can anyone help and edit my stories

fannyrat

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Hi

I have had one story posted, but I have had two more rejected.

These two stories have been rejected on grounds of grammar and punctuation.

Now don't get me wrong they are not perfect, but when I see some stories on here and how they are written, I can't believe that mine are that bad, that they would actually be rejected.

One story I have submitted four times, and it gets rejected every time. I have edited this story to the point I now believe it is getting a grammatical mess as I search for the format which is acceptable to the mods.

Is there any author out there that would take a look at my stories and tell me what they think is wrong with them ?

I don't want the stories rewritten as I would like to stand or fall on the quality (or lack of) of my own efforts.

I am sure these stories will not go down in history as the best ever and might actually be a pile of crap, but I'm sure they are not so badly written that they are not good enough to be even accepted.
 
What's the category for the story (Romance, Incest, etc.) and how long is it? I might be able to take a look.
 
Hi

One is nonconsent/reluctance and one is erotic couplings.

Neither is over long maybe 2-3 of literotica pages
 
I could have a look at them for you if you like FR??

Please PM me and I will arrange with you ??
 
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