Bombed!

<---- This is wrong, I'm not a virgin anymore. :D

I submitted another story a week ago and logged in yesterday to see if it was up yet, etc. It had just been posted I guess - 50 views, 4.35 score - but I had submitted it completed (4 ch.) and only Ch.1 was posted.

So I came to AH to see if there were any updates on submission delays and was skimming the threads for about 10 minutes. I went back to check for comments, and had one 'Anon." commenter post the story was "rubbish" and the score had dropped to 4.00.

This morning it is back up to 4.42, and Ch. 2 posted this a.m., currently at 4.86. I also got my first "feedback" through email from someone who really likes the story so far, so that is two cherries popped in 24 hours. :D (I'm taking the reader feedback email as a nice warm one between my legs and the bombing terrorist as rudely poking my ass. Now if I can just figure out how to do oral, I'd be golden. ;)

Anyway, I now consider myself an official Literotica author! Happy Writing everyone!

got a link?
 
<---- This is wrong, I'm not a virgin anymore. :D

I submitted another story a week ago and logged in yesterday to see if it was up yet, etc. It had just been posted I guess - 50 views, 4.35 score - but I had submitted it completed (4 ch.) and only Ch.1 was posted.

My understanding is that if you submit several chapters of a multi-part story together, they will be posted with 1 day between instalments.
 
i thought that too. laurel also sometimes posts things at different times, like contest entries she hasnt posted on a sunday because they are low readership days, so she holds them till the monday.
 
Sorry, no links. I didn't start the thread to pimp myself. Hopefully there are enough guys on here who would do that for me if they knew what I really look like. ;) (Yes, Virginia, I'm a girl - for those who haven't already figured that out.)

uhm ... i was asking about a story link. you could put something in your signature line.
 
<3 Thanks, I know, but I just makes me feel like I'm self-promoting, which is king of funny once you consider what I write about (at least so far). - Oh, you can write that stuff but you don't want anybody to know about it, huh? - lol.

what, incest?

use the thomas harris comparison. silence of the lambs - he wrote it but i doubt he goes around eating people's brains.

...although.

:D
 
Thanks, good point. I've been reading on here (Lit) for years but never registered until I had to so I could submit my first story. I choose the Incest/Taboo genre because I read on one thread that they (that group) will read anything and like it, which appears to be true if they like my crap. :)

On the other hand, I won't let my hubby read any of my stories. I'm afraid of what he might think. :D Hell, he might divorce me! I can just see how that would go...

"Your Honor, I submit the following exhibits as proof that she is a sex-crazed lunatic and a menace to decent society!"

Hmm, me thinks I see a plot bunny in there...

not exactly correct. they don't necessarily like anything tossed out there. some like a long, slow build-up to the 'seduction' in the incest category. i did one recently that kicked in mid-affair and had some feedback (constructive, not like Loving Wives, generally) that informed me of that point.

LOL. mebbe your hubby has a deep-rooted fantasy along those lines hisself? you never know.
 
I guess I just had a hard one shoved down my throat now too, so that's it - all cherries popped now. :D Nothing more to see here folks, move along...

My own fault I guess. Mr. Anonymous seems to feel quite strongly that I need to warn my readers that a story posted under the Incest/Taboo genre might actually contain incest or else stop writing.

"Readers DO NOT like stories of father-daughter incest." Uh, okay. Mother-son = good; brother-sister = good; anybody with any relation to someone else = good; father-daughter = bad! :(

As for Mr Anymouse, he doesn't know shit from shinola.

Opinions are like asshole. Everyone has one butt some are shittier than others. So my best advice is to take them with a dose of aspirin and a large roll of toilet paper. :D
 
Thanks, I think I'm getting the thick skin I need to keep submitting. I just thought it was kind of funny.

and even...

by Anonymous
11/20/13

Confucious he say "Fucking without seduction, like meat without sauce"

Really screwd up a potentially great story by simply jumping in to the fucking bit!

Please give us another, but this time with a very reluctant mother being persuaded by the son to give up one of her moral boundaries in each chapter from letting him look at her naked breasts to the last chapter when she is forced to agree to have his child, all the time at risk of the father finding out that he is being cuckold right in his own home!
 
and even...

by Anonymous
11/20/13

Confucious he say "Fucking without seduction, like meat without sauce"

Really screwd up a potentially great story by simply jumping in to the fucking bit!

Please give us another, but this time with a very reluctant mother being persuaded by the son to give up one of her moral boundaries in each chapter from letting him look at her naked breasts to the last chapter when she is forced to agree to have his child, all the time at risk of the father finding out that he is being cuckold right in his own home!

Wow. Anonymous is writing your stories for you. How can I get in on that?
 
<3 Thanks, I know, but I just makes me feel like I'm self-promoting, which is king of funny once you consider what I write about (at least so far). - Oh, you can write that stuff but you don't want anybody to know about it, huh? - lol.

If you don't promote yourself, no one else will.
 
You're right, I know, but I'm still working my way into this. (Nice girl grows up, gets a PhD, works doing medical research by day, and at night does a Dr. Jekyl/Miss Whore thing and then writes smut she is still too embarrassed about to even let her hubby read any of it.) Me thinks self-promoting my own stuff is a ways off yet - my comfort zone just ain't ready for True Confessions yet! :D

just man-up, so to speak. :D
 
From what I've read you should NOT be embarrassed about promoting yourself at all! But it's understandable to ease your way out of the starting gate! :D
 
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