Blackmail Story?

[Barca300]

I have an idea for a story I'd like to see made. If there are any authors interested, feel free to contribute or p.m me, as I'd love to help.

The basic plot would revolve around a girl, who is a rebellious, liberal, gamer with a strong moral center. She would be blackmailed into slavery and, after being broken in through a series of events, would become a slave girl.

It sounds pretty generic, but the uniqueness would come from the details! If I could get help, I'd love to write this as a detailed series, where every step of the girl's gradual enslavement is detailed.

There are a lot of details that I have in my head, and I'd love to keep discussing them with if anyone's interested!

 

[Sean Renaud]

Unless you think it's gonna drag, in which case pace yourself put as many details as you can think of here. Don't ask for PMS unless you're going to be using something really sensitive. You want more people reading your idea not fewer.

 

[Barca300]

Well, the story is basically about her breaking down eventually, and I always envisioned her breaking would go like this; It would start with a strip tease and minor sexual acts, and threats of releasing blackmailed footage (or something similar). She would go along with it, but be rebellious throughout. More public actions would be like having her have a vibrator beneath her clothes that the blackmailer could control, and using it in public places.

As the situation progressed, she would spend more and more time at her blackmailer's house. She would start to spend her days serving him, possibly wearing a chained collar. At this point, sexual acts like blow jobs and uniforms would be the norm and the blackmailer would start pushing her to orgasm, but never letting her quite cum.

There wouldn't be any really extreme violence, but there would be some form of punishments and challenges he would pose to her

For instance, one task starts with her being told to go to a university's football game and wearing a short skirt and no panties. As the game reaches the second quarter,she actually manages to not be too embarrassed, aside from a couple freshmen taking a peek. However, the blackmailer calls her to let her know that there will be a pan shot of the entire crowd coming up and it will home in on her, showing her pussy to the world. If she tries to avoid it, he'll have her more risque photos revealed on the jumboscreen. The only choice which doesn't have her get revealed is to take one of the freshmen to a men's room stall and satisfy him. (This idea was actually suggested by someone else, but I loved it).

Eventually, her enslavement would become completely sexual, and he would start using her as a sex slave, including using her as entertainment for guests. Having her serve them. However, she'd still be rebellious after all that, and work against her new master.

I have some more detailed ideas, but those I might be a little more comfortable talking about on p.ms.

 

[loquere]

Yeah no, I'd like to see an idea where the girl say's, "do your worst MOTHERFUCKER, fuck off before I cut your bitch ass!" There exists a hefty amount deep sexism and tiny dicked ego's in all these types of idea's and stories.

 

[Sean Renaud]

And yet if spending time on Lit has taught me anything it's that the ladies like these stories as much more more than the men on average.

Though you kinda have to figure out how it starts, that's often the hardest part of these stories because it usually makes NO sense how the woman got trapped in the first place when she could easily have simply shrugged and walked away and been no worse off.

 

[Barca300]

And yet if spending time on Lit has taught me anything it's that the ladies like these stories as much more more than the men on average.

Though you kinda have to figure out how it starts, that's often the hardest part of these stories because it usually makes NO sense how the woman got trapped in the first place when she could easily have simply shrugged and walked away and been no worse off.

For the record, I do know that this kind of fantasy has some seriously sexist elements. However, I'd like to point out that the idea for me to post this request originally started as an idea I had for a gift for my gf. We both enjoy reading literotica, and enjoy these types of stories in particular.

I didn't mean to offend anyone, just for the record (also, I know it was the poster above who wrote about sexism. I just didn't want to reply twice).

As for how it would start, you're right. That's the part that tripped me up, but I'm open to suggestions. It would have to be something good. Someone suggested this

He (the blackmailer) can be genuinely nice, even though its really a display of his control: Fixing the citations on a paper she was writing by remotely accessing her computer, getting her a good internship (though the internship is near where he lives and the owner of the company is one of his clients), and even using his influence to get her grandmother pushed up to the top of a donor list (however, he doesn't hold it over her, threaten to take it away, or even say that it was the reward for being obedient: he does it on a whim as just another reward. This way, she has a warped sense of gratitude towards him; no matter what tasks he sets before her, there's a feeling in the back of her mind that, even without the blackmail, she should keep doing it because he actually takes care of her in a warped way)

 

[loquere]

And yet if spending time on Lit has taught me anything it's that the ladies like these stories as much more more than the men on average.

Though you kinda have to figure out how it starts, that's often the hardest part of these stories because it usually makes NO sense how the woman got trapped in the first place when she could easily have simply shrugged and walked away and been no worse off.

NO!

 

[Sean Renaud]

If you have nothing to contribute. . .

I like the idea of the girl being rewarded. That could work out, I'll kick around a few ideas and see if anything shakes loose. Like I said so many of these stories ultimately come down to a woman was caught in a compromising position, but ultimately a harmless sort of thing that her family would have laughed at her for not disowned her. Then she just plunges a head and usually she's not described as being stupid. Hell it's why I almost recommend telling the stories in some sort of reverse order.

 

[loquere]

If you have nothing to contribute. . .

I like the idea of the girl being rewarded. That could work out, I'll kick around a few ideas and see if anything shakes loose. Like I said so many of these stories ultimately come down to a woman was caught in a compromising position, but ultimately a harmless sort of thing that her family would have laughed at her for not disowned her. Then she just plunges a head and usually she's not described as being stupid. Hell it's why I almost recommend telling the stories in some sort of reverse order.

