Beta reader needed...please?

[Vermilion]

24k, mostly hetero, very hot sex. Am hoping to send it for publication, but I could really use a beta reader just to check it for consistency, likeable characters, hotness etc.
Don't worry too much about grammar etc unless you really enjoy doing the nit-picking thing, I really just need an unbiased second pair of eyes...

pwetty pwease...
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[S-Des]

Well, if you're going to ask all nicely and stuff....

 

[Vermilion]

Well, if you're going to ask all nicely and stuff....

Dude. You rock. Thanks

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