I've just submitted my first piece to literotica.. However, I'm desperate for some immediate comments so that I can get on with writing a follow up story as I don't want to feel bored with waiting for the 7 days to pass without seeing my story submitted..
If anyone's interested in reading my first entry, please PM me or comment below.
Also, this first story is non-erotic, it's a buildup to the main story, I'd just like to get some general feedback on how I write, if you like it & want more... etc..
Thanks for your time.
If anyone's interested in reading my first entry, please PM me or comment below.
Also, this first story is non-erotic, it's a buildup to the main story, I'd just like to get some general feedback on how I write, if you like it & want more... etc..
Thanks for your time.