black woman/ small town

[Cig4r]

Young urban black woman moves to small southern town, meets up with older white man (20 year older).
Him he's into outdoors hunting, fishing...
Her tough time adjusting to new job, local black guys not meeting her standards.
Her shock comes one morning at his house when she walks by hall mirror only wearing his camouflage T shirt.

 

[BlackSnake]

More please.

Why is she in his house? Is her tough time adjusting to her new job because she's his housekeeper? I always believed that city folk a weary of country folk.

 

[Cig4r]

b'snake, why would you think she was house cleaning?
I believe the statement was she was new in town, inferring an education a position with a company and a move to this town due to employment requirements, why else would she move to a smaller town? Sorry if I didn't outline that out completely.

"Weary"ness "country folk", now that's funny stuff.

Why was she in his house, uhhhmmm, maybe they had fucked and when she got up she put on his shirt.

 

[snooper]

... Her shock comes one morning at his house when she walks by hall mirror only wearing his camouflage T shirt.

This is beginning to get interesting. What "shock"?

 

[BlackSnake]

OK, let me try this again:

The black woman moves to a small town from the city. She is having a tuff time adjusting to small town living. The black men that she see are not what she's use to.

She goes to a local diner and an older white man speaks kindly to her. Being a city girl, it doesn't bother her that the gentleman is white.

She feels comfortable talking to this older man and expresses her difficulty adjusting to small town living. The older man has a friendly hear. He tells her what he enjoys doing and it seems adventurous to her.

The older man invites her along on his outings and she enjoys herself.

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OK, I can see this much in your idea. Now, what shocks her? I can see him getting her into bed, but the shock part I'm not understanding.

 

[vargas111]

I think this has possibilities as a really romantic story. It could be developed in parallel as their growing attraction (and her learnig how to hunt and fish <g>) and their "friends" some racist, some just concerned try to disuade them.

They should not get into bed too quick, the IR angle isnot easy for them to accept either. Maybe an outdoors incident is the catalyst for thier first night of passion.

Final scene with them getting married with her already showing with is baby.

 

[jessy19]

This does have a wonderful romantic plot to it all... I love to read stories about black women and white men I might give this one a shot

 

[Cig4r]

Glad to see some interest.
Her educated, job requirement move to small town.
Him local small business owner, at least 20 years older than her, they meet because of business conflict so they are at first argumentive.
Neither "slave girl" nor "weak man", but both on a simular plane.

Opportunity for sex in various "outdoor" situations ie..porch swing, deer camp cabin, duck blind, bass boat, tent, on a 4-wheeler etc...

The "shock" part...surprise me.

 

[BlackSnake]

The "shock" part...surprise me.

OK, if they are already fucking...what could surprise her? She discovers that he's a woman in drag...

 

[Cig4r]

Now that is funny, good "shock" value.

But that isn't really the idea, maybe the "shock" would be that she like's the new county life, if her starting point was being city folk "weary" of country folk.

 

[vargas111]

I think it's better if she is more highly educated, of higher "class" than the white man. So everythig is "agaist" the attraction, age, race, social standing, education, rural.urbn background.

They are brought together by him defending her, out of decency not attraction in some sticky situation.

But don't make him TOO much older, otherwise they don't has as much time to live "happily ever after." <g>

OH, yes and it should end with the birth of a child.