Carnal Offering

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Naomi sat at the bar looking up nervously every few minutes at the door. She

wasn't the type of girl to go on blind dates and she definately wasn't the type

to meet a guy online, but he seemed so nice. She was trying to go over his

picture in her head so she wouldn't miss him. Tall, long blonde hair, not an

overly muscular fisique, but he looked good. She felt her cheeks get rosy as she

grew more and more nervous as the minutes inched on.

She was about to change her mind and leave when she saw him walk through the

door. She gulped a little to herself, his picture didn't do him justice, he

looked like a living statue walking over to her. She knew he had to be too good

to be true. She took a deep breath and smiled and waved to him.

N"Hi, are you Ian?" I really hope so.

I"Yes, and you must be Naomi?"

N"Guilty"

I"You look much better in person. You never can tell what to expect online"

N"I was actually thinking the same thing about you"

I"I don't mean for this to sound forward, but would you like to get out of here

so we can talk, take a walk down to the park?"

N All the logic in my head screamed no, don't go to the park at night with a

strange man, but his smile threw my logic out the window. "Sure, It is a little

loud in here"

I " I know I already said this, but you look absolutely amazing" He held out his

hand for me

N I had to stop myself from giggling like a schoolgirl as I took his hand.

Then..... what is happening?

The air started shifting around me. I'd never felt anything like this before,

I felt like I was going to suffocate.

AAAAh

I "Naomi!" I didn't mean for this to happen so soon. I wasn't thinking.

N "Wasn't thinking about what? Where are we? What happend?

I "I'm sorry Naomi, but you're going to have to come with me, NOW"

N I noticed a look in his eye that wasn't there before. I blinked hard. Why do

you look different. I looked down at my hands. Why do I look different? I

reached up and touched my face. Why do I feel different? Ian, what's

happening?

I "I'll answer you soon, just come with me now."

N I felt helpless, I had no choice but to follow him. He held out his hand to me

again and I reluctantly grabbed his hand, this is how it all started. There

has to be an explaination for this.

N He pulled me quietly down an empty street up to a giant house, more than a

house, the best way to describe it would be a castle, but come on, a castle?
"Do you live in a... castle?"

I Ian blushed. I do, but as I said, we'll have time for questions later.

N He pulled me along through the gates. I thought I had heard people following

us, but it must have been my imagination. He pulled me up through countless

hallways and into a room. A bedrooom

"What are we doing here?"

I " You'll just have to trust me for now, I'll explain everything. But first, I

need this." He pulled her into him and kissed her deeply exploring her mouth

with his tongue, tasting, teasing, enticing. He purred, " your skin is so soft"

He pulled off her loose top " and these are amazing" His mouth engulfed her

nipple."

N I had never felt anything like this before. The kiss was amazing, but it was

like something was being drained from my body. I couldn't help myself when he

touched me, even after everything that has just happend, I wanted more. I knew

it was wrong to want someone I had just met, but my brain wouldn't work right,

I just needed him.

Ian put his arms around me and lifted me onto his dresser. I could feel his

hard member pushing against his pants. I needed those pants to dissaper more

than anything I can ever remember needing. I pulled at his belt buckle but my

fingers were shaking so much I could barely get it open.

I Ian smiled. "Slow down, we have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves" He

unbuckled his pants and let them fall to the ground to reveal his massive cock.

"it's all for you" he smiled

N He entered her with his finger and felt how badly she wanted him. "Please"

I " I like that word. Please. Say it again"

N "Please, I need you"

I He pushed his cock against her opening. "Please what?"

N "Please fuck me"

I He smiled and without any hesitation pounded his cock into her. I'd never felt

anything like this. It filled me up completely. She wrapped her legs around his

waist and pulled him into her.

N "MMMM" She felt something come over her that she hadn't felt in a long time.

Her body tightened against him. She was about to come. Her muscles tightened

and squeezed her cock. "Please... cum with me"

He needed no second invitation, he pounded furiously into her. He grabbed her

hips and pulled himself hard into her and filled her full of sweet cum. His

mouth colapsed onto hers.



Chained in dungeon. Raped in dungeon by guard.

Choice:

---------------------------------Report Guard------------------------------------


------------------------------Don't Report Guard---------------------------------



-------------------------------------Run-----------------------------------------

I can't take this anymore. I didn't ask to be torn away from my life and thrown

into this word. The prince seems kind, but I just want to go home.

As soon as his eyes close I slowly sneak out of the room. I make a run for it

with the little clothes I could gather on my way out.

"Naomi, stop! Please come back!"

I hear his voice, but I have to get away. This can't all be real if I run fast

enough maybe I can get home. Home has to be here somewhere.

My mind is racing and then someone grabs me from behind.

"Look what I found boys"

A large man pulls my arm behind my back and walks me towards a group of men

standing around. They're eyes immediately grow hungry as they look at my

scantily clad body.


"Let me go"

"Oh sweetie, we have no intention of that"

I look down in horror as their bodies told me exactly what they intended. I

struggled to get away and screamed. I saw the prince's face in the distance.

"Please, help me"

He looked down and slowly walked away.

"We love fresh meat sweetie"

He smiled a frightening smile and released his massive manhood.

"Please, just let me go"

I knew my pleading was in vain, so I closed my eyes tightly. I felt more and

more hands groping me. Ripping off my clothes.

"Haha, I think she's enjoying this boys. Look at how wet she is"

They were wrong, I just wanted to go home, maybe if I just pretend it isn't

happening...

"AAAh"

One of the men thrust deeply into Naomi. She tried to scream, but more hands

grabbed at her face and thrust her head down onto another cock.

She understood why the prince didn't want her to leave, he really was trying to

save her.

Man after man had their way with her.

"this has to end soon," she thought to herself

Her body became limp as she felt all of her energy fading away.

Another pair of hands picked her up and thrust his cock into her.

"You can't have it all to yourself"

Another pair of hands grabbed my waist and shoved into my ass.

I screamed with the last of energy I had left. Then my body went completely

limp.

"Am I home?"
 
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You don't have to use initials

as long as you start a new paragraph when someone else speaks. It's annoying.
 
Sorry, it's for a visual novel and that's the format the engine uses so it knows what images to put up.
 
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