destinie21
Daddy's Brat
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I have alot of idea's but I don't seem to have time for them
Also alot of series' in progress. I write as much as I can I'd but still idea's keep coming. I'm not going to bother posting the idea's since they're not really new and will sound boring without a proper outline to flesh them out but what I do want to do is start a thread about character's. I have lots of story idea's and such but my characters are becoming repetative. As the author I of course go for the features that I like which means that after about 8 stories my character's are beginning to sound the same .
That was easily remedyed by switching up appearances but the emotions and thoughts and Ideas are also sounding the same as well. This problem is not so easily fixed as I make those things up based on my thoughts and ideas. When I read other people's stories I like the characters but I wouldn't want to plagerize thenm and I feel as if it's wrong to use essentially the same character with only a few changes. Also sometimes the changes would change the character so much it's wouldn't be the same.
That said all I really want is people to post characters for free use. I know there must be some people who can develop a character but for whatever reason doesnt use them
I'll even put up the first one
I was a courtesan of the king. No more or less than that.
A prisoner as surely as if I were a thief in the dungeon, but my execution would not be quick. I instead would suffer at on the whim of a spoiled king who was no more than a brat prince. A young foolish carnal king who did not rule but reigned.
I came to his palace as a servant to his wife. Who had been my tormentor for many years, and whom for many years to come I would torment. But at what expense?
Our story starts out very simply we were born within 3 hours of each other, she was a princess who would be queen while I was the ninth child and third daughter of a slave woman. My mother died within moments of my birth she chose my name to be Rajasi and they honored the dying woman’s last wish. The princess Anushri entered the world shortly after, the child of Pari and Santosh. As was my legacy I was chosen at birth to be the handmaiden and servant of the Princess. We grew up together though I more quickly than she in many cases.
pS:The narrator is Rajasi ( A name that means worthy of a king) which is why it was an unlikely name for a servant girl.
Anushri makes an apperance as well. Her name means -pretty or beautiful.
Feel free to use the storyline and characters names.
Also alot of series' in progress. I write as much as I can I'd but still idea's keep coming. I'm not going to bother posting the idea's since they're not really new and will sound boring without a proper outline to flesh them out but what I do want to do is start a thread about character's. I have lots of story idea's and such but my characters are becoming repetative. As the author I of course go for the features that I like which means that after about 8 stories my character's are beginning to sound the same .
That was easily remedyed by switching up appearances but the emotions and thoughts and Ideas are also sounding the same as well. This problem is not so easily fixed as I make those things up based on my thoughts and ideas. When I read other people's stories I like the characters but I wouldn't want to plagerize thenm and I feel as if it's wrong to use essentially the same character with only a few changes. Also sometimes the changes would change the character so much it's wouldn't be the same.
That said all I really want is people to post characters for free use. I know there must be some people who can develop a character but for whatever reason doesnt use them
I'll even put up the first one
I was a courtesan of the king. No more or less than that.
A prisoner as surely as if I were a thief in the dungeon, but my execution would not be quick. I instead would suffer at on the whim of a spoiled king who was no more than a brat prince. A young foolish carnal king who did not rule but reigned.
I came to his palace as a servant to his wife. Who had been my tormentor for many years, and whom for many years to come I would torment. But at what expense?
Our story starts out very simply we were born within 3 hours of each other, she was a princess who would be queen while I was the ninth child and third daughter of a slave woman. My mother died within moments of my birth she chose my name to be Rajasi and they honored the dying woman’s last wish. The princess Anushri entered the world shortly after, the child of Pari and Santosh. As was my legacy I was chosen at birth to be the handmaiden and servant of the Princess. We grew up together though I more quickly than she in many cases.
pS:The narrator is Rajasi ( A name that means worthy of a king) which is why it was an unlikely name for a servant girl.
Anushri makes an apperance as well. Her name means -pretty or beautiful.
Feel free to use the storyline and characters names.
