Fill_de_Puta
Xt+1 = kxt(1-Xt)
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- May 23, 2014
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Hello all.
I'm a long time reader on Lit but new to submitting work and not entirely confident about it to be honest.
Any creative criticism or advice will be taken.
I don't want to be molly coddled so whatever you think it takes, even if that means binning it.
I believe my tense, grammar and paragraphing are my weakest points, you may think otherwise and you do know better than me.
It's just over 2,500 words.
Exhibitionism/Voyeurism, outdoors, public, straight and oral sex.
It has been spellchecked every time I have made changes for, what I hope, is the better.
The protagonist wears his girlfriend's underwear as a dare but the story does not revolve around this. It is not essential by any means but it does show that he is willing to do whatever she wants him to.
It's written in openoffice. I can paste into an email or send in wordpad or notepad.
I'm not in any real rush but the sooner I can get something submitted the better: for me at least.
Thank you
JK
I'm a long time reader on Lit but new to submitting work and not entirely confident about it to be honest.
Any creative criticism or advice will be taken.
I don't want to be molly coddled so whatever you think it takes, even if that means binning it.
I believe my tense, grammar and paragraphing are my weakest points, you may think otherwise and you do know better than me.
It's just over 2,500 words.
Exhibitionism/Voyeurism, outdoors, public, straight and oral sex.
It has been spellchecked every time I have made changes for, what I hope, is the better.
The protagonist wears his girlfriend's underwear as a dare but the story does not revolve around this. It is not essential by any means but it does show that he is willing to do whatever she wants him to.
It's written in openoffice. I can paste into an email or send in wordpad or notepad.
I'm not in any real rush but the sooner I can get something submitted the better: for me at least.
Thank you
JK
