Catagory - Keeping it out of I/T

[cathoberscaravan]

This is rough - little more than an outline - but I am seeking guidance on how to put the fact that there is a false accusation being made... It is the recounting of a "true" discussion about a lie (or several). The actual story part is italicized.

Thank you in advance for anyone who cares to offer commentary - ideas - thoughts - espresso...

Up to this point in the story Don is 19 y/o Kathy's biological father and 19 y/o Tony's adoptive father. Kathy lives at home and attends Junior College. Tony moved out two years ago. THERE IS NO ACTUAL OR IMPLIED SEXUAL RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN KATHY AND TONY (other than by the Sheriff and the fact that he is lying is corroborated in his talks with a deputy). Don runs several illegal enterprises and the Sheriff is on Don's payroll to provide "security" to those enterprises.

In an unsolicited and unwanted discussion between Don and Kathy, Don tells her of the Sheriffs accusation. That she and Tony were observed in flagrante delicto. Kathy tells Don that it isn’t true – that she and Tony meet secretly because they are the only people who understand what it was like being raised by Don and Maria. That if Don wasn’t a bigoted ass, she wouldn’t have to lie and sneak out to see him. Besides they were both adults, it shouldn’t matter to the Sheriff if they were having an affair – it wasn’t as if they were biologically related.

Don first states that he isn’t a racist – that unlike others in town – that he employs lots of First People – in all positions, same as whites and at the same pay as whites. That he understands that he is different, better. (Don then calls himself the only truly honest man in town – displaying his arrogance.) Don tells Kathy that he loves Tony and he isn’t helping Tony because of her…

Don says that he loves Tony – just as twenty years ago he loved Tony’s mother Little Wing. That he probably should have told Kathy – and Tony – this before. But Tony is his biological son and her half-brother. That had Maria not become pregnant with her at just about the same time he would have married Little Wing.

Later when "forced" to recount the "events" of the supposed observation, the Sheriff recounts a detailed story that Tony recognizes as being an encounter between two different people (not Tony and Kathy).

I am trying to keep this chapter in a different Category (not I/T) because it would explain multiple motivations. Tony and Kathy being falsely accused of "unwittingly engaging in half-sibling incest" by a bunch of "true criminals."

 

[RejectReality]

I'd just put a note in the notes section stating that there's an accusation of half-sibling incest that isn't true. I doubt the description of the encounter is going to be a true play-by-play sex scene, but rather a bullet point type of thing.

You just need to let Laurel know it's a plot point and not an actual sex scene, or foreshadowing things to come. ( I assume it isn't... )

What category are you planning to put it in? That might have some bearing on whether a hint of faux incest could be troublesome.

 

[cathoberscaravan]

...I doubt the description of the encounter is going to be a true play-by-play sex scene...

Since it didn't happen, it couldn't be accurately be described in detail... That is a tipoff to others that it is a false accusation.

What category are you planning to put it in? That might have some bearing on whether a hint of faux incest could be troublesome.

Right now I have ca. 8000 words of notes completed to write... I don't know, 30K - 40K words divided into at least five but as many as eight stories centered on a particular character or two. This is without the sex scenes, which I write in a free flow mode. So, I think if I don't cut any content I can write eight 8000 word tales.

This will be the referenced "universe/plot origin story" but not a "sexual first time" story for those four to seven later submissions which should be readable in any order AFTER this one. So, I want the greatest number of reads.

I guess it is MOSTLY BDominanceandSubmissionM: Don enjoys control. His "thing" is to "force" orgasms on willing women, I need to cover this four times (explaining four different relationships he has).

But I need to include at least ONE LesbianSex arc, and frankly thought that I would use that in the first story as it might be less likely to limit potential readers.

There is also ONE InteracialRomance arc, but it could be moved to a later story and recounted as a flashback.

If any of these sexual subplots are better in the "opener" the whole story also includes a May/December arc, a Toys arc, a Mature arc, a Heterosexual Anal arc and a Group Sex arc.

It story line also includes strippers. So, I could write about them but in a piece I wrote last year, the one with strippers was not published in E/V because it lacked the "voyeristic vibe" or whatever. They will likely just fill in and be a constant presence.