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Lynn_MXX

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Here's a challenge for someone, based on these characters:

MARY: is a pretty blonde, traditional conservative housewife, a believer in family values. She's always shocked at the news of married people who cheat and shocked at anyone who dates outside their race. Then she meets......

TYRONE: This black man is slim, athletic, broad-shouldered, well-endowed, and HIGHLY charismatic. Ladies always find him attractive, he's the master of the bedroom. When he meets this beautiful blonde woman, he MUST have her, even though she's married with two young kids. Maybe she could have a third child, this one a bit darker than the other two!

PAUL: is married to Mary. He's an okay kind of guy, average height & a bit overweight, but a good provider. Someone at his work is being cheated on by his wife and he ENJOYS it. This wouldn't be him (really). He loves Mary and he wouldn't like anyone else touching her

So...... the secretary - overpowered by the charisma and good looks of her boss - does the unthinkable and has an extramarital affair, having her boss's mixed-race baby. Angst-ridden Paul - due to the love he has for his wife - forgives her and helps her raise her coffee-coloured child

There's some excellent authors out there, so I hope that someone takes up the challenge. Please avoid the cliche that has the husband enjoying his wife's cheating
 
No offense but this has been done like a thousand times here. I would go so far to call it a staple of the loving wives and interracial cheating.

The Husband being a complete pussywhipped simp who accepts the other man's baby and forgives his faithless wife also completes the package.

No, seriously, this could be half of the interracial adultery stories here. So with that being said, you'll probably find someone to pick it up fairly soon.
 
No offense but this has been done like a thousand times here. I would go so far to call it a staple of the loving wives and interracial cheating.

The Husband being a complete pussywhipped simp who accepts the other man's baby and forgives his faithless wife also completes the package.

No, seriously, this could be half of the interracial adultery stories here. So with that being said, you'll probably find someone to pick it up fairly soon.

Well, except in most of those the husband is the central character of the story. Sometimes he loves it, sometimes he hates it, but either way its about him. As I read the description from the OP, it seems more like this would be about the affair between the woman and her boss.

The husband deciding that he loves his wife (and kids) enough to not tear their family apart because of a mistake she made doesn't make him pussy whipped or stupid. Probably makes him a hell of a lot smarter than majority of husbands in either the 'accepting cuck' or 'burn the bitch' groups of stories.

On the whole, while it has some very common cliches with the characters, focusing on the wife and her boss make it a lot more unique. It still isn't an unheard of story, but its not a dime-a-dozen idea either.
 
To be fair, the forum's rules kind of limit where you can go with the premise. You can't take it the Unfaithful or OJ route and weird turns are also sort of blocked, so variations of standard cuckold stories are all you can really do.
 
...MARY: is a pretty blonde, traditional conservative housewife, a believer in family values...

TYRONE: This black man is slim, athletic, broad-shouldered, well-endowed, and HIGHLY charismatic...

PAUL: is married to Mary. He's an okay kind of guy, average height & a bit overweight, but a good provider.
Move it to Amalfi, Italy. Tyrolian blonde Maria is church secretary, married to average Tuscan barber Paolo; Fr. Tirono is the sexy new priest from Somalia (Italy is short on white clergy) who captures her heart and ass. The colorful Amalfi cathedral features many hidden nooks for stealthy sex, and Fr. Tirono isn't into little boys. How does Paolo react when Fr. Tirono comes in to have his tonsure trimmed?
 
Not my kink AT ALL, but were I even to consider it, I'd change so much of the premise as to be virtually unrecognizable to what the OP posted.

Maybe something like Mary sexually-blackmails her boss, Tyrone by framing him of embezzling from employees 401K plans, even though it was really her husband Paul who committed the crime, but was caught by Mary and he is ALSO being blackmailed by her and has to be her cuckold-henchman.

Basically, Mary is kind of a freak and is forcing both men to, very reluctantly, serve her sexual whims.

And I'd ditch the pregnancy thing because the breeding thing is both a cliche and a boner-killer.
 
. It still isn't an unheard of story, but its not a dime-a-dozen idea either.

Sorry but you're wrong about that. The storyline has been used so many times it's a 1/10 of a penny per dozen idea now. ;)

And the name Tyrone or Tyron has been used in close to 1000 of those stories. There's another cliche black name too but it slips my mind.

Ahhh Jamal is the other one... 941 stories. :eek:
 
Sorry but you're wrong about that. The storyline has been used so many times it's a 1/10 of a penny per dozen idea now. ;)

And the name Tyrone or Tyron has been used in close to 1000 of those stories. There's another cliche black name too but it slips my mind.

Ahhh Jamal is the other one... 941 stories. :eek:

Thus the challenge to the author to add something new and fresh to capture the readers interest.
 
Well, except in most of those the husband is the central character of the story. Sometimes he loves it, sometimes he hates it, but either way its about him. As I read the description from the OP, it seems more like this would be about the affair between the woman and her boss.

The husband deciding that he loves his wife (and kids) enough to not tear their family apart because of a mistake she made doesn't make him pussy whipped or stupid. Probably makes him a hell of a lot smarter than majority of husbands in either the 'accepting cuck' or 'burn the bitch' groups of stories.

On the whole, while it has some very common cliches with the characters, focusing on the wife and her boss make it a lot more unique. It still isn't an unheard of story, but its not a dime-a-dozen idea either.

Agreed. I am re-reading the "Sharon Goes Back To School" series and the captivating part is her inner turmoil between loving the physical, sexual experience and the emotional betrayal of her loving husband.
 
Sorry but you're wrong about that. The storyline has been used so many times it's a 1/10 of a penny per dozen idea now. ;)

And the name Tyrone or Tyron has been used in close to 1000 of those stories. There's another cliche black name too but it slips my mind.

Ahhh Jamal is the other one... 941 stories. :eek:

And Marcus in another 932 stories.
 
I'd personally play it completely straight and with all the drama it would have. Intersect it with real racial, sexual and power issues and it would be interesting
 
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