Car descriptions...

[Phoenix646]

Ok, so I'm in the process of writing the fourth chapter in my series of X-Men Evolution stories.

Right now I'm at the point where two of the characters get in a car, and it eventually ends with the girl giving the guy a blowjob in his car. I want to actually give a good description of the car, the only problem is I'm not a car person in the slightest...

the car is a red 1966 Shelby Cobra.

it's basically this car right here
http://www.reelcars.net/images/1960/04.jpg



I was just wondering if anyone could help me out?

 

[cloudy]

those are great cars, but sort of hard to manuever in, if ya know what I mean. She'd have to be very, very flexible.

 

[Phoenix646]

know from expierence?

 

[cloudy]

you might could say that.

 

[Guest]

Cloudy, stop teasing!!

Enquiring minds want to know.

Lou

 

[cloudy]

Cloudy, stop teasing!!

Enquiring minds want to know.

Lou

okay, okay.....

YES

Cloudy

(happy now, Loulou? )

 

[Guest]

okay, okay.....

YES

Cloudy

(happy now, Loulou? )

Well, kind of. But, details are very important, ya know?

Lou

 

[Phoenix646]

thanks Cloudy, this is already off topic...


you need to be punished now...


you'll have to submit and essay describing your first hand knowledge, no less then 100 words and ill expect it on my desk asap...

 

[cloudy]

Not much detail to report, sadly enough. I was a senior in high school at the time and I promise, there's just not enough room in those things to do much....especially as I'm 5'7" and not made for cars with scanty leg room.

Let's just say we started there, and moved to somewhere more comfortable rather quickly.

(It was his dad's car, who, I'm sure, would have been scandalized , but that's what made it fun)

 

[cloudy]

thanks Cloudy, this is already off topic...


you need to be punished now...


you'll have to submit and essay describing your first hand knowledge, no less then 100 words and ill expect it on my desk asap...

not quite the punishment I had in mind , right Lou?

 

[Phoenix646]

um...............how about handcuffs?

 

[cloudy]

It's a start, I suppose.....

~Cloudy - Ace Thread-Hijacker

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Phoenix,

When it comes to objests I like to give names and let the reader picture there own. Just how important is the vehicle to the story?

Personally I think most will know what a Cobra is. You could simply add in a two seater sports car. If you think needed.

A few times I have written about cars and objects of desire I tend to describe some of the features so as to not come out and say it is a Lamborghini or Porche, this is so the reader can place the story in different wealth categories of their own choosing.



The little red sports car glimmered in the light. The curves flexed rapidly making it appear as if the car was doing high speeds sitting still. Overly done in the right amount of chrome gave the feeling of a real racecar. Compared to the conventional car this was nothing but a toy. The mini doors and open spaceless cockpit shouted! "This machine is for one purpose alone, to scream to every patron I have an expensive toy." This was like an MG on steroids bursting to show the full potential of it's well known muscle.

When the engine stared it cried out a thunderous roar. Making it obvious this was no toy, but a contender to rival the best of the super cars. The rumble of the loud exhaust sent shivers through my spine. The vibrations penetrated me through the seat, most impressive indeed.

 

[Guest]

um...............how about handcuffs?

Getting there, but ropes are much more fun.

Yep, Cloudy, you got it!

Lou

P.S. Apologies for aiding and abetting in the threadjack, Phoenix. I'm sure someone will come along and get it back on track.

Doh! Silly me, Phildo already did. Good one!

 

[Phoenix646]

meh, I dont mind the threadjacking, so long as its interesting and arousing.... check mark on both accounts



Wouldn't you have to worry about rope burn Tatelou?



Phildo interesting idea, have to think creatively for that one, thanks...

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Ok, so I'm in the process of writing the fourth chapter in my series of X-Men Evolution stories.

Right now I'm at the point where two of the characters get in a car, and it eventually ends with the girl giving the guy a blowjob in his car. I want to actually give a good description of the car, the only problem is I'm not a car person in the slightest...

the car is a red 1966 Shelby Cobra.

it's basically this car right here
http://www.reelcars.net/images/1960/04.jpg



I was just wondering if anyone could help me out?

You might want to research a car site on that particular model, try going with the original stats on it. If you need further asst. I might be able to help, just let me know.
~A~ semi car buff

 

[Guest]

meh, I dont mind the threadjacking, so long as its interesting and arousing.... check mark on both accounts



Wouldn't you have to worry about rope burn Tatelou?



Phildo interesting idea, have to think creatively for that one, thanks...

Nah, the rope burns add to the "experience".

Lou

P.S. I'm butting out now, but I must just add that BJ's in a car are extremely sexy! I love doing them there, even though it can be a bit cramped - which again, seems to add to the experience, as well of the thoughts of... what if someone sees us?

 

[minsue]

as well of the thoughts of... what if someone sees us?

The only time I ever did, we were seen. A truckload of guys pointing and smirking next to us at the stop light.

I just looked up, grinned at them and went back to what I was doing.

 

[pop_54]

The only time I ever did, we were seen. A truckload of guys pointing and smirking next to us at the stop light.

I just looked up, grinned at them and went back to what I was doing.

Last time the dirty bitch did that to me I almost crashed the bloody car

I agree though Cobra's are a bit restricted for gobbling space.

 

[Phoenix646]

well im actually gonna have to say its a modified Cobra, its gonna need to hold 4-5 people...

 

[Liar]

Heavily modivied then. Does it have to be a Cobra? I'm sure there are a number of sassy cars out there that allows for complete orgys without re-welding.

#L

 

[Phoenix646]

well this cartoon that im writing about the guy character has a car that is pretty spot on for the cobra, expect it can hold more then two people...


http://www.geocities.com/amazontrio2/ep6/image549.jpg
http://roguetoruin.mizkit.com/evo/26/image258.jpg
http://roguetoruin.mizkit.com/evo/26/image257.jpg


looks like a cobra to me...

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Yeah that is a cobra,

Maybe the back is modified to hold a rumble seat like in the old model A.

 

[Weird Harold]

well im actually gonna have to say its a modified Cobra, its gonna need to hold 4-5 people...

You're going to have to move up to a Shelby Mustang 2+2 to get four people in it. The Original Cobra you pictured isnt big enough for two people if one of them carries a purse -- or has a thick wallet.

The Shelby "Cobra" Mustangs had more room for blowjobs and a tiny back seat that you could squeeze three skinny people into.

The Red car on the right is the Classic Cobra Mustang Convertible and should be easier to describe than the blue Cobra on the left because more people know what a basic Ford Mustang looks like than know what Cobra looks like.