Well, seems this is the place to do it, so why not.
I'd like to draw everyone's attention to a story that i've been working on for quite some time, but have only just discovered this forum to let people know about it, esp as its still not been approved, so until this week, only the person who asked me to write it had actually seen it.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2540
The story is a simple account of one night in the life of a friend of mine, Dani, who goes out to celebrate the end of her exams with her best friend and housemate, Lucy.
I've tried to set the story into distinct sections, although as you will see if you look at the story map now, it is becoming a little blurred as to whatthey were, so let me outline them quickly.
From the start, there were five main routes that could be followed. The first two were travelling directly to either a nightclub or a pub, the other two were based around the route taken on the way out, being either a bus journey, a walk or a lift.
However, since then the story has evolved greatly and whole new sections have grown from the original five. I have tried to keep them in groups thou, such as the one i am currently working on, which is a new section still based in the nightclub.
Also, i have tried to link some, so that you can move from one section to the next, although there are errors when this is done, as i point out in my intro.
More importantly, although the story is well developed, i am sure i have left plenty of possibilities if anyone wants to add new paths along the way. I'd love to see some different ideas and would be more than happy to then add to other peoples ideas and link them back into the main body where needed.
Please do take a look and let me know what you think, or better still, add a thread or three. and as switch76 will hopefully verify, im happy to try to add a few threads to anyone who has a stroy i feel i can contribute to.
With luck this story will get approved one day, but i have kept a back up just in case it gets lost!!!!!!
Do enjoy,
Rob aka dirtykentman
I'd like to draw everyone's attention to a story that i've been working on for quite some time, but have only just discovered this forum to let people know about it, esp as its still not been approved, so until this week, only the person who asked me to write it had actually seen it.
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2540
The story is a simple account of one night in the life of a friend of mine, Dani, who goes out to celebrate the end of her exams with her best friend and housemate, Lucy.
I've tried to set the story into distinct sections, although as you will see if you look at the story map now, it is becoming a little blurred as to whatthey were, so let me outline them quickly.
From the start, there were five main routes that could be followed. The first two were travelling directly to either a nightclub or a pub, the other two were based around the route taken on the way out, being either a bus journey, a walk or a lift.
However, since then the story has evolved greatly and whole new sections have grown from the original five. I have tried to keep them in groups thou, such as the one i am currently working on, which is a new section still based in the nightclub.
Also, i have tried to link some, so that you can move from one section to the next, although there are errors when this is done, as i point out in my intro.
More importantly, although the story is well developed, i am sure i have left plenty of possibilities if anyone wants to add new paths along the way. I'd love to see some different ideas and would be more than happy to then add to other peoples ideas and link them back into the main body where needed.
Please do take a look and let me know what you think, or better still, add a thread or three. and as switch76 will hopefully verify, im happy to try to add a few threads to anyone who has a stroy i feel i can contribute to.
With luck this story will get approved one day, but i have kept a back up just in case it gets lost!!!!!!
Do enjoy,
Rob aka dirtykentman
