CarterDriven
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Short version: I'm writing a cfnm at home story and I'm not quite sure my English is up to par, not having had English as my first language for about 15 years...
Problem: Not quite sure if the stilted, academic English I think I'm using is readable by normal people. Haven't lived in an English country for quite a few years now so I've somewhat lost touch with reality, so to speak.
Story type: CFNM in a home setting, with the mother pressuring her son to try it, resulting in him being convinced that he himself wants to just be non-erotically nude at home.
Length: 2210 words, only the first chapter. Not quite sure where to go yet but that should clear up as soon as a normal person OK's the general setting and direction.
Prechecks: Openoffice finds no spelling (red) or grammar (blue) mistakes.
Will that information suffice, dear editors?
Problem: Not quite sure if the stilted, academic English I think I'm using is readable by normal people. Haven't lived in an English country for quite a few years now so I've somewhat lost touch with reality, so to speak.
Story type: CFNM in a home setting, with the mother pressuring her son to try it, resulting in him being convinced that he himself wants to just be non-erotically nude at home.
Length: 2210 words, only the first chapter. Not quite sure where to go yet but that should clear up as soon as a normal person OK's the general setting and direction.
Prechecks: Openoffice finds no spelling (red) or grammar (blue) mistakes.
Will that information suffice, dear editors?
