"Bridal Train"

Texguy84

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So, I'm thinking... "Bridal Train"

Sounds like a good name for a gangbang story, doesn't it? :D
 
Sure....maybe some groomsmen....in-laws...even bridesmaids....perhaps the groom or bride do not know that they are joining a family committed to sharing. The wedding is a test of his or her love for the spouse. Those who pass....
 
Make it "Bridle Train" and you an work bestiality into it as well......Carney
 
And here I thought this was going to be about a wagon train of mail-order brides, like that movie Westward the Women... :p
 
Story Idea

That's not a bad idea (minus the bestiality suggested, that's a whole other game there).
 
sunandshadow said:
And here I thought this was going to be about a wagon train of mail-order brides, like that movie Westward the Women... :p

That was my impression too. It has merit, not the journey, but start it when they arrive. There has to be miss matches, such as to old, to young, color and background. I'm not good enough to start it or even moderate it, but if someone started the thread, I would join.

Macmillian
 
macmillian said:
That was my impression too. It has merit, not the journey, but start it when they arrive. There has to be miss matches, such as to old, to young, color and background. I'm not good enough to start it or even moderate it, but if someone started the thread, I would join.

Macmillian

Another example of this sort of scenario is Andre Norton's _Year of the Unicorn_. In that book a band of mercenary shapeshifter, in exchange for fighting in a war alongside human medieval-level lords and their knights, asked to be paid with 13 women to be their brides. There was no matchmaking ahead of time. Instead the women arrived as a group into the foreign culture of the shapeshifters (different religion, the shapeshifters human forms look like they belong to a different race, the shapeshifters live surrounded by magic while the humans have little or no magic).

The book at this point kind of cheated by magically pairing people with their soulmates, but I think it would have been neat to see the humans being afraid of and intrigued by the strangers they're supposed to marry, and the shapeshifter soldiers awkwardly trying to court civilians from a different culture. But personally I would like to see both groups be of mixed gender, so there would be mailorder husbands as well as brides, and some of the pairings could be straight and some gay. Also fewer than 13 couples would work better in terms of character development and tightness of the story.

So, more like: There is a clan of people where everyone is related, so they have to bring in husbands and wives from outside the clan. Normally the young women of the clan would be traded for women of another clan, but the clan has a special ability (shapeshifting, magic, alien technology, whatever) which all of the children of that clan inherit. The children of both genders need to stay in order to be properly trained and to live where people aren't prejudiced against them. Or the clan has lost too many people in a recent war (last remnant of an alien or fantasy race?), they need to encourage all their young people to breed to bring the clan back up to a good size so it won't die out.
 
sunandshadow said:
Another example of this sort of scenario is Andre Norton's _Year of the Unicorn_. In that book a band of mercenary shapeshifter, in exchange for fighting in a war alongside human medieval-level lords and their knights, asked to be paid with 13 women to be their brides. There was no matchmaking ahead of time. Instead the women arrived as a group into the foreign culture of the shapeshifters (different religion, the shapeshifters human forms look like they belong to a different race, the shapeshifters live surrounded by magic while the humans have little or no magic).

The book at this point kind of cheated by magically pairing people with their soulmates, but I think it would have been neat to see the humans being afraid of and intrigued by the strangers they're supposed to marry, and the shapeshifter soldiers awkwardly trying to court civilians from a different culture. But personally I would like to see both groups be of mixed gender, so there would be mailorder husbands as well as brides, and some of the pairings could be straight and some gay. Also fewer than 13 couples would work better in terms of character development and tightness of the story.

So, more like: There is a clan of people where everyone is related, so they have to bring in husbands and wives from outside the clan. Normally the young women of the clan would be traded for women of another clan, but the clan has a special ability (shapeshifting, magic, alien technology, whatever) which all of the children of that clan inherit. The children of both genders need to stay in order to be properly trained and to live where people aren't prejudiced against them. Or the clan has lost too many people in a recent war (last remnant of an alien or fantasy race?), they need to encourage all their young people to breed to bring the clan back up to a good size so it won't die out.

Interesting thoughts indeed. I like your imagination.
 
I was thinking it would be more along the lines of, say you have this group of friends, wild partying types, lots of casual sex perhaps. They're all at the wedding reception and, thanks to lots of good vibes and alcohol, one thing leads to the other...

Alternately, maybe the wife finds out only at the reception that her husband is a jerk and has been cheating on her or something, and this develops as an act of revenge on him.

The train need not be limited to male guests either, perhaps one of the ladies, seeing what's going on, races to her hotel room nearby to get her strapon and decides to share it with the other female guests... :nana:
 
I like your suggestion hun! That would be a very naughty reception! lol Maybe you could work it into the vows as well!

Texguy84 said:
I was thinking it would be more along the lines of, say you have this group of friends, wild partying types, lots of casual sex perhaps. They're all at the wedding reception and, thanks to lots of good vibes and alcohol, one thing leads to the other...

Alternately, maybe the wife finds out only at the reception that her husband is a jerk and has been cheating on her or something, and this develops as an act of revenge on him.

The train need not be limited to male guests either, perhaps one of the ladies, seeing what's going on, races to her hotel room nearby to get her strapon and decides to share it with the other female guests... :nana:
 
Nice idea

I like the idea too. It could be anything from an extremely wild bachelorette party, to a woman that loves to party coming to realize that marriage could mean the end to her casual sex.
 
funrunner said:
I like the idea too. It could be anything from an extremely wild bachelorette party, to a woman that loves to party coming to realize that marriage could mean the end to her casual sex.

Not to be mean, but wouldn't her fiance naturally assume in most conventional cases that casual sex ended with them agreeing to be exclusive? Of course, if she was a swinger like me and my gf, it wouldn't have to end at all. But it is a natural assumption in traditional engagements.
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
Not to be mean, but wouldn't her fiance naturally assume in most conventional cases that casual sex ended with them agreeing to be exclusive? Of course, if she was a swinger like me and my gf, it wouldn't have to end at all. But it is a natural assumption in traditional engagements.

Well yeah, but there's KNOWING something in an intelectual sense, and then REALIZING it, in your gut. Not quite the same thing.

Kinda like, right now, I'm joining the Air Force. I know that I'm signing a contract to do what Uncle Sam tells me to for the next 4 years or so, but it's not until a certain point where I realize "Holy SHIT, this is going to be the next four years of my life."

And then I see this month's playboy with the AF drill sergeant, and I think "OK, maybe this won't be so bad."
 
:devil:
Texguy84 said:
Well yeah, but there's KNOWING something in an intelectual sense, and then REALIZING it, in your gut. Not quite the same thing.

Kinda like, right now, I'm joining the Air Force. I know that I'm signing a contract to do what Uncle Sam tells me to for the next 4 years or so, but it's not until a certain point where I realize "Holy SHIT, this is going to be the next four years of my life."

And then I see this month's playboy with the AF drill sergeant, and I think "OK, maybe this won't be so bad."

Point taken. Now, if only all drill sergeants looked like her....then again....that wouldn't toughen you up, which the boot camp is supposed to do.
 
sunandshadow said:
Another example of this sort of scenario is Andre Norton's _Year of the Unicorn_. In that book a band of mercenary shapeshifter, in exchange for fighting in a war alongside human medieval-level lords and their knights, asked to be paid with 13 women to be their brides. There was no matchmaking ahead of time. Instead the women arrived as a group into the foreign culture of the shapeshifters (different religion, the shapeshifters human forms look like they belong to a different race, the shapeshifters live surrounded by magic while the humans have little or no magic).

The book at this point kind of cheated by magically pairing people with their soulmates, but I think it would have been neat to see the humans being afraid of and intrigued by the strangers they're supposed to marry, and the shapeshifter soldiers awkwardly trying to court civilians from a different culture. But personally I would like to see both groups be of mixed gender, so there would be mailorder husbands as well as brides, and some of the pairings could be straight and some gay. Also fewer than 13 couples would work better in terms of character development and tightness of the story.

So, more like: There is a clan of people where everyone is related, so they have to bring in husbands and wives from outside the clan. Normally the young women of the clan would be traded for women of another clan, but the clan has a special ability (shapeshifting, magic, alien technology, whatever) which all of the children of that clan inherit. The children of both genders need to stay in order to be properly trained and to live where people aren't prejudiced against them. Or the clan has lost too many people in a recent war (last remnant of an alien or fantasy race?), they need to encourage all their young people to breed to bring the clan back up to a good size so it won't die out.

I decided to start a roleplay thread like this - please come visit if you'd like to play :)
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=21757038
 
macmillian said:
I'm not good enough to start it or even moderate it, but if someone started the thread, I would join.

Mod it? :confused:




As for Texy's original post, of course it sounds like a great gang bang story! :D I'm adding this to my computer file "to do" list right now! :)
 
P. S.

Texy, do you see a non consent gang rape/bang? The woman's life long fantasy that he groom sets up for her? Will family and the very close friends (IE: wedding party) be involved? There are different ways to perv this with as many fetishes as there are in this world!
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Texy, do you see a non consent gang rape/bang? The woman's life long fantasy that he groom sets up for her? Will family and the very close friends (IE: wedding party) be involved? There are different ways to perv this with as many fetishes as there are in this world!

Hmm... could definitely happen that way. If it's her lifelong fantasy, isn't it more of a reluctance than a nonconsent though? (Welcome to one of the most ambiguously defined categories on Lit)
 
Texguy84 said:
Hmm... could definitely happen that way. If it's her lifelong fantasy, isn't it more of a reluctance than a nonconsent though? (Welcome to one of the most ambiguously defined categories on Lit)

Yeah yeah. :p Write up whatever you write up! ;)
 
fascinating

sunandshadow said:
......So, more like: There is a clan of people where everyone is related, so they have to bring in husbands and wives from outside the clan. Normally the young women of the clan would be traded for women of another clan, but the clan has a special ability (shapeshifting, magic, alien technology, whatever) which all of the children of that clan inherit. The children of both genders need to stay in order to be properly trained and to live where people aren't prejudiced against them. Or the clan has lost too many people in a recent war (last remnant of an alien or fantasy race?), they need to encourage all their young people to breed to bring the clan back up to a good size so it won't die out.

Greetings

I like this

I don't do shape shifter but the sci fi fantasy element be interesting as is the whole "fish out of water aspect" as the new folks adapt to the village and the villagers adapt to them

Hell works even without the magic as a straight ahead narrative in a fantasy realm:

Frontier village depopulated by war or plague, king orders his bailiffs to grab up some women from "by the docks" to be shipped there as wives...

All kinds of possible combinations: consensual, reluctant, mistaken identity, gang bang, etc

Fun concept ;)

Enjoy the journey

WarLord
 
WarLordwrites said:
Greetings

I like this

I don't do shape shifter but the sci fi fantasy element be interesting as is the whole "fish out of water aspect" as the new folks adapt to the village and the villagers adapt to them

Hell works even without the magic as a straight ahead narrative in a fantasy realm:



All kinds of possible combinations: consensual, reluctant, mistaken identity, gang bang, etc

Fun concept ;)

Enjoy the journey

WarLord

Certainly. :) Myself, I was thinking prejudice, domineering clan elders trying to force gay people into straight marriages and young clan members incestuously in love with each other to marry outsiders, an outsider who was a hermaphrodite or a catgirl or something else not-quite-human, and maybe some sort of ritual gift or test.
 
Hmmm, for the sake of brevity, well sorta anyway. ;)

Why not adjust the tale to say, the princess is promised to the king for payment of his help. She reaches his castle only to find that his people live differently than hers. Say his are very sexually active with anyone living, her's aren't.

Though personally, I think it would be more fun if her people were sexually active with everyone and his aren't. Then you can have fun with her trying to get the maid to eat her, the butler to fuck her and so forth. :catroar:
 
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