Cavemen

[algimore]

How about a story dealing with time travel? A female scientist and her son are at her lab when her son (15) bored hits a couple of buttons on a laptop. Suddenly they are transported to a time when cavemen roamed the earth. A tribe finds them and the woman is passed around the cavemen and the son is initiated into the tribe and made to mate with his mom.......this is teh idea anyone want to run with it?

 

[Carnevil9]

Sounds good. I'd have the mom hate it at first, then tolerate it, and then finally love it. In the next chapter, they manage to get back home to their own time, and she has to teach the men of her own time how to do it "caveman style" so she can be satisfied.......Carney

 

[Sean Renaud]

Gotta up the age to 18. Lit has gotten real, real strict on this rule as of late. I've had three stories rejected for it, including one where a man returning from war got with his best friends mom, rejected for underage. They are going nuts for some reason. So with that said there is no way you're going to sneak an idenfied 15 year old through the system right now.

Other than that, story sounds cool.

 

[Englandboy2]

It's a good idea, but I don't see it as much different from the usual 'White Woman in Darkest Africa' stories. Basically, she goes to a place where women are used as sex objects and fucked in a more animalistic, savage way. Also, what part does the son play? Maybe she hates it, and the son has the chance to send them back to our time, but he's enjoying it too much and destroys the time machine, condemning her to a life of sexual slavery.

 

[Shendude]

It's a good idea, but I don't see it as much different from the usual 'White Woman in Darkest Africa' stories. Basically, she goes to a place where women are used as sex objects and fucked in a more animalistic, savage way. Also, what part does the son play? Maybe she hates it, and the son has the chance to send them back to our time, but he's enjoying it too much and destroys the time machine, condemning her to a life of sexual slavery.

I've actually been tossing about an idea for a caveman story that's kinda the opposite of this one.

A female scientist who has trouble finding love, since it's damn near impossible to find a man with both the body (she likes her men muscular) and mindset (she's a domme, and most muscule-y types are too macho for her kind of fun) to satisfy her sexual needs. And you can forget about her emotional needs!

Then she is transported to the past and stumbles onto a tribe of Neanderthals, who's men are hunks(albeit on the short side), but enjoy getting beat up. Plus, she has a weakness for redheads

 

[algimore]

thanks

thanks all for the responses, just to say a few more things on topic, the woman is not necessarily Caucasian. In fact the story might even be about the son more then the mom and maybe about how he learns to live in the world of cavemen. The first time he is alone with a woman and he waves at her. suddenly she drops her loincloth and lays down.......what else....

 

[mike_writes]

Is Human-Neanderthal sex allowed?

Then she is transported to the past and stumbles onto a tribe of Neanderthals, who's men are hunks(albeit on the short side), but enjoy getting beat up.

Any ideas on whether Human-Neanderthal sex would violate the Literotica's rules on interspecies sex? My guess is that it would be allowable because: (1) Although most scientists now consider Humans and Neanderthals to be distinct species, I don't think there's a universal consensus on this yet; (2) Both are intelligent humanoids, so it's kind of like doing it with an elf or an alien; (3) Time travel puts us in the realm of science fiction, so there's a little more leeway involved.

But I'd be interested to here the opinions of others with more experience at literotica.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You never know if a story is going to pass the Lit censors when you are bucking a trend. My guess would be that you should be fine with a Caveman because they are close enough to human, as was pointed out by the elf/alien comparison.

I got a story through where a girl fucks a horse because I did exactly what Lit demanded of me. The horse had a single spiral horn protruding from its forehead! But I remember a story about the future had genetically engineered super dogs that could talk and communicate telepathically and formed a bond with a female by mating with her and it got by, then got yanked like two days later. The censor gods are fickle.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Gotta up the age to 18. Lit has gotten real, real strict on this rule as of late. I've had three stories rejected for it, including one where a man returning from war got with his best friends mom, rejected for underage. They are going nuts for some reason. So with that said there is no way you're going to sneak an idenfied 15 year old through the system right now.

Other than that, story sounds cool.

I was about to say the same thing about the age.

A better idea is if this were a father and son (18 and 38) experiment on monitoring the past, and the father is accidentally thrown back in time.
The idea is that neither the son nor himself will exist if anything is done inappropriately.
This includes getting a cave woman (a more recent being) pregnant, altering the evolution of erect (straight backbone/spine) homosapiens forever.

The other way it could go, is if it brought the past to the present instead of the present to the past, and they had to reverse the process before she ruined the family's timeline.
In that scenario, I would pick someone a little sexier like Marilin Monroe (possible crucial component of all Kennedy deaths).

