Black Master

[sasha_fem22]

Hello everyone...........All I want is a HOT story about a black guy who is a Master to a submissive, white girl. She's a bit of a brat but he doesn't stand much nonsense from her. It can go as far as you like, short of mutilation, killing, punching. Lots of humiliation and name-calling would be good.
In return, I'm sure I can write you a story about your favourite fantasy........or, uhmmmmmm, perhaps you like to cyber?
Thanx.

Image edited out by Miss T per lit guidelines.

 

[Guest]

You've just described my life with a few past lovers.

 

[Chicklet]

Tiggsy you gonna write it up, then? I can see myself writing it...but then I see myself writing a lot of things.

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

No. I've been too depressed to think about sex or past lovers.

 

[BlackSnake]

No. I've been too depressed to think about sex or past lovers.

I'm sorry that you are not feeling low. It's hard to imagine someone bring down your brightness. The appearance of your AV brightens the threat, hopefully we can do the same for you.

What's your favorite color?

 

[Guest]

What's your favorite color?

Green. Mainly hunter green, but I love any shade of the hue.

Originally posted by Chicklet

Tiggsy you gonna write it up, then?

I've been giving it more thought. Like I've stated in the past, most of my stories have been a blend of fantasies and real life experience.

Several months back I started jotting down notes for a "fantasy" I shared with a man in an online conversation. (I went as far as looking up popular names for certain years since I planned on having multi aged characters.)

Perhaps if I get over this mental block I'll choose this idea as my next story. I know I still have my notes on disk and harddrive.

 

[BlackSnake]

Green. Mainly hunter green, but I love any shade of the hue.

Is that the color of your eyes?

 

[Guest]

Is that the color of your eyes?

When I am genuinly happy they are sienna brown. When I'm depressed they are emerald green. And, for an average day they tend to be olive or sage green.

 

[sasha_fem22]

MMMmmmmmm, well, HeLLO, BlackSnake. And how is Mr.Snake today\night? lol
Thanx, everyone, for your interestin' replies.I'm lookin' forward to hearin' more from you'all.



"Never try to teach a pig to sing, it frustrates you
and annoys the pig." - Mark Twain

 

[BlackSnake]

When I am genuinly happy they are sienna brown. When I'm depressed they are emerald green. And, for an average day they tend to be olive or sage green.

Beautiful....I can feel the lump in my chest grow as I think about gazing into your eyes. I would love to see a larger picture of your beautiful face.

 

[BlackSnake]

MMMmmmmmm, well, HeLLO, BlackSnake. And how is Mr.Snake today\night? lol
Thanx, everyone, for your interestin' replies.I'm lookin' forward to hearin' more from you'all.



"Never try to teach a pig to sing, it frustrates you
and annoys the pig." - Mark Twain

I'm fine, it's fine

 

[Chicklet]

Tiggs, I'm sorry you've been depressed = (

Sasha, do you have a problem with a girl writing this story? Seems like you're trying to get a guy to do it...

Just wondering.

Chicklet

 

[sasha_fem22]

Noooooo, not @ all, Tigs. I suppose I did envision a black guy writin' the story but if a girl here feels inspired that's great with me.
I just want the story.

Image edited by MissT per lit guidelines.

 

[BlackSnake]

Treating women badly is not my game, but if it was a reason to justify the treatment to the character then it would be better for me.

History, the black guy worked for her father and she was around to constantly tease him.

Something where he is getting back at her. Just being a jerk doesn't work for me.

 

[Guest]

Treating women badly is not my game, but if it was a reason to justify the treatment to the character then it would be better for me.

Just remember, there are many submissives who enjoy this kind of treatment sexually. I love being called a whore and a slut when I know it's in sexual context. (If a man called me that during a fight, he'd lose his balls!)

History, the black guy worked for her father and she was around to constantly tease him.

Something where he is getting back at her. Just being a jerk doesn't work for me.

So, maybe the girl was a cock tease? She knew she could turn heads. She knew she could make men twice her age *beg* to fuck her, etc., and she loves the attention! But, maybe she doesn't put out (be it "ever" or "hardly ever").

The main character is tired of getting a hard on (and blue balls) every time he sees her. He feels it's time for revenge! Maybe BDSM wasn't something he was ever into, per se, but he is a "natural Dom". He has a Domineering personality to him. And he has a "sick" (Sadist) mind to him.

Maybe one afternoon he barges into her room or abducts her from the home. She is a fired up lil' brat and is cussin' and trying to hit him, etc. Being older and much stronger, though, it's easy for him to over power her.

This story could either have the *one* sexual encounter or (similar to Anne Rice's The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty) over time he manages to break her will and she learns to submit to him. If the story continues on, their blooming D/s relationship could be "hidden" from her friends and family, etc.

 

[BlackSnake]

He feels it's time for revenge! Maybe BDSM wasn't something he was ever into, per se, but he is a "natural Dom". He has a Domineering personality to him. And he has a "sick" (Sadist) mind to him.

Instead of raping her, he wants her to feel what he has been feeling. Pushing her to the edge of an orgasm, and then backing off to leave her wanting.

She want's to cum, but he won't let her.

 

[Guest]

Hmmmmm, orgasm denial.

 

[BlackSnake]

Seems like a way to build tension.

 

[Chicklet]

on fictional orgasm denial...

i find that a lot of stories i read which include orgasm denial get long and tedious and well boring. if the author that picks this story up uses it, please keep that in mind and try to keep it interesting.

thanks

Chicklet

 

[BlackSnake]

That's a very good point chicklet.

The guy could be getting off himself while teasing the girl. He licks her hot pussy for the taste of her juices. He could jerk off while he is fondling her body, shooting cum on her feet, letting the thick cream run between her toes.

What he does is for his own pleasure, while denying her of any.

 

[sasha_fem22]

MMMmmm, yeah, BlackSnake, the teasin' idea would work for me, where she's just teased and aroused him and then laughed at him once too often.
And was it BlessedBe who expanded on that idea? Mmmmmmm, sounded great to me.
Not so sure about the "not lettin' her cum" idea, Snakey.The guy needs to be VERY mad with her and she is outraged and fightin' him off.I don't know how that would work with her gettin' excited..........perhaps near the end of the story?Maybe after he feels he's got his revenge on her and humiliates her further by gettin' her turned on etc.

 

[Chicklet]

sasha it almost sounds like you want a nonconsent story

 

[BlackSnake]

 

[sasha_fem22]

Well, yeah, Chicklet.............LOL. Whether she's a bratty sub who gets tamed (eventually) by her black Master or if she's a tease who goes too far, I think it has to be non-consensual.She's taking it because He, or the "rapist", tells her to, or makes her.Well, that's what does it for me........ :catgrin

 

[MsLinnet]

Sorry I carn't add any more I tride but I think you have off pat

Love linnet