I can't stomach stories that present women as weak. just like I can't stomach stories that racially stereotype. I racially stereotyped a minor character in my first story, but never again though.

-They do that out on the street, they typecast people on the street. Sean Renaud, your more talented than that. Go make something magical. Something that will outlast us all.

 

[Sean Renaud]

You're sterotyping if you think a woman has to be weak to be a slave.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

I also very much like this idea. The key problem, as Sean points out, is what is the hook? The responses on my posting (below) indicate that nudie picts can be a big deal, and the idea is to lure her in slowly enough to continue to compile stuff to drag her in deeper. Personally, I prefer the blackmailer to be anonymous.

I posted a worakable blackmail scheme earlier in this forum about RAT into a person's computer

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=857644

Scary stuff because it is so real.

 

[MatthewVett]

I have an idea for a story I'd like to see made. If there are any authors interested, feel free to contribute or p.m me, as I'd love to help.

The basic plot would revolve around a girl, who is a rebellious, liberal, gamer with a strong moral center. She would be blackmailed into slavery and, after being broken in through a series of events, would become a slave girl.

It sounds pretty generic, but the uniqueness would come from the details! If I could get help, I'd love to write this as a detailed series, where every step of the girl's gradual enslavement is detailed.

There are a lot of details that I have in my head, and I'd love to keep discussing them with if anyone's interested!

What would a rebellious liberal woman with a strong moral center do that she would allow herself to be blackmailed into slavery over? I mean, she probably wouldn't care about naked pictures or anything, right? The problem I have with most blackmail stories is that the person is blackmailed into something worse than the initial deed, and I'm left thinking that it's completely irrational behavior.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

"The basic plot would revolve around a girl, who is a rebellious, liberal, gamer with a strong moral center. "

not clear what rebellious and gamer have to do with the story.

Liberal makes it more complicated, because generally one assumes that liberals are more "live and let live" types that cultivate similar friends. Options for blackmail require a friction point.

How about she is in active in anti-porn but runs a porn blog? Or a global warming activist but accidentally burned down something in a protest? Or <gasp> is for gun control but has several unlicensed guns? (actually a criminal offenses, so it might work)

>I didn't mean to offend anyone...
And you post on an erotica site? I would recalibrate my expectations if I were you.

 

[ClydeMacGregor]

I have an idea for a story I'd like to see made. If there are any authors interested, feel free to contribute or p.m me, as I'd love to help.

The basic plot would revolve around a girl, who is a rebellious, liberal, gamer with a strong moral center. She would be blackmailed into slavery and, after being broken in through a series of events, would become a slave girl.

It sounds pretty generic, but the uniqueness would come from the details! If I could get help, I'd love to write this as a detailed series, where every step of the girl's gradual enslavement is detailed.

There are a lot of details that I have in my head, and I'd love to keep discussing them with if anyone's interested!

Forget the "rebellious, liberal, gamer" description and set the story in medieval times when slave girls were more common. This premise is more believable but not necessarily more palatable for a wide audience.

 

[MatthewVett]

Forget the "rebellious, liberal, gamer" description and set the story in medieval times when slave girls were more common. This premise is more believable but not necessarily more palatable for a wide audience.

I agree with this. Set it in the past. She could easily be a strong, willful princess whose country loses a war and gets taken by barbarians and enslaved.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

While slavery certainly was a feature of the past, I am pretty sure the goal of this idea is blackmail in the present.

 

[ClydeMacGregor]

I agree with this. Set it in the past. She could easily be a strong, willful princess whose country loses a war and gets taken by barbarians and enslaved.

Precisely and a good suggestion.

 

[ClydeMacGregor]

While slavery certainly was a feature of the past, I am pretty sure the goal of this idea is blackmail in the present.

My interpretation is that blackmail is the means to an end and the end is slavery. Blackmail can be covered in a few paragraphs at the most but slavery can be embellished into long stories.

 

[Sean Renaud]

What would a rebellious liberal woman with a strong moral center do that she would allow herself to be blackmailed into slavery over? I mean, she probably wouldn't care about naked pictures or anything, right? The problem I have with most blackmail stories is that the person is blackmailed into something worse than the initial deed, and I'm left thinking that it's completely irrational behavior.

Just because she's a "liberal" doesn't make her a slut. You are aware of that right? And beyond that it could easily depend on what she wants to do with her life. Teachers for example can't have Playboy Careers, neither can military personel and I'm sure there are a number of other professional jobs that you simply can't have if someone can pull up some pics of you. It's not a matter of YOU being liberal it's about us still living in a fucked up, very bad, no good world.

Besides people behave irrationally all the time.

 

[MatthewVett]

Just because she's a "liberal" doesn't make her a slut. You are aware of that right? And beyond that it could easily depend on what she wants to do with her life. Teachers for example can't have Playboy Careers, neither can military personel and I'm sure there are a number of other professional jobs that you simply can't have if someone can pull up some pics of you. It's not a matter of YOU being liberal it's about us still living in a fucked up, very bad, no good world.

Besides people behave irrationally all the time.

You don't need to be a slut to not be willing to be enslaved over naked pictures...