 

[rosco rathbone]

I remember wanking to the Neaderathal/Cro Magnon rape-scene in Clan Of The Cave Bear...

 

[Fantasies_only]

I remember wanking to the Neaderathal/Cro Magnon rape-scene in Clan Of The Cave Bear...

Was that that god awful film with Bo Derik, or the better one with (the mermaid from Splash)?

 

[rosco rathbone]

Was that that god awful film with Bo Derik, or the better one with (the mermaid from Splash)?

I was referring to the book. I know they made a movie out of it, I think with Daryl Hana.

 

[Fantasies_only]

I was referring to the book. I know they made a movie out of it, I think with Daryl Hana.

Who knew Ringo Star could write and direct a sleeper blockbuster?!
I think the one with Bo Derik was Tarzan The Ape Man.
"2000 BC" also came out around that time, outshined by the "When Women Had Tails" series.

 

[algimore]

Okay new criteria for a caveman story

The son is 21 years old back from sophomore year in college, the mom is a scientist for the Army, working on a top secret space propulsion system. The system explodes propellijng them forward in time (like the movie time machine, (the old one not the new one) in the new time period there are few men and most are effeminate. Anyone think this would get shot down by the Lit censors?

 

[sunandshadow]

Neanderthals, assuming they can talk or use sign language, walk on two legs, use tools, etc. are clearly not animals, so I don't see why it would run afoul of any rules. Neanderthals are very much the same thing as aliens/elves.

 

[Sean Renaud]

The problem ironically is that cavemen are real. On lit you can't have a girl fuck a horse, but if that horse has wings, or a horn it's okay. No girls and dogs but those things from Lord of the Rings (Wargs) are okay.

 

[algimore]

The problem ironically is that cavemen are real.

Umm...okay, how about we call them Uma's because in the future many of thewords have evolved as well as humans. This means that they are human just futuristic and with a different name.

 

[Athena_e19]

There was a series of books dealing with the evolutionary man by 'Piers Anthony'. As with everything that he does, there is a fantastic erotic element to it. Nothing better than sex when its primal, raw, and basely instinctive.

 

[algimore]

This is why Literotica is such a good site. You can take elements from genres already touched upon by authors and give them that not only erotic touch but aalso that full on sexual tawdry in your face touch.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

How about a story dealing with time travel? A female scientist and her son are at her lab when her son (15) bored hits a couple of buttons on a laptop. Suddenly they are transported to a time when cavemen roamed the earth. A tribe finds them and the woman is passed around the cavemen and the son is initiated into the tribe and made to mate with his mom.......this is teh idea anyone want to run with it?

A fifteen year old son won't be allowed to fuck his mommy on Lit, though.

 

[Anwar80]

A fifteen year old son won't be allowed to fuck his mommy on Lit, though.

Then make him 18

 

[emap]

Darnit there is one thing I don't get, why can't you do the original idea with an 18 year old son?

Especially considering the fact that the later cavemen looked pretty much just like anybody alive now except shorter there wouldn't be a threat of being killed by said cavemen for being way different.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I think for some people the allure of innocence is a strong one. It's more likely that a fifteen year old would be more innocent than an eighteen year old, or a thirteen year old over a fifteen year old.

I'm not condoning it by any means, but have you heard of age play? Be it in a SRP like on Lit or in a faqce to face role play it is where an adult woman or man acts like a teen/kid while in sexual situations.

There's a different term from pedophile to mean an adult attracted to a teen. Pedo is defined as an adult attracted to a young pre-teen child...

Again, not my cup 'o tea, but the teenage attraction seems to be a strong one in American culture. I mean, look at how much porn out there is dedicated to "barely legal teens" or "teenage school girls". Sure, they're eighteen or nineteen year olds but that's not what they're trying to market.


For Lit, though, newer members need to understand that the 18+ rule is there for a reason. The owners choose to have it. I think the time travel tale can be just fine with a legal young adult son.

 

[Athena_e19]

Even with earlier cavemen types you could still make some argument about the woman's scent being enough to overwhelm them and keep them from killing, and instead focusing on the breeding.

 

[algimore]

To clarify I want people to know that I understand the eighteen rule and do not condone pedophilia in anyway which is the reason that the owners do not want anything under eighteen. At least this is my understanding on the subject, corrections on this like other things is welcome. I should have clarified in my first post, but there have been many responses so I thought editing it would have led to confusion. I honestly was not thinking it through as far as the age was concerned. I was thinking story line such as after bieng transported years passed and then he came of age and went through the rite of adulthood etc. I should have put more story ideas down, but at the time I wanted to let the creative juices of others flow.