Celebrating LeBroz

[cward2]

This is just to give a slap on the back for LeBroz
He's not only a wonderful poet but a wonderful person as well!

Three cheers for LeBroz!!!

 

[The Poets]

Why don't you post an example of his work and tell us what you specifically like about it. That may make an interesting discussion.

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Le Broz~

aside from the wonderful poetry he shares, I for one think the man is an icon for the rest to pay attention how a gentle and kind soul helps others better their literary creations with grammar and structure lessons in the nicest and kindest way possible. I have never ever heard it come from leons mouth that he thought a poem sucks or that it was 'AWEFUL'.

The same goes for Du Lac, whom, after she read my story candy cane <I had asked for an edit> she didn't like it I could tell but she was very nice about it and gave me one of the best literary lessons in writing that I have yet to recieve here at lit. And indirectly made "Candy Cane" a very good story. <much better anyway>



I teach and anna asked what do I do when a student does not do a form correct. I first off encourage them that they are on the right track and doing 'a great job' but in this turn they need to stop and relocate their stance for a better projection of a kick, strike or block. I don't tell them that they are aweful or that they suck. So 'that' is a personality thing.

As for 'LEON' I bow humble to his teachings, his writings and his helpful literary eye along with the kindness that shines from an icon of a poet. A Man with the credentials and the right attitude to shine for those of us trying to learn poetry in a place that has a lack of bed side mannars, although I see it getting better I have to praise Leon for his kind ways and great poetry.

thanks Leon~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Intelligent Design
by LeBroz ©

Intelligent Design

The evidence presented
for all to look and see
and looking at the ancient rock,
see many different things.

Science sees great pressures
of rock deformed and shaped;
Design sees rock unchanged
save by events of late.

The evidence presented
for all to look and see
and looking at the living earth,
see many different things.

Science sees such changes
of eons long slow pace;
Design sees life unchanging,
deposited in place.

Science and Design,
they stand so far apart;
and speak they do in fiery tones
wrapped up in different tongues.

© Leon Brozyna 2005

 

[LeBroz]

This is just to give a slap on the back for LeBroz
He's not only a wonderful poet but a wonderful person as well!

Three cheers for LeBroz!!!

.

Holy Shit!!! A thread to me?!!!
.

What is this ~ an early b-day present? All I do are simple light writes. There are plenty of others that write at least as well, and certainly better. And all in different styles that appeal to different tastes.

Thanks for the thought cward2. Does this mean I need to get busy finishing up scores of half-written verse?

 

[SeattleRain]

I like this one of his, reminds me of those Alexander Pope quips in a way.


And thank him for all of the feedback

Verbosity and Pomposity
by LeBroz ©

Verbosity and Pomposity

I knew a man
an intelligent sort
who tried to impress
with utterances multi-syllabic
I asked him to
please spare us do,
verbosity and pomposity
when a simple phrase will really do, like,
"Your head's up your ass."

© Leon Brozyna 2005

 

[My Erotic Tale]

I like this one of his, reminds me of those Alexander Pope quips in a way.


And thank him for all of the feedback

Verbosity and Pomposity
by LeBroz ©

Verbosity and Pomposity

I knew a man
an intelligent sort
who tried to impress
with utterances multi-syllabic
I asked him to
please spare us do,
verbosity and pomposity
when a simple phrase will really do, like,
"Your head's up your ass."

© Leon Brozyna 2005

that is my favorite of his submissions
Verbosity and Pomposity....<grinin>

here's another..

A Masochist's Game?
by LeBroz ©

Heard tale of a game
It really seems strange;
For I can do what's done
Without all that pain.

Reach in the cupboard
Pull out a cup;
Results seem so simple
I do it standing up.

Why ever would men
Take a club, long and stiff;
Beat on their balls
Pain must be intense.

The rules seem to limit
Who hits whose balls;
You can hit your own
But not the other fellow's.

To make matters worse
They walk hundreds of yards;
Place their balls in a cup
Buried down in the ground.

Must be a masochist's game.

© Leon Brozyna 2005

 

[twelveoone]

Le Broz~

aside from the wonderful poetry he shares, I for one think the man is an icon for the rest to pay attention how a gentle and kind soul helps others better their literary creations with grammar and structure lessons in the nicest and kindest way possible. I have never ever heard it come from leons mouth that he thought a poem sucks or that it was 'AWEFUL'.

The same goes for Du Lac, whom, after she read my story candy cane <I had asked for an edit> she didn't like it I could tell but she was very nice about it and gave me one of the best literary lessons in writing that I have yet to recieve here at lit. And indirectly made "Candy Cane" a very good story. <much better anyway>



I teach and anna asked what do I do when a student does not do a form correct. I first off encourage them that they are on the right track and doing 'a great job' but in this turn they need to stop and relocate their stance for a better projection of a kick, strike or block. I don't tell them that they are aweful or that they suck. So 'that' is a personality thing.

As for 'LEON' I bow humble to his teachings, his writings and his helpful literary eye along with the kindness that shines from an icon of a poet. A Man with the credentials and the right attitude to shine for those of us trying to learn poetry in a place that has a lack of bed side mannars, although I see it getting better I have to praise Leon for his kind ways and great poetry.

thanks Leon~

A few things I like about LeBroz
He handles criticism well, certainly better than... then most people do
He knows how to spell, i.e. see Pomposity vs pompuss
This tells me he puts writing ahead of ego or trying to run some sort of political organization to garner a bunch of "H"'s, eh?
LeBroz stricks me as a gentleman.

 

[cward2]

Le Broz~

aside from the wonderful poetry he shares, I for one think the man is an icon for the rest to pay attention how a gentle and kind soul helps others better their literary creations with grammar and structure lessons in the nicest and kindest way possible. I have never ever heard it come from leons mouth that he thought a poem sucks or that it was 'AWEFUL'.

The same goes for Du Lac, whom, after she read my story candy cane <I had asked for an edit> she didn't like it I could tell but she was very nice about it and gave me one of the best literary lessons in writing that I have yet to recieve here at lit. And indirectly made "Candy Cane" a very good story. <much better anyway>



I teach and anna asked what do I do when a student does not do a form correct. I first off encourage them that they are on the right track and doing 'a great job' but in this turn they need to stop and relocate their stance for a better projection of a kick, strike or block. I don't tell them that they are aweful or that they suck. So 'that' is a personality thing.

As for 'LEON' I bow humble to his teachings, his writings and his helpful literary eye along with the kindness that shines from an icon of a poet. A Man with the credentials and the right attitude to shine for those of us trying to learn poetry in a place that has a lack of bed side mannars, although I see it getting better I have to praise Leon for his kind ways and great poetry.

thanks Leon~

You've captured what I like about him in such an elegant way

 

[RhymeFairy]

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Holy Shit!!! A thread to me?!!!
.

What is this ~ an early b-day present? All I do are simple light writes. There are plenty of others that write at least as well, and certainly better. And all in different styles that appeal to different tastes.

Thanks for the thought cward2. Does this mean I need to get busy finishing up scores of half-written verse?

Now THAT I love !!! Simple 'n light. Bravo Leon ~!!!

I love Leon's writing. He appears to be very modest.
I do not write often of current events, so I enjoy his poetry on everyday things ... He gives ya his opinion, and let's it stand. Then he follows up with actually helping if necessary. THAT I really appreciate.
Also, he came on the scene all quiet like now, (imho) is a force to be reckoned with, (Meaning he writes .... way, better than I. A teacher if you must .... )
I love his poetry, thoughts, and friendship.

Thank You Leon,
and keep'm coming My Friend ~

 

[LeBroz]

Now THAT I love !!! Simple 'n light. Bravo Leon ~!!!

I love Leon's writing. He appears to be very modest.
I do not write often of current events, so I enjoy his poetry on everyday things ... He gives ya his opinion, and let's it stand. Then he follows up with actually helping if necessary. THAT I really appreciate.
Also, he came on the scene all quiet like now, (imho) is a force to be reckoned with, (Meaning he writes .... way, better than I. A teacher if you must .... )
I love his poetry, thoughts, and friendship.

Thank You Leon,
and keep'm coming My Friend ~

I look outside
It's still too cold and snow is blowing;
Guess I'll shovel
Cool on down, shrink head swelling.
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Thanks RF (and everyone else, here & in pm's) for all the kind thoughts ~ guess I'm stuck being the way I am ~ playing with words and the way they sound. And of course leaving praise or at times subtle suggestions. But there are plenty of others whose words soar; read them all and enjoy.

Now I'll take a quick look at today's list before I bundle up and shovel that cold white rain.