Bitch

[Nitsuj]

I still remember the day
when you left me.
I wanted to wake up from a bad dream.
But there never was any last scream.
Reality sunk in way too fast.
I cried so much, it hurt to laugh.
I know it’s been a while,
but I write because of that, and I was in denial.
I’m finally free of the haunting thoughts of your hug.
And how I was so addicted to your drug.
I come to this, sex was great, but one word is all my breath it takes
I mean come on girl, you let me hit it on the second date.
And to be real, that ass was kinda second rate.
You made me feel shitty hoe,
but you and I know, you wouldn’t have any hope,
dressin up for a puff daddy video...
You got skinny bones, no ass, and ya teeth yellow.
A wicked nose, a blown back, and ya feet swell up.
Sure when you kicked me to the street, you were proud
But now I’ve seen the changes and your lifes bottomed out.
If I shed another tear, I’d have to buy new tissue.
I’ve just realized bitch, I can finally dismiss you.!!!

 

[Guest]

1. Oh Yah, you're looking real attractive to the women on the board.

2. Mmmm, let's see critique or counseling?

3. And people wonder why I'm a card carrying member of the NRA.

 

[Masked Poet]

Nitsuj

Welcome to the poetry board, man!

Pay no mind to Poet Comic. The dude hasn't taken a dump in a week, and he's acting like a shit.

I bet this poem felt good to write! I think it's better than slashing her tires. Constructive way to release those pent up frustrations you have due to the bitch's bad behavior. (hey, alliteration!)

Bitch of bad behavior
Who will be her savior
When she stands in the path
Of my awesome poetic wrath

MP

 

[The Poet Comic]

MP, WE, Elda, you crack me up!

 

[Senna Jawa]

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Hi Nitsuj!

13 out of 22 lines of your poem feature "I", and only 9 don't. Now I'll have to check other poems in this respect!

Best regards,