likebadfun
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I am looking for partners for a chain story. The idea is an immigrant Asian women gets lost in a mountain town and runs into some rough rednecks. They resent losing their jobs to Asian competitors and take out their frustrations on the woman. The story would alternate between the rednecks and the woman's thoughts.
Here's a sample from the first chapter:
Me, Bobbi-Jo, Clyde and Jethro wuz out cruising in my '65 Jeep. Enjoying ourselves - drinking hootch, just looking for something to do. It was raining and the mountain roads were muddy. Bobbi-Jo needed to pee so we stopped at the old bus depot. Don't know why the bus stops there. No one ever comes to this hick town of ours. Used to be some factories here but Asian imports made them all go broke. We all lost our jobs. So we really hated the Asians. Bobbi-Jo came back out with a big grin on her face. She had a chinese with her!!! She said, “This is Way Chew. She’s lost and needs help. I promised we would help. Is that OK?” Bobbi-Jo gave us a big wink and we knew it was time for fun. We told the slant-eyed bitch to get in and she smiled shyly. We made her sit between Clyde and Jethro. We drove to the old shoe factory where we used to work. “Come on in ChewChew, it’s warm and dry.” She looked worried. “That old place, why go in?” Clyde pushed her out and grabbed her arms and pulled her into the old place. It was dark inside of course. Oh, did I mention, her white blouse was soaked from the rain and her nipples were showing thru the bra. Never seen Chinese nipples before.
(Wei Chu: I cold, wet. Nice womans gives me ride with frens. Mens is big. Stop at old building. Red-hair man say come in. I scare. Why stop old building? Fat man push me out car. Why? I scared. Make me go in. I wet, cold. My clothes soak. I scared they bad peeples. I try get away.)
If you are interested, let me know.
Here's a sample from the first chapter:
Me, Bobbi-Jo, Clyde and Jethro wuz out cruising in my '65 Jeep. Enjoying ourselves - drinking hootch, just looking for something to do. It was raining and the mountain roads were muddy. Bobbi-Jo needed to pee so we stopped at the old bus depot. Don't know why the bus stops there. No one ever comes to this hick town of ours. Used to be some factories here but Asian imports made them all go broke. We all lost our jobs. So we really hated the Asians. Bobbi-Jo came back out with a big grin on her face. She had a chinese with her!!! She said, “This is Way Chew. She’s lost and needs help. I promised we would help. Is that OK?” Bobbi-Jo gave us a big wink and we knew it was time for fun. We told the slant-eyed bitch to get in and she smiled shyly. We made her sit between Clyde and Jethro. We drove to the old shoe factory where we used to work. “Come on in ChewChew, it’s warm and dry.” She looked worried. “That old place, why go in?” Clyde pushed her out and grabbed her arms and pulled her into the old place. It was dark inside of course. Oh, did I mention, her white blouse was soaked from the rain and her nipples were showing thru the bra. Never seen Chinese nipples before.
(Wei Chu: I cold, wet. Nice womans gives me ride with frens. Mens is big. Stop at old building. Red-hair man say come in. I scare. Why stop old building? Fat man push me out car. Why? I scared. Make me go in. I wet, cold. My clothes soak. I scared they bad peeples. I try get away.)
If you are interested, let me know.
