Bi Swap

PhoenixLord

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I just had an idea for a swinger story with a twist:

A married couple discus having a foursome with another couple they know. The wife brings it up under the premise of wanting to experiment with another couple and the husband agrees because he secretly wants to see his best friend's wife naked.

They go out to dinner and rent a hotel with two queens and start swapping, first with foreplay and then actively fucking in front of each other (doggystyle). After the wives cum, the first wife suggests the two wives try lesbianism and the husbands watch. They agree and the husbands sit on one bed while their wives 69. After the second round of orgasms, the first wife suggests the two husbands try sucking each other off. The husbands object but eventually agree, then they 69 themselves, then it escalates to the husbands flip fucking. What follows is a bisexual foursome where each partner swaps a few more times, where each hole is filled, and the second wife brings out a strap-on at one point, and they end up getting more raunchy with DPs and Pegging, rimming, etc.

The next morning, both wives reveal they were secretly cheating on their husbands with each other and reveal they wanted to have one night where they could have it out in the open, and the husbands are surprisingly okay with it. After a few more foursomes, the two couples file for an annulment to their respective marriages and start dating each other, eventually getting married to their same-sex partner, but continue fucking as bisexual swingers.

Thoughts? Comments? Ideas on how to improve it?
 
Sounds like a well planned and well balanced tale. Write it up!

The first two acts are a lot like a story I have of two couples new to swapping. The wives "put on a show" for the husbands, but before they start doing the actual MF swapping, they insist that the husbands put on a show for them. The husbands reluctantly do some mutual oral, but then they are happy to spend the rest of the story fucking each other's wives.
 
Don't ruin what could be a great story by smudging it with cheating....
Why even mention it???
The couples enjoyed a rendevous, and they discovered something about themselves.
Yes, they're Bi, but that they're more Bent than straigh.
If you focus on that element, it could be a great story.
An unveiling of sorts....
Write a positive rather than negative story...
Just my thoughts....

Cagivagurl
 
Situation is straight-up swapping, the heavy lean into the bisexual aspects is probably unusual for swapping stories. Be careful about a laundry list of positions, holes, making sure everyone fucks everyone else… can get tedious if the story isn’t advancing as well. The wives admitting to cheating is an interesting twist but having everyone just be okay with it sucks any dramatic tension or interest of out it. Perhaps after the revelation the husbands are pretty hurt and need time… the talk and console each other… which ends up with them sucking and fucking, now without their wives pushing them or giving them “cover”… now they are doing it because they desire each other. Annulments and remarriages seem like a lot for couples who were loose enough to swing and swap. Might make more sense for them to move into one large house where the men sleep together and the women sleep together? Whatever you insert after the cheating revelation, give the characters time to deal with it and returning to the same bed for four-way swapping could signal forgiveness of the cheating.

Just some thoughts
Megan
 
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