Birthday present

[racerXXXXXX]

I saw this one on a porn video and was thinking about writing a similar story, let me know if would be worth writing...Girl gets a bouquet of flowers at her home from her boyfriend on her birthday, the card says to meet him at a particular hotel, time and room for some brithday fun. So she gets all ready with nothing on but lingerie and a long coat and leaves for the hotel but forgets the card reminding her of the room number and when she arrives at the hotel she gets the room number wrong so she knocks on the door of the wrong room there are three good looking guys in the room, she says are you my birthday present and quick thinking they say yes, so she drops the coat and the three guys converge on her and gangbang the hell out of her. Meanwhile her boyfriend who is in a room a few doors down thinks he has been stood up and as he is walking past the room he hears her moaning with pleasure and listens awhile longer and then opens the door to see her getting splashed with a cum bath.

 

[TheMightyPen]

I would add a video camera to the mix.

 

[Texguy84]

I'd add a car chase in there with some classic muscle cars, but that's me.

This idea definitely sounds fun. Lots of room to take it in different ways from the basic details we have here. You could even play it for comedy by having the boyfriend waiting in the room with two or three of his friends who he was going to have gangbang her instead of the three random dudes she found by accident.

Where did you see this video, out of curiosity? Sounds like it'd make good research material for this story idea.

 

[TheMightyPen]

if you need a character I would enjoy my gf being in your story. we can exchange details if you like.

 

[want2_watchwife]

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[Black_Dahlia]

Maybe the card says something like "tonight I'm going to turn your fantasy into reality" and the girl's not quite sure exactly which fantasy he's referring to, as she has so many. So, when she arrives at the wrong hotel room and finds three men waiting for her, she assumes it's her gangbang fantasy that she'd mentioned ages ago, which her boyfriend had definitely not been keen on. And yet, even though he'd really hated the idea of seeing her fucked in every hole by a group of rough-looking men, he'd arranged this special night for her - isn't he just so sweet?

Meanwhile, on the floor above, the boyfriend sits alone, wearing a white naval uniform, looking like Richard Gere out of An Officer And A Gentleman, which his girlfriend says is the most romantic movie ever. He waits and waits, unaware of his girlfriend being gangbanged by the three men, or that some of the hotel staff and other guests have joined in, taking it in turns to use and abuse the hot slut in room 310. He's tried to call his girlfriend but her phone is off. Dejected, still wearing the uniform, he heads down to the bar to drown his sorrows, and after a couple of beers, he tells the barman he's been stood up by his girlfriend, and the barman says, "Forget about her, pal. If you're looking for a good time,get up to room 310. There's some slut taking on all comers. I'm heading up there myself, when I take my break. According to the night manager, she's had a dozen guys already... "

 

[racerXXXXXX]

I can't remember the name of the video but it was by the studio Devil's Hardcore, in it the girl goes into the room and three black guys are in there.