Black Bird's Improvisational Poetry Thread.

[Black_Bird]

Give me a line or phrase and I'll turn it into a a free form poem.

 

[tigerjen]

here's one...

this was a little girl named tigerjen

 

[perks]

Give me a line or phrase and I'll turn it into a a free form poem.

...I have a sexy stalker

 

[Dhalgren]

The veil lifted around them…the truth, in colors beyond mortal recount..

 

[Guest]

I'm too deep for this board, heh!

 

[SA Storm]

[No message]

 

[LadyDarkFire]

Care to try your hand at this one?

Ignored until Needed

 

[Guest]

Am I the only one sick of the whinny poets? You have your own board now, right?

 

[Svedish_Chef]

Whiny unhappy posters comparing hands

 

[CeceliaSkye]

Within the shadows of her dream, there came.....

 

[Black_Bird]

Re: here's one...

this was a little girl named tigerjen

Everything revolves
Nothing down falls
This was a little girl
Her body kept the stars in line
This was a little girl
Blinded by all seeing eyes

 

[Black_Bird]

Re: Re: Black Bird's Improvisational Poetry Thread.

...I have a sexy stalker

Down the dark alley way
way way too far
Down the black paved streets
like drunkard flesh from the night
I have my sexy stalker
She's every woman on every street corner
I have deadly day
It's everyday I put the bottle to my mouth

 

[Black_Bird]

The veil lifted around them…the truth, in colors beyond mortal recount..

Herd the hypocrites together in one large
Fence in the weak and
Sickly sermons, simple states
Of Mind and Body

The veil lifted around
Them the silent ones in the
Crowd the sinners in with the
Truth, in colors beyond mortal recount.

 

[CeceliaSkye]

Herd the hypocrites together in one large
Fence in the weak and
Sickly sermons, simple states
Of Mind and Body

The veil lifted around
Them the silent ones in the
Crowd the sinners in with the
Truth, in colors beyond mortal recount.

I really like this one...

 

[Black_Bird]

I'm too deep for this board, heh!

I've got holes for wholesale
I've got bullets that fit them
I've got flesh for both
and I've got to hand it to you,
you're one hell of a man 'cus.

I'm not dead enough for this
I'm not deep enough for this
I'm not depressed enough for this
But by the time you are done
what is me will simply be was.

 

[Black_Bird]

And they danced until dawn.

Crystals of flesh
Bone of glass
Toes like dust
Angel wings, moon light and parents eyes...

They danced until dawn.

 

[cymbidia]

Joyfully slipping past what was so confining and into the clear brilliance of what feels without limits...

 

[Black_Bird]

Re: Care to try your hand at this one?

Ignored until Needed

Blood in the shit
Flesh in the piss
Little dolls all strung out on Cocain

Pick out thier eyes
Spit on their skin
And ignore until needed

Flashbacks of Melting
Yearning the devil
Midnight trips the the Hospital.

 

[Black_Bird]

Am I the only one sick of the whinny poets? You have your own board now, right?

*Dances Around* I have a troll! I have a troll... and I'm going to make a poem JUST FOR YOU!

Dickless two twit
Cowardly spit cunt
Blooded little stick
The one that's shoved
So far up
Do you taste
Wood?

 

[Black_Bird]

Whiny unhappy posters comparing hands

Click Clack
Office Day Goes
Click Clack
Whiny Unhappy
Click Clack
Chick in the Cubical
Click Clack
Porn Posters
Click Clack
Comparing Hands
Click Clack

 

[Black_Bird]

Within the shadows of her dream, there came.....

Within the shadows of her dreams, there came
An old man who walked slow with a cane
A child bruised by a day's chain
And the other's who marched in this soft parade.

 

[CeceliaSkye]

Within the shadows of her dreams, there came
An old man who walked slow with a cane
A child bruised by a day's chain
And the other's who marched in this soft parade.

::Claps Hands:: I love it.. thankyou

 

[Black_Bird]

Joyfully slipping past what was so confining and into the clear brilliance of what feels without limits...

... Hon... that's a poem all by itself.

Joyfully slipping
Past, what was so confining?
And into the clear
Brilliance, of what feels
Without limits?
Indeed without limits.

 

[Black_Bird]

::Claps Hands:: I love it.. thankyou

Not bad for a whiney poet, huh?

 

[CeceliaSkye]

Not bad for a whiney poet, huh?

The troll is jealous, I am thinking...