Best MMF story?

My Halloween story has been posted and may have some interest for MMF fans. It's an incest story, which I know may not appeal to some. While the brother doesn't go completely gay in this story, there's lots of cum eating, anal play, and gay/bi related material. Hope you enjoy. Here's a link: https://www.literotica.com/s/my-sisters-potion

That story was amazing, especially when the sister had control over her brother. I really came hardreading that.
 
That story was amazing, especially when the sister had control over her brother. I really came hardreading that.

Thanks, Dbaggins. I am working on a follow-up. It's on its third draft at this point. Hope to finish and post it soon. In the follow-up, he will go full gay in front of his sister. :)
 
My Halloween story has been posted and may have some interest for MMF fans. It's an incest story, which I know may not appeal to some. While the brother doesn't go completely gay in this story, there's lots of cum eating, anal play, and gay/bi related material. Hope you enjoy. Here's a link: https://www.literotica.com/s/my-sisters-potion

Not usually into the incest stories, but you took this down a whole different avenue which was refreshing. I think it's a great one and with the potion and the sister's proclivity for M/M, I'm excited to see where you take the next chapter(s).

Definitely getting my vote in the Halloween contest. I'd have to rate it five hard cocks (I mean stars, lol).
 
Rejects

Not sure if it is happening to any other satisfied readers who take the time to send a message to an author’s contact, but I am constantly getting a “Sorry, cannot send mail to xxxxxxx”.
I have sent a note asking about this, but as is typical, have not gotten a response.
Anyone else having this problem??
 
Not sure if it is happening to any other satisfied readers who take the time to send a message to an author’s contact, but I am constantly getting a “Sorry, cannot send mail to xxxxxxx”.
I have sent a note asking about this, but as is typical, have not gotten a response.
Anyