Can Someone write me a story??

[luvsaHotSoldier]

My husband is deployed and I just bought him a "toy" and I would like to send an erotic story with it to him. I am a very sexual person but when I go to write the story I can't do it lol. If you can help please feel free to e-mail me and I can tell you what I certain things that I was going to put in it that he would like. I would REALLY appreciate it and you would be helping out a Soldier LOL!!

 

[FatDino]

The Story Ideas forum is here .

Good luck.

 

[dichotomy_man]

A few thoughts and considerations...

First, make sure you can send him the "toy." Be aware a lot, (most all) of the mail shipped to and from a GI in a war zone is checked and monitored- as in opened. There may be a restriction on his getting your toy- hence, check first. And be aware your mail and story may be looked at.

It's been standard operating practice for anyone stationed outside the US to have deliveries monitored.

As for the story- Decide how you want to present it- 1st person, you- or he is experiencing the action, or third person- you are observing the action as if watching it.

Then decide what "events" sexual activity etc., you want to include- as well as the order, place and time of day.

You mentioned rough sex- that also has a wide variety of options. Who's the aggressive one- you, him, both, alternating?

I also would suggest- you make sure to end the story on a romantic note. Remind him not just of the sex- hopefully great- but that he is cared for, loved and desired, but mostly you are waiting for him. Don’t just make him horney, make him happy and looking forward to seeing you again.

The psychology is as important -if not more important than the sex. Also send a picture of yourself, nothing too wild- but of you at a lake or cottage, with a ...wistful and longing look. So he pictures you in the scene.

You can always cheat- simply copy a story and then rework it to fit with names, descriptions and place. Sex is easy, sensuality is tougher.

Hope these few suggestions are helpful.

 

[Guest]

You can always cheat- simply copy a story and then rework it to fit with names, descriptions and place. Sex is easy, sensuality is tougher.

Copy a story and change the names?

You mean plagiarize a story? Steal someone else's hard work?

Tsk.


Good luck, luvs.

 

[dichotomy_man]

Plagiarize...

No, it's "research!" Grin.

As long as she's just sending it to him for his /their personal use, I see no problem with a little editing.

Now someone doing that to another work- and then claiming credit.

Well now, that's a whole different kettle of fish, smelly rotting fish. Such a person should be drawn, (dragged up by a noose until almost strangled, then lowered to catch their breath, then repeated, over and over), quartered (Rip out entrails and set them on fire before their eyes before having four horses drag a different limb in differing directions with a painful parting being the result.) And finely, getting such a rap on the knuckles!

Her looking to send a sexy story to her guy for personal enjoyment while he's overseas- is one thing, hence my suggestion.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

No, it's "research!" Grin.

As long as she's just sending it to him for his /their personal use, I see no problem with a little editing.

As an author, I do have a huge problem with someone borrowing my work and editing it.

 

[Guest]

As an author, I do have a huge problem with someone borrowing my work and editing it.

Indeed.

It isn't "research."

Theft of someone else's copyrighted work is against the law.

The owners of Literotica have actually shut down websites before for stealing our work.

 

[Stella_Omega]

No, it's "research!" Grin.

As long as she's just sending it to him for his /their personal use, I see no problem with a little editing.

Now someone doing that to another work- and then claiming credit.

Well now, that's a whole different kettle of fish, smelly rotting fish. Such a person should be drawn, (dragged up by a noose until almost strangled, then lowered to catch their breath, then repeated, over and over), quartered (Rip out entrails and set them on fire before their eyes before having four horses drag a different limb in differing directions with a painful parting being the result.) And finely, getting such a rap on the knuckles!

Her looking to send a sexy story to her guy for personal enjoyment while he's overseas- is one thing, hence my suggestion.

I understand what you're saying here--
Even so, that would be a suggestion you'd want to PM to someone- not say in public... Authors just won't get it, yanno?

 

[Diamond_Girl]

As long as she's just sending it to him for his /their personal use, I see no problem with a little editing.

