Bowing to demand...

[GeorgieH]

Hi fellow Literoticans,

My latest story is now posted:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400359

I decided to listen even harder to your earlier feedback and create something which would hopefully satisfy some of your more urgent requests. And surprise, surprise, I found that by doing so, the whole experience was even more stimulating than normal...

I would really like to hear whether you agree with me or not!

Georgie
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[AverageBear]

Georgie,

This was an excellent piece - there were a few typos, but easy to overlook because the storytelling was captivating, the buildup intense, and the surprise "roar" at the end stupendous! You made me "want it all" with you!

AverageBear

 

[JohnBous]

Full of surprises

Hi Georgie,

This is a very well worked piece and I have to agree with AverageBear. It's great to see you 'let it all out', and it was a lovely surprise ending.

Keep up the great work!

John