btraven - feedback on your stories

[bayisle66]

I hope you read this; I am very impressed with your work and am glad that you are submitting mother/son stories now. I especially like the way that your stories involve an already established relationship between mother and son, as opposed to the more typical "the first time I fucked my mom" story. The presumption of a pre-existing, ongoing sexual relationship between a mother and her son is incredibly arousing. I enjoy the natural interaction between characters, as though their sex were as typical as that of a man and his wife. I like the intimacy of them being in their underwear together, in the bathroom or her bedroom, going through the day to day actions of a married couple (gettign dressed, etc)

My particular tastes run towards my own mother, of course. She is now 53, a brunette with shoulder length hair and brown eyes. She is not fat, nor was she ever, however time has of course taken its toll on her body. Her hips are fuller, her ass is wider, and her medium/small breasts droop. A couple small rolls on her belly, and even a small tummy bulge, with blue veins starting to show on her legs, but a very sensual woman.

I'm not especially into the humiliation that you sometimes insert into your stories, but it's not a real turnoff either. My fantasies about my mother involve voyeurism, mostly. I enjoy thinking of her on a date with some young buck, cheating on my dad. They go dancing, tenderly caressing one another, necking etc., I watch from a corner of the bar. They leave the bar and go into his car, and I get to either watch them fuck in the car, or follow them home and listen/watch them together. I also like if the guy is black, or if she takes a college course and gets ganged by frat guys. Hey, whatever gets you off, huh?

Your stories are good, I also like that the mothers are losing their figures in them. Please keep writing; if you can incorporate a 53 year old brunette into one, all the better!! Thanks.

Bayisle 66

 

[btraven]

Bayisle,

Thanks for the feedback. As a writer -- especially in an anonymous setting such as this -- it is always reassuring to find that people have actually taken the time to read your work.

Like yourself I have also always been intrigued with the long term prospects of an incestual union. Is it just a quick fuck -- or does it evolve into something more? Certainly anytime you are dealing with incest these are very powerful emotional triggers involved that should make some fundamental changes in the nature of the relationship. What happens once you cross that Rubicon and actually fuck your mother? Do you both go on as before as mother and son with the addition of the sex? Is she, then, just your playmate who was once your mother? Or does the relationship become something closer to man and wife? I try to explore this theme in my stories.

My personal taste in women is more rubenesque or zoftig rather than some runway model type. Of course, I'm sure the fact that my own mother (even when younger) matches this my personal tastes is not altogether a coincidence

Voyeurism except as a prelude to becoming an active partipant doesn't hold any particular facination for me. But I would to discuss story ideas further. To tell you the truth ... the prospect of writing about some else's mother with some real details about personality, body type, etc definitely interest me.


Regards,

btraven