You might not, but I do. Stories tend to get passed around. I met a lady in a chat room one time who emailed me stories a guy had written for her. They're very well-written, but I'd never share them with anyone else, because that's the type of person I am. However, other people may have no scruples about passing around an edited version of someone else's story and claiming credit.

 

[dichotomy_man]

The right to write

Excellent posts and opinions, and I love the firestorm it created.

A few side notes- Her request was for someone to write her a story- she could then claim as her own. Nothing wrong with that- or for help to write a story to send to her guy. I actually apologize that her request seems to have gotten lost in the side issues. I hope one of you does volunteer to help or write the story for her.

Once most stories are posted on-line- you as an author lose the copyright- I hate to say it but if you read the fine print on most sites- that IS what it says. Once posted, it’s their’s, not your’s any longer. Period!

Anything posted on most blogs or sites- such a Yahoo, (and many others,) have that provision. Literotica is one of the only ones that specifically does not say that- although it is still a possibility you lose control by posting. Once posted it is very hard to protect ones work.

I actually am an attorney (and so enjoy the dig)- and do read the fine print, which is one reason I rarely post anything except older stories, I am not willing to surrender the copyright.

I have actually read three of my stories, under different by lines, with virtually no changes. One was printed in a book of short stories. Another in a magizine and the other on an on-line pay to download site. So those people were paid, for my work. It was very ...annoying, to say the least, so I am well aware of the frustration.

Often posting at sites like these are the only avenues for writers to get their work out there, and appreciated.

Loss of copyright is a wide ranging problem, only in the last few years have many countries finely signed on to protect the authors rights, and I’m talking extremely well known and best selling authors.

The intricacies of working through trademark and copyright protection is daunting, A good friend of mine was a bit perturbed when she discovered while walking down a street in Beijing, dozens of her books being sold in China, without her knowledge or permission. (Or money paid to her.)

So, I do understand the consternation, frustration expressed here, but let’s not lose track of the intent, to help a women get her guy horney while overseas and away from her.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Excellent posts and opinions, and I love the firestorm it created.

A few side notes- Her request was for someone to write her a story- she could then claim as her own. Nothing wrong with that- or for help to write a story to send to her guy. I actually apologize that her request seems to have gotten lost in the side issues. I hope one of you does volunteer to help or write the story for her.

Once most stories are posted on-line- you as an author lose the copyright- I hate to say it but if you read the fine print on most sites- that IS what it says. Once posted, it’s their’s, not your’s any longer. Period!

Anything posted on most blogs or sites- such a Yahoo, (and many others,) have that provision. Literotica is one of the only ones that specifically does not say that- although it is still a possibility you lose control by posting. Once posted it is very hard to protect ones work.

I actually am an attorney (and so enjoy the dig)- and do read the fine print, which is one reason I rarely post anything except older stories, I am not willing to surrender the copyright.

I have actually read three of my stories, under different by lines, with virtually no changes. One was printed in a book of short stories. Another in a magizine and the other on an on-line pay to download site. So those people were paid, for my work. It was very ...annoying, to say the least, so I am well aware of the frustration.

Often posting at sites like these are the only avenues for writers to get their work out there, and appreciated.

Loss of copyright is a wide ranging problem, only in the last few years have many countries finely signed on to protect the authors rights, and I’m talking extremely well known and best selling authors.

The intricacies of working through trademark and copyright protection is daunting, A good friend of mine was a bit perturbed when she discovered while walking down a street in Beijing, dozens of her books being sold in China, without her knowledge or permission. (Or money paid to her.)

So, I do understand the consternation, frustration expressed here, but let’s not lose track of the intent, to help a women get her guy horney while overseas and away from her.

let's start a new thread on this subject, please!

(roses mean compliment in Ah-speak)*

*even though it's really a tulip

 

[jomar]

let's start a new thread on this subject, please!

(roses mean compliment in Ah-speak)*

*even though it's really a tulip

Do it. Could be very informative.

