Blackmailing the Blackmailer

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I've had this idea for a long time. Basically, I like blackmail stories in theory but can never really get into them when it feels like the victim is being treated too badly. Yet it's hard to draw the line on what is and isn't fair treatment.

So I had this idea for a story set in an office. It revolves around two characters. One is a woman. She's attractive, confident, reasonably intelligent and not a particularly nice person. She's in a position of authority, such as the office manager.

The other person can be either a man or a woman (by your preference) and is intelligent, and is generally a nice person. One day this second character is called into the woman's office. Now this is widly accepted as being a bad thing, but no one knows exactly what happens. So at the urging of a friend, this second person decides to record the conversation so that they can have a record of what happens.

So this person goes to the woman's office. She's quite harsh towards them from the beginning. She quickly reveals her plan to blackmail this second person. The second person hasn't actually done anything wrong but this woman has used her position and access to company records to make it seem as though this second person has been stealing from the company, committing fraud or other similar activities.

When this person objects, the woman points out that no one will believe them and that she's gotten away with this before.

She then brings out a list of humiliating activities that this person will be expected to undergo, as well as rules for them to follow during their blackmail (such as calling her Mistress, having to ask her permission before going to the bathroom, or whatever else you happen to be in to). This is a standard list that she always makes her victims follow as part of her standard MO. It includes some room to move, like that a person will be 'appropriately punished' for disobedience.

Just as she's at her most smug and has, for example, ordered this second person to strip this person reveals the recording they've made (which, if they're smart, they have done on their phone and already backed up to the internet or elsewhere).

They then order her to strip, pointing out not only that her blackmail is now useless on them (because they have proof of their innocence), but that they could have her not just fired but sent to prison for attempted blackmail.

Now the woman becomes the blackmail victim as she'd made to do all the activities she'd subject others to.

Where the story would go from there is of course up to the writer. You can fill in the details on the list as you go. Depending on the the gender of the second character, they may decide to take some license with the specifics of the list. Obviously, it would not be particularly embarrassing for a woman to be made to wear women's underwear, which she may have planned to force the man to do. It would however be humiliating for her to be forced to wear another woman's underwear.

Since I can not write personally this is not a story I can bring to life. I would like to see it though. Is anyone interesting in writing this?
 
This premise is pretty fucking hot. I might be interested in doing it, but it might take a month or two since I'm working on other things.
 
Hey HeyAll,

I wouldn't mind at all if it took a couple of months. I've had the idea for a long time and so a couple of months isn't long at all to wait to see it come to life (and I know that waiting for a great story is worth so much more in the end than getting a good one quickly).

Taking a look at your submissions I see that you are experienced at writing erotic lit, though generally favour incest/taboo. Still, if you decide that this is something you want to write, then I'd be very happy for you to do so.
 
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I have to disagree with you on your ability to write this story. Your synopsis exhibits writing ability surpassing at least ninety percent of the people writing on this site. Give it a go, you may surprise yourself.

I concur. Your firm grasp of the concept of paragraphs rockets you to the top half of the literacy level on this site. Your proper use of the words two, too, and to propel you into the top quartile. And your correct usage of there, their, and they're demonstrate that you belong in at least the top ten percent. Your overall cogency and smooth flow elevate you to probably the top five percent.

Start writing!.......Carney
 
Thanks Want2_watchwife and Carnevil9 for your kind words about my writing. I will certainly think about what you said. Though I may start with a simpler concept than what I've proposed here, I think I will try to write something myself.
 
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