Targon_2012
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So I have had this scenario in my head for a long time and thought it would make an awesome long story if someone more talented with storytelling ability and ways could do it. I will show you the shortened version below and if anyone thinks they would be interested in making a story out of it please reply or message on here. The basic idea of the story is Femdom around 8 or 9 females against 1 male.
Basic outline of: "Birth of a ladies man".
The story would involve a very shy boyfriend in his late teens who is also inexperienced with girls other than the one he has been currently been with at that time. He would be hanging around his girlfriends house on her computer in her typical girly late teen bedroom while she is sitting watching TV. Both are just bored. The girlfriend would say to the guy that some of her girlfriends are coming over just to hang out and they are ones he knows and goes to the same college with. About 4 show up then shortly after about another 4 show up all ones he knows. He would be surprised at why so many of her friends are suddenly coming over considering not much is going on. He still plays with his computer while all the inane girl talk over college and stuff goes on in the background. He hears his girlfriend say "Carl (his name) come look at this"he turns around shyly asking what then says to him "look! as if she had some sort of object or item she wanted him to see in her tightly grasped hands. He steps up from his chair to go see what she is talking as the other girls just stand there with their arms behind their backs quietly and casually with a slight smile. Next thing his girlfriend says "ok girls get him!" the girls begin to yank at his top and jumper shirt etc and start chasing him round the room stripping him from above the waist first the girls are giggling also. The whole time he is confused and asking "what the hell you doing?!? whats gotten into you all???" his girlfriend who is also helping strip him as he staggers around confused overwhelmed by horny college teen girls, says to him "just take it easy we not going to hurt you we just want to see all of you!" with that the other girls give an enthusiastic light cheer and mutter words like "ohh yehhh". He is then put on the floor while now totally topless. 2 girls sit on his arms as they are just above and behind his head. 1 girl on each arm. the other girls sit around each left and right side staring down at his toned and nice upper body and rubbing their hands across it. His girlfriend then sits in between his legs while he holds his head up and looks at her with a look of surprise but cannot move his head far up due to the girls holding his arms down tightly. He squirms to get free but he is helpless. "relax baby!" the girlfriend says as she starts to undo his belt buckle and looks into his eyes with a mischevious look and the other girls start to smile and mutter words of encouragement. "I gonna show you girls what I'm talking about" referring to his bigger than average penis size which she has bragged about to her girlfriends before. He begins to squirm more She takes off his pants and pulls them right off his legs and takes his socks off with them. she places hes hand on the bulge of his genitals in his boxers (he is not hard perhaps partially erect) then she yanks down his boxers. Light sounds of impressed young women echo the room. She then gently holds his dick and looks right into his eyes as he looks up at her confused. "justttttttt relax" she says as she starts gently tugging his his penis while licking her lips .Some of the other girls sitting around him lick their lips also some lick their lips while looking into his eyes he looks back confused and shocked still and begins to squirm the girls tighten their grips on his arms. "hold him still..." she says while lookin at his penis that she is jerking. An erection forms. "theree we go" she says "its ruler time!" as she brings a ruler out from closeby which she clearly was ready to use and shows it to him before measuring his erection. "Its a seven girls...seven inches!" (more expressions of being impressed are heard from the girls) After a couple of mins she is well into tugging on his penis and the silence in the room is highly relevant as the sexual tension between all of the girls builds and for him. He continiously looks up while his arms are held still and looks into her eyes with some confusion still but also a sense of light arousal in his face as she looks back into his eyes with a very deep and teasing look of:"gotcha!" he also looks to his sides at the girls faces (que a point of view cam shot of the girls faces all looking at him and his body with looks of exitement and sexual arousal and licking their lips and wolf whistles. After another minute of gentle tugging at his penis the girlfriend says to him "you know Carl all these girls in here have had a strong crush on you for sometime now...its why they are here!" they smile and look at him and laugh. Some laugh shyly. "In fact all the girls at school want you as far as I have heard..." he looks up with a look of sheer bafflement wondering why so many girls would find him attractive as he has never seen himself as attractive despite being very attractive. "so you have no reason to be so shy anymore Carl you got it all baby all the ladies want you! so just enjoy this." with this the girls all look into his eyes and smile. With those worlds Carl is less anxious and scared and is more relaxed and laid back as she increases the tempo on jerking his penis. Soon he cums and explodes! the girls raise their arms clapping and cheering! she smiles at him deeply and lovingly in his eyes as the girls holding his arms loosen their grip. He sits there upright lookin at them as they start to stand up and walk away. *later Carl!" they say waving while smiling and giggling. Yeh we going on a girly shopping spree now Carl I see you later baby and kisses his lips and smiles at him in a sexy look like she saying "I have you your mine". The girls all walk out some muttering under their breath words of how impressed at him they are and how cute he is.
The door closes he sits down on his chair totally naked still he sighs and a light smile comes across his face as the screen fades out.