 

[gauchecritic]

As far as I'm aware, on this site (and from the few e-zines that wanted my work. The copyright remained mine and the only permissions granted were a one off printing at the site in question (a couple with a promise of money if any ever accrued)

I'm informed that Laurel has been the instigator of several sites being taken down because of infringement. Not her site infringement you understand but the infringement of contributing authors.

She apparently takes the rights of contributors very seriously and fights for those rights assiduously.

 

[CharleyH]

I understand what you're saying here--
Even so, that would be a suggestion you'd want to PM to someone- not say in public... Authors just won't get it, yanno?

I get what she's saying also, Stell. As to comment on the original question. I could see you getting an "original story" and I suspect it's called "custom" story and I also suspect that it will cost $35 and over depending on the word count. Kisses to you and your overseas dude, love.

 

[cloudy]

Once most stories are posted on-line- you as an author lose the copyright- I hate to say it but if you read the fine print on most sites- that IS what it says. Once posted, it’s their’s, not your’s any longer. Period!

I hate to correct you (okay, I really don't), but this is wrong, at least here at Lit. The author retains the copyright to all of their work posted here. Don't believe me? PM Laurel and ask.

Anything posted on most blogs or sites- such a Yahoo, (and many others,) have that provision. Literotica is one of the only ones that specifically does not say that- although it is still a possibility you lose control by posting. Once posted it is very hard to protect ones work.

That's why we have the kitty-mama. She gets downright mean when her authors' work is stolen. I'm a bitch and a half, but Laurel is my hero.

So, I do understand the consternation, frustration expressed here, but let’s not lose track of the intent, to help a women get her guy horney while overseas and away from her.

Someone steals my work, regardless of intentions, I'm tracking them down and killing them. Period. If I can't find them, there are people that can.

I understand that you say you're a lawyer, but unless you're specifically a copyright attorney, then you would almost have to lack the specific knowledge you would need to make such statements.

It doesn't matter if it's posted on Lit, on my Livejournal, wherever, I wrote it, and I retain copyright, end of story. That's the way copyright works.

Now...would it be worth the time and expense for me to take someone to court over it? Probably not, but I always have that option.

 

[Guest]

This is an interesting thread.

luvesaHotSoldier's plea has nearly been forgotten.

Sweetie, it does take awhile to write a story. If you're asking for a story made to order, I hope you're planning on compensating someone for the hours it will take to write and edit the work? It's quite a big favor to ask a complete stranger.

But good luck and best wishes.


And dichot man?

I was merely annoyed with your gleeful dismissal of copyright issues until I read this -

Excellent posts and opinions, and I love the firestorm it created.

You love stirring up shit?

I have this mental image of you reading this thread and sitting back and smiling, rubbing your hands together. How disappointing.

I'll know to avoid any threads of yours in the future.

 

[FatDino]

You love stirring up shit?

I have this mental image of you reading this thread and sitting back and smiling, rubbing your hands together. How disappointing.

He's a self-proclaimed lawyer, Sarahh, what did you expect?

 

[CharleyH]

I hate to correct you (okay, I really don't)

And this is why I love you so!

I have been thru an intellectual property rights issue and can say that once a sue threat is made, unless you have the money and proof (hard to determine) you have no leg to stand on and it is why people back down. Intellectual rights lawsuits take years and mucho upwards of a mill to prove and few like to go through that process. Just an add, and not much of an opinion.

 

[IrezumiKiss]

I have this mental image of you reading this thread and sitting back and smiling, rubbing your hands together. How disappointing.

What makes you think it's his hands that's he's rubbing while he's sitting back and smiling?

 

[Guest]

What makes you think it's his hands that's he's rubbing while he's sitting back and smiling?

Snert.

 

[tickledkitty]

I think this person should write her own story. Just do the best you can. I have a friend who wrote some stories some time ago. He's not a good writer at all, but I enjoyed reading his stories anyway because he wrote them. In fact, those stories are the ones that inspired me to write. Just do something short and sweet with you and your guy as the characters. It's not that hard.