Care to edit a first attempt??

[Dream Master]

I know there is a difference between Editing and Writing. I have tried my first story and would like to have someone edit it for me. If anyone would like to take the time to review my first story I would be more than happy to send it to you. Please keep in mind you can not hurt my feelings, the only way to learn is to have someone with more experience teach you (Where have I heard that line before). I look forward to your reply. Dream Master