jsmiam
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I have a just-about complete story where I'd welcome a little help from a beta reader, proofreader, or editor. It's as complete as my stories usually are when I submit them, except I'm trying this proofreader thing to find a few of my mistakes before publishing (for a change...) 
It's about 19,000 words (6 Literotica pages, 39 printed pages with 11 pt font double spaced), and the content centers on rimming (mostly), plus group sex, a little anal sex, some girl-girl sex, as well as sex involving the protagonist and a pair of sisters, but not incest between the sisters. I also label it "light fetish" since the rimming is such an over-the-top part of the plot, and also because one element of the plot, I admit, may strike some as a little weird. Cracked, even, but all in good fun.
Please PM if you'd be interested? I use the completely free web based version of Word Online (no install, logging in, or creating accounts required, just a browser and me providing the web address.) I think/hope there would be few enough glaring errors that a volunteer reader might be fine just reading and composing an email/PM, rather than adding comments to the document directly, but up to you. (FYI, "Word Online" is not exactly identical to "real" MS Word; beta readers/editors can add comments and modify text, but there isn't full-featured "track changes")
And if you're an Author also, I'd be happy to trade proofreading efforts with you.
Thanks in advance!
It's about 19,000 words (6 Literotica pages, 39 printed pages with 11 pt font double spaced), and the content centers on rimming (mostly), plus group sex, a little anal sex, some girl-girl sex, as well as sex involving the protagonist and a pair of sisters, but not incest between the sisters. I also label it "light fetish" since the rimming is such an over-the-top part of the plot, and also because one element of the plot, I admit, may strike some as a little weird. Cracked, even, but all in good fun.

Please PM if you'd be interested? I use the completely free web based version of Word Online (no install, logging in, or creating accounts required, just a browser and me providing the web address.) I think/hope there would be few enough glaring errors that a volunteer reader might be fine just reading and composing an email/PM, rather than adding comments to the document directly, but up to you. (FYI, "Word Online" is not exactly identical to "real" MS Word; beta readers/editors can add comments and modify text, but there isn't full-featured "track changes")
And if you're an Author also, I'd be happy to trade proofreading efforts with you.
Thanks in advance!