Chain Story Idea

Dar~

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Rhys's thread got me thinking and I think a strip audition chain would be a cool idea for chain story.

We agree on the name of the club and make it into reality. Anyone up for it?
 
sophia jane said:
Would it be a strip club chain or just about the auditions?

SJ
Whatever
I just really liked describing the strip and I know it could be really fun. Especially if it was one of those unknown except to a certain type, clubs.
 
Dar~ said:
Whatever
I just really liked describing the strip and I know it could be really fun. Especially if it was one of those unknown except to a certain type, clubs.


I'll think about it. I could probably be interested in a story based in a strip club, but I don't think I could describe stripping. Description like that is the huge weak point of my writing.

SJ
 
sophia jane said:
I'll think about it. I could probably be interested in a story based in a strip club, but I don't think I could describe stripping. Description like that is the huge weak point of my writing.

SJ

Yes, but you have an amazing ability when it comes to personal interaction. you could describe actual scenes where the customers are being "entertained" by the dancers.
 
Dar~ said:
Yes, but you have an amazing ability when it comes to personal interaction. you could describe actual scenes where the customers are being "entertained" by the dancers.


A few scenarios that interest me- a lap dance gone too far, a couple watching the show deciding to have sex at their table, two of the dancers pleasuring each other backstage, etc.

So, yes, the strip club setting definitely intrigues me (as you can see :D).

SJ
 
sophia jane said:
A few scenarios that interest me- a lap dance gone too far, a couple watching the show deciding to have sex at their table, two of the dancers pleasuring each other backstage, etc.

So, yes, the strip club setting definitely intrigues me (as you can see :D).

SJ


Thats exactly what I am talking about. Basically a sex club. I was thinking one of those clubs that has the "back room" that only a few special patrons know about and the cops don't at all. The senarios you just described are exactly what I was talking about.
 
Dar~ said:
Thats exactly what I am talking about. Basically a sex club. I was thinking one of those clubs that has the "back room" that only a few special patrons know about and the cops don't at all. The senarios you just described are exactly what I was talking about.


Then I'm in.

SJ
 
Dar~ said:
Thats exactly what I am talking about. Basically a sex club. I was thinking one of those clubs that has the "back room" that only a few special patrons know about and the cops don't at all. The senarios you just described are exactly what I was talking about.


You might wish Dar, to yuse s et up similar to the one Hellfire in NY has. A large front wrrom with bar, stages etc. The back area is divided into small cells where partons can act out whatever they choose, other patrons are allowed to watch, but not enter the cubes. Just a thought, but it opens up a lot of dimensions for story fare that a simple backroom dosen't.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
You might wish Dar, to yuse s et up similar to the one Hellfire in NY has. A large front wrrom with bar, stages etc. The back area is divided into small cells where partons can act out whatever they choose, other patrons are allowed to watch, but not enter the cubes. Just a thought, but it opens up a lot of dimensions for story fare that a simple backroom dosen't.


Oooh it does! I love the idea of little rooms where people can watch you.

SJ
 
sophia jane said:
Oooh it does! I love the idea of little rooms where people can watch you.

SJ


IIRC at hell fire each room is pretty small and barren. Patrons bring their own props. If you wish to do a secene you basically go back, enter and put up one of those red velvet covered chains theaters use across the doorway. People cluster in front of the doors, watching the scenes going on inside.

For a chain with a club seting it upens up tons of options, as the props people bring range from simple to elaborate. I think, if you need something large, you can contact the club before hand and they will let you set up a room however you want.

At any rate, it really gives you a lot of flexibility as the scens in the rooms are prety much anything goes and you can see most any fetish or sex act you like, from elaborate master/slve stuff to just honry couples who pick a room and get off on being watched as they fuck.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
IIRC at hell fire each room is pretty small and barren. Patrons bring their own props. If you wish to do a secene you basically go back, enter and put up one of those red velvet covered chains theaters use across the doorway. People cluster in front of the doors, watching the scenes going on inside.

For a chain with a club seting it upens up tons of options, as the props people bring range from simple to elaborate. I think, if you need something large, you can contact the club before hand and they will let you set up a room however you want.

At any rate, it really gives you a lot of flexibility as the scens in the rooms are prety much anything goes and you can see most any fetish or sex act you like, from elaborate master/slve stuff to just honry couples who pick a room and get off on being watched as they fuck.


Love it . . see I needed to bring it out here and discuss to get these fabulous ideas. Does this mean you are in miss colly?
 
Dar~ said:
Love it . . see I needed to bring it out here and discuss to get these fabulous ideas. Does this mean you are in miss colly?


Lets say I'm in conditionally. I'm having a depressive episode right now and it isn't a good time for me to commit to anything.
 
Already did a story in a club. Check out my story The Tease Plug! Plug!

Actually I mention it as I spent a fair bit of the story describing the main character, a peeler's, stage show. Twice. But most of the second stage show didn't go as expected. ;)

Now that I'm thinking about it, the glimmerings of an idea are coming to me.

If it's firmed up by tomorrow, I'll be in.
 
My story idea's a little firmer. I'm not sure the main character would need to audition, she's already well established in the profession.

Let's get the club set up. Basically, we'll need the main bar area, where customers, peelers and staff interact.

A private area is needed, with small cubicles for lap dancing.

Maybe another 'more private' area for 'other activities'. The police will know about this. How they are convinced not to act on it should be determined before we start writing.

A changing room for the dancers.

Washrooms, usually in the basement is my experience.

For a name something like The Pussy Cat come to mind. Something that hints at the delights that wait within.
 
i think id be crazy to actually commit to doing a story but im going to try so im in conditionally, just like colly.
i like this premise.
if i dont actually do a story, ill be here to help edit if anyone is done by sunday.
 
Cool so Rob, sound slike you have the first one, b/c you have most of the ideas about set up.
SJ, you want to take #2 I'll take number three because I am not good at beginings or endings adn then if Vella is still up for it and Colly is back we'll have some more.

Anyone disagree?
 
Dar~ said:
Cool so Rob, sound slike you have the first one, b/c you have most of the ideas about set up.
SJ, you want to take #2 I'll take number three because I am not good at beginings or endings adn then if Vella is still up for it and Colly is back we'll have some more.

Anyone disagree?


That would be fine. I'll see what I can come up with later for ideas. If it goes well, I might want to write another one toward the end.

SJ
 
sophia jane said:
That would be fine. I'll see what I can come up with later for ideas. If it goes well, I might want to write another one toward the end.

SJ
Sounds great. I would probably want to write more than one as well.
 
After thinking, is this chain simply about auditions for the club? Or what goes on in it?

My idea is about an already established character. Essentially it's going to be a sequel to the story I mentioned earlier. It's still forming in my mind, but I should be able to get started soon.

When will it need to be done?
 
rgraham666 said:
After thinking, is this chain simply about auditions for the club? Or what goes on in it?

My idea is about an already established character. Essentially it's going to be a sequel to the story I mentioned earlier. It's still forming in my mind, but I should be able to get started soon.

When will it need to be done?


Lets aim for a week apart? You take your time and get it to be however you want then we'll all follow within a week?

Its about the established characters.
 
Who are the established characters?

Only had five in my original story. I got dibs on the main two from The Tease. I 'explored' what happened to two others in my one Lesbian story. And one was little more than a name and a description.

Aren't we just going to be using the club as the main setting?
 
rgraham666 said:
Who are the established characters?

Only had five in my original story. I got dibs on the main two from The Tease. I 'explored' what happened to two others in my one Lesbian story. And one was little more than a name and a description.

Aren't we just going to be using the club as the main setting?

There ar eno main characters. each story will be unto itself.
You will just be the one introducing the club and the setting. Individaully we will add onto characters.

You can use existing characters of yours if you want, but it would be easier for the readers and the other Authors if it were all new (that way we aren't obligated to go read something else to know where we are and whats going on.) Your story can be an audtion after hours, or it can be something happening in the club during the open hours. doesn't matter.
 
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