BlueZen
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- Nov 23, 2023
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Hello! I would love and appreciate it if someone would be able to give my story a read through and just share with me their thoughts and understanding of the story. I have an editor already, so what I want to know is if I explained things well enough to come across the way I intend, and if it reads smoothly.
This is a part one of four coming in at just under 10K word processor words. It's going into the BDSM category and some relevant tags are: Male-dominant, female-submissive, chastity, sci-fi (for technology), punishment, spanking, orgasm denial, and anal sex. (It's a little quirky. I write a lot of quirky stuff.)
Ideally I'd share a google doc or email it to you if you're interested in helping me out. (I've never done this, so if there's an established way to share stories, I'll follow the community standards.)
Thanks in advance to anyone who is comfortable with the content and willing to lend me a hand.
This is a part one of four coming in at just under 10K word processor words. It's going into the BDSM category and some relevant tags are: Male-dominant, female-submissive, chastity, sci-fi (for technology), punishment, spanking, orgasm denial, and anal sex. (It's a little quirky. I write a lot of quirky stuff.)
Ideally I'd share a google doc or email it to you if you're interested in helping me out. (I've never done this, so if there's an established way to share stories, I'll follow the community standards.)
Thanks in advance to anyone who is comfortable with the content and willing to lend me a hand.
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