Black beta reader requested

[Kumquatqueen]

Hello, I've nearly written a Valentine's story, but a black male character now has a larger role than originally intended so I'd appreciate a beta reader for parts of it (or the whole thing).

The chap in question is late 20s, cares about his appearance, from South London (UK) and gay. I can provide the whole story or just relevant paragraphs, depending on whether you're OK with lots of gay sex.

I'm reasonably OK with the voice and social attitudes of the guy, seeing as I live among loads of similar Black men in London, but issues about hair and sex have come up in the story so a Black person's insight would be really helpful (and I assume would be the same the world over).

Many thanks.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Just to say that this story was published:
Sex Swing Satisfaction - I did get a beta reader (not black) who thought it seemed OK, though I amended a lot after the draft he read.

Anyone happy to read gay male content, who may be interested in a Valentine's story where a middle-aged couple help get two younger guys back together, please take a look.