Cheating BF and GF

[CockE82]

I thought it would be cool to see a story where the guy is rushes out of his GFs house naked so her mom didn't catch him. Then he had to call a female friend, who was his best friends girl to come get him and take him home, then he and her end up having a great night. I started the story, but I'm kinda fish tailed right now, stuck.




This is actually chapter three of a long story I'm writing, but I'm a very impatient person, so I've been working on this for months and every time I sit to write, I get bored, so I never finish it. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in taking on this chapter (and maybe more)?

 

[CockE82]

anyone?

 

[agedmac]

cool one years ago....

Guy is going to get his first nookie...the slutty girl in school agrees to do him. They meet in the school parking lot. She's in back seat of car and she shows him her nookie w/o panties but has him undress in the lot next to the car, protected by other cars. She takes the clothes and when he's completely naked (with a considerably hard and long cock), she seems really interested but suddenly there is someone in the front seat of the car and they drive away with his clothes leaving him naked in the parking lot.

He has his cell phone but doesn't know who to call. He calls his aunt and tries to explain. She is more 'worldly' than his mom, her sister and laughs and comes and gets him. All she has in the car is a small rag she uses to wipe the windows and it hardly covers him. They can't go to his house because his mother is home so she takes him to her house. She sneaks him in the back door and has him hide in the coat closet until they are alone. Then he comes out, still nursing an erection and she decides, what the hell, and grabs it. Funs ensues!

 

[CockE82]

that sounds like a good one too, but I really need to get this chapter done. I want to start on chapter 4 but I can't until I get this one doen, and I'm dead locked at this. Can anyone help me out?

 

[CockE82]

bump.

 

[Erich_Norden]

Are you looking for someone to give feedback or someone willing to write/edit the story themselves? It seems like an interesting premise but kind of rushed and unrealistic.

 

[CockE82]

Yeah man, I been wanting a story about me and real people I know in situations. I couldn't find anyone to write it, and I'm not a good writer, but I have been giving it a shot. But like you said, it's rushed and unrealistic, and that is mainly due to be being an impatient person about stuff like this and writing a good story takes a long time.

 

[CockE82]

Anyone possibly willing to take this on and kinda make what I did better? I'm not a great writer as you can tell.

 

[Erich_Norden]

I might, but only once I'm done with a story I'm working on currently, if you still haven't found a writer by then.

 

[CockE82]

I might, but only once I'm done with a story I'm working on currently, if you still haven't found a writer by then.

alright, thanks.

 

[MsLinnet]

I thought it would be cool to see a story where the guy is rushes out of his GFs house naked so her mom didn't catch him. Then he had to call a female friend, who was his best friends girl to come get him and take him home, then he and her end up having a great night. I started the story, but I'm kinda fish tailed right now, stuck.




This is actually chapter three of a long story I'm writing, but I'm a very impatient person, so I've been working on this for months and every time I sit to write, I get bored, so I never finish it. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in taking on this chapter (and maybe more)?

you and me both after 2000 words i am pulling my hair out i have found writing each chapter as a new story helps but if you like i would have a look at your ch 3 and see if i can get it on the move then you take over again what do you think

 

[CockE82]

you and me both after 2000 words i am pulling my hair out i have found writing each chapter as a new story helps but if you like i would have a look at your ch 3 and see if i can get it on the move then you take over again what do you think

I don't think that would work with me taking back over because I am giving up on my writing. I still love to read but writing is just to difficult for me. Plus as mentioned before in this thread, what I had wrote was quite rushed and unrealistic, so not very good. I would love to get it started over.

 

[CockE82]

I'm still working on this incase anyone wants to jump in. I can give the full details on the characters and everything, I just don't have the gift of writing sexy stories.

 

[jada_wynn]

lesbian connection

What about this idea....

The boy hooks up with the hot cheerleader (we'll call her jade). They date for a while and she finally lets him know that she is ready. So goes over to her house one night while her parents are gone to have a fun filled night of hot sex.

Now, his best friend and next door neighbor is a girl (We'll call her amanda)that is considered the school lesbian. She is cute but has very little interest in boys. The boy and the neighbor girl, Amanda have been best friends for many years and tell each other everything. Amanda has been lusting after Jade for the past few years, but Jade stopped talking to Amanda when she found out the Amanda liked girls.

So a few hours into the sex.... the parents return to town and pull in the drive way. The kids are caught by surprise and he jumps from her window naked. She tosses out his clothes and cell phone, but the clothing gets caught in the tree branches and only the phone reaches him. Naked, he makes his way to a safe spot and calls Amanda for help.

A while later, Amanda drives up and he jumps into her car and they speed away. He explains what happened and she is getting a big laugh. Then the boy talks about sex and Jade's sweet pussy. Amanda realizes that she is smelling Amanda's scent on the boy. She gets so turned on that she drives to a seculed spot. The boy has always known of Amanda's lust for Jade. When Amanda tells the boy that she can smell Jade's scent on him, he offers to let her get a taste of Jade's pussy from his cock. She says no at first, but puts her head in his lap to smell Jade better and asks him to tell her everything about Jade's body, her face during sex and the taste of her pussy and ass.

The boy starts and soon Amanda can't help but let her toungue lick his cock for a taste. Soon she is taking him deep into her mouth and rubbing her pussy as the boy talks. She loses all sense of what is happen... she can only think about Jade and the taste of her pussy. the boy finally loses control and cums hard and deep into her mouth. Amanda just takes it all in and then comes hard.

Afterwards, The talk and make an agreement. Everytime he fucks Jade, he'll come to Amanda and let her lick Jade's juices from him. Over time, Amanda finds that she really loves cock and she and the boy become an item... although they have girls joining them all the time.

 

[CockE82]

Man that sounds really hot, that would make for a great story, but not in this series because I am trying to make this based on people I know and realistic to my life.