be assassinated by this agency. So using the serum dude can be banging some random chick (maybe the wife of a local business man). The wife is the carrier but when her cunt interacts with the ACE of spades' dick, the skin can absorb the serum which has been designed to attack his system thus killing him.

So now this chick has a dead dude inside of her.

Or the serum can have some explosive side effects. Literally.

Friction from sex can cause a nice little situation for volatile chemicals.

Maybe they can have an agent and call her the Black Widow, every she fucks dies soon after. ... okay that's just crazy. But I felt like throwing that out there because why not. I'm sure you can do something with that if you want to.