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[StoryGiant]

Hi, my story idea,

A TV weather girl and retired golfer married last year but both married not for love but money and power. She has popularity and media attention and he has got the money. Behind close doors away from the media in the Mansion they hate each other, they have separate room and never eat together. They have staff for the house such as cooks, maids etc whom they treat awfully, such as spit at them and forcing to do degrade task To keep there jobs.

Maria was a new maid and wasn't going to be pushed around. After snooping around the house Maria finds a sex tape. Using the tape she switches the roles and blackmail the couple as this sex tape would ruin the couple image.

Maria use the tape to take revenge and forces the couple to do many things including public exposure, strap on sex, group sex and much more (ideas needed)

I'm new at writing and live some help pm if you like to chat.

 

[Hypoxia]

That's a good-enough setup. How do you see the story developing and ending?

BTW this is a forum for discussing / torturing / distorting ideas out in the open. It's a brainstorming thang. PM invites don't fit here. Cheers!

 

[StoryGiant]

Thanks up the heads up, I like to thing the couple would bond after a humiliation and being forced into sex acts.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

I don't think that the public sex/group sex is a good idea. When you blackmail someone, they agree in order to prevent their secret from coming out. If the blackmail is a sex tape, it just doesn't make sense for the blackmailees to agree to public sex/group sex in order to prevent the release of a sex tape.

I also don't get the pro golfer's motivation for marrying a former local weather girl. If he's rich from winning golf tournaments, he's probably way more famous than she is.

Why would Maria blackmail them to do crazy sex acts if they were mean assholes? Being, the lowly maid, you'd think she'd bribe them for money.

One more thing, why did they make a sex tape if they hate each other's guts? You wrote that they have separate rooms and don't eat together.

I think you need to work out a more plausible premise.

 

[Hypoxia]

I don't see the motivation and modus thangs as story-killers, not here in LIT fantasyland, where the improbable is normal or mandatory.

Have not sports pros married rising media stars before now? (/methinks DiMaggio & Monroe) And why would not their staff try to gain any way they could? Let's suppose sex tapeS, plural, vids of each married partner cheating spectacularly and profusely, slyly recorded by the staff for future use, heh heh.

Stories can arise from this.

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

I don't see the motivation and modus thangs as story-killers, not here in LIT fantasyland, where the improbable is normal or mandatory.

Have not sports pros married rising media stars before now? (/methinks DiMaggio & Monroe) And why would not their staff try to gain any way they could? Let's suppose sex tapeS, plural, vids of each married partner cheating spectacularly and profusely, slyly recorded by the staff for future use, heh heh.

Stories can arise from this.

I agree with this. There's enough precedent of media stars and pros marrying for it to work and I think the proposal of multiple sex tapes showing each cheating on the other works as a solution in keeping the original conceit of the story. They both want to save from public embarassment and from revealing their sham marriage

 

[StoryGiant]

Thanks for the comments, I still. Like the concept but yes need to stitched togeather a bit more.

 

[ericrodman101]

Mexican porn bandits

Maybe Maria has contacts back in Mexico with a porn gang. Being a lowly maid is how she works her way into rich houses looking for blackmailing opportunities. But once in, she works with the porn bandits to extract cooperation from her victims by making them star in porn by threatening to expose them. They can wear masks or not have their faces on film so as not to be recognised, but the gang make them participate in degrading and bizarre porn, all the while Maria appears to be cleaning the house and looking after them. You could develop this scenario so that Maria insists they betray their friends and acquaintances who are also blackmailed into performing. Not sure where it goes, but for a while there's a whole slab of celebrity-dom being violated on film.

 

[StoryGiant]

It a good twist, thanks for the idea. I think there many ways for Maria to Take the upper hand and this is a Good one.
Need to get a few idea together on what the degrading and new interest way the couple will perform for Maria.

A general question how much detail do readers like the sex scenes more Details the better or leave it upto the readers own imagination?
This be a personal choice.

 

[Hypoxia]

A general question how much detail do readers like the sex scenes more Details the better or leave it upto the readers own imagination?

Some want more, some want less, some can handle it either way. Some top-rated LIT pieces have little if any sex; some are drenched, with every little pore and gland explored intimately. Write it as you feel it.

 

[StoryGiant]

Thanks for the advice. Going start writing tomorrow, let me know if any kinks you think I should include also be great if I can get a female co write.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

Mexican Porn Gang! I like!