"'Bout Damn Time"

[spokesnpokes]

I just read this story and thought it was a little weak. I mean, Troy gets out of the car and fucks Jason. There no build up, no climax, just fucking. He just happened to have a rubber in his pocket? C'mon! Did he go to Jason's house knowing he finished the car? Anybody agree with me?

 

[tickledkitty]

I just read this story and thought it was a little weak. I mean, Troy gets out of the car and fucks Jason. There no build up, no climax, just fucking. He just happened to have a rubber in his pocket? C'mon! Did he go to Jason's house knowing he finished the car? Anybody agree with me?

What are you talking about?

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I just read this story and thought it was a little weak. I mean, Troy gets out of the car and fucks Jason. There no build up, no climax, just fucking. He just happened to have a rubber in his pocket? C'mon! Did he go to Jason's house knowing he finished the car? Anybody agree with me?

Huh??

 

[_Lynn_]

I just read this story and thought it was a little weak. I mean, Troy gets out of the car and fucks Jason. There no build up, no climax, just fucking. He just happened to have a rubber in his pocket? C'mon! Did he go to Jason's house knowing he finished the car? Anybody agree with me?

A story written with invisible ink??

 

[damppanties]

'Bout Damn Time

 

[tickledkitty]

I just read this story and thought it was a little weak. I mean, Troy gets out of the car and fucks Jason. There no build up, no climax, just fucking. He just happened to have a rubber in his pocket? C'mon! Did he go to Jason's house knowing he finished the car? Anybody agree with me?

Well, I just read it, and I don't think it's that bad. It didn't do much for me, but then, I'm a straight woman. I thought the writing was decent. Yeah, it was short.

Can you do better?

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Well, I just read it, and I don't think it's that bad. It didn't do much for me, but then, I'm a straight woman. I thought the writing was decent. Yeah, it was short.

Can you do better?

The originator of this thread isn't the writer, just a disgruntled reader.