There is the general version of it which I shorted down of course. Do you think this could work? pls someone give me feedback on this story. It would be awesome if it could be done for real on here! I thought the name of it could be called "The birth of a Ladiesman"
Basic outline of: "Birth of a ladies man".
The story would involve a very shy boyfriend in his late teens who is also inexperienced with girls other than the one he has been currently been with at that time. He would be hanging around his girlfriends house on her computer in her typical girly late teen bedroom while she is sitting watching TV. Both are just bored. The girlfriend would say to the guy that some of her girlfriends are coming over just to hang out and they are ones he knows and goes to the same college with. About 4 show up then shortly after about another 4 show up all ones he knows. He would be surprised at why so many of her friends are suddenly coming over considering not much is going on. He still plays with his computer while all the inane girl talk over college and stuff goes on in the background. He hears his girlfriend say "Carl (his name) come look at this"he turns around shyly asking what then says to him "look! as if she had some sort of object or item she wanted him to see in her tightly grasped hands. He steps up from his chair to go see what she is talking as the other girls just stand there with their arms behind their backs quietly and casually with a slight smile. Next thing his girlfriend says "ok girls get him!" the girls begin to yank at his top and jumper shirt etc and start chasing him round the room stripping him from above the waist first the girls are giggling also. The whole time he is confused and asking "what the hell you doing?!? whats gotten into you all???" his girlfriend who is also helping strip him as he staggers around confused overwhelmed by horny college teen girls, says to him "just take it easy we not going to hurt you we just want to see all of you!" with that the other girls give an enthusiastic light cheer and mutter words like "ohh yehhh". He is then put on the floor while now totally topless. 2 girls sit on his arms as they are just above and behind his head. 1 girl on each arm. the other girls sit around each left and right side staring down at his toned and nice upper body and rubbing their hands across it. His girlfriend then sits in between his legs while he holds his head up and looks at her with a look of surprise but cannot move his head far up due to the girls holding his arms down tightly. He squirms to get free but he is helpless. "relax baby!" the girlfriend says as she starts to undo his belt buckle and looks into his eyes with a mischevious look and the other girls start to smile and mutter words of encouragement. "I gonna show you girls what I'm talking about" referring to his bigger than average penis size which she has bragged about to her girlfriends before. He begins to squirm more She takes off his pants and pulls them right off his legs and takes his socks off with them. she places hes hand on the bulge of his genitals in his boxers (he is not hard perhaps partially erect) then she yanks down his boxers. Light sounds of impressed young women echo the room. She then gently holds his dick and looks right into his eyes as he looks up at her confused. "justttttttt relax" she says as she starts gently tugging his his penis while licking her lips .Some of the other girls sitting around him lick their lips also some lick their lips while looking into his eyes he looks back confused and shocked still and begins to squirm the girls tighten their grips on his arms. "hold him still..." she says while lookin at his penis that she is jerking. An erection forms. "theree we go" she says "its ruler time!" as she brings a ruler out from closeby which she clearly was ready to use and shows it to him before measuring his erection. "Its a seven girls...seven inches!" (more expressions of being impressed are heard from the girls) After a couple of mins she is well into tugging on his penis and the silence in the room is highly relevant as the sexual tension between all of the girls builds and for him. He continiously looks up while his arms are held still and looks into her eyes with some confusion still but also a sense of light arousal in his face as she looks back into his eyes with a very deep and teasing look of:"gotcha!" he also looks to his sides at the girls faces (que a point of view cam shot of the girls faces all looking at him and his body with looks of exitement and sexual arousal and licking their lips and wolf whistles. After another minute of gentle tugging at his penis the girlfriend says to him "you know Carl all these girls in here have had a strong crush on you for sometime now...its why they are here!" they smile and look at him and laugh. Some laugh shyly. "In fact all the girls at school want you as far as I have heard..." he looks up with a look of sheer bafflement wondering why so many girls would find him attractive as he has never seen himself as attractive despite being very attractive. "so you have no reason to be so shy anymore Carl you got it all baby all the ladies want you! so just enjoy this." with this the girls all look into his eyes and smile. With those worlds Carl is less anxious and scared and is more relaxed and laid back as she increases the tempo on jerking his penis. Soon he cums and explodes! the girls raise their arms clapping and cheering! she smiles at him deeply and lovingly in his eyes as the girls holding his arms loosen their grip. He sits there upright lookin at them as they start to stand up and walk away. *later Carl!" they say waving while smiling and giggling. Yeh we going on a girly shopping spree now Carl I see you later baby and kisses his lips and smiles at him in a sexy look like she saying "I have you your mine". The girls all walk out some muttering under their breath words of how impressed at him they are and how cute he is.
The door closes he sits down on his chair totally naked still he sighs and a light smile comes across his face as the screen fades out.
There is the general version of it which I shorted down of course. Do you think this could work? pls someone give me feedback on this story. It would be awesome if it could be done for real on here! I thought the name of it could be called "The birth of a Ladiesman"
