Blood

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I have written a few stories with biting and blood being let out but they seem to get kicked back every time. Is this a taboo or am I missing something? Any insight would be helpful. I'm not about to make my characters into vampires just to satisfy the mods.

Thank you for your time
 
Must be something other than blood getting it kicked back. I’ve posted a few chapters that had blood in them - one in non human and a couple in the TG/CD category and they were never turned down.
 
I have written a few stories with biting and blood being let out but they seem to get kicked back every time. Is this a taboo or am I missing something? Any insight would be helpful. I'm not about to make my characters into vampires just to satisfy the mods.

Thank you for your time

this reminds me of back in the early 80's. i said, "but this means no more blood during sex!". it wasn't well received.
 
I have written a few stories with biting and blood being let out but they seem to get kicked back every time. Is this a taboo or am I missing something? Any insight would be helpful. I'm not about to make my characters into vampires just to satisfy the mods.

Thank you for your time
What is the reject message? They are generic, and may cover issues that aren't in your story. Is there any suggestion of snuff in your content?
 
Snuff said

Yes the message does reference snuff but nobody dies and I don't think it is too graphic. I guess I can just cut that part out an rewrite the ending.
 
Yes the message does reference snuff but nobody dies and I don't think it is too graphic. I guess I can just cut that part out an rewrite the ending.
There you go. Make it clear there's no death related sex or sex related death and you should be OK. You'll probably be able to glide closer to the line if you've got vampires, but if in doubt, wind back gratuitous description.
 
Yep, vampires. You can include the blood letting as an element of a sex act, even one leading to death of the human. There are such stories posted here.
 
Yes the message does reference snuff but nobody dies and I don't think it is too graphic. I guess I can just cut that part out an rewrite the ending.

My first story was basically a rape and got kicked back because the victim didn’t get any sexual satisfaction. So I rewrote the ending slightly. I gave him some satisfaction. Accepted. Perhaps only a minor alteration is necessary? Perhaps it’s not that a person dies but how they die?
 
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I just took out all biting. No one was close to being a corpse but I am not thrilled to have to cut out a little blood. I read a few other stories with biting and without vampires. None of the ones I read had blood and I think that is what did it. Maybe I will try my hand at a vampire story just to go nuts. Blood baths, succubus and demons. Oh my!

Thanks for the input everyone.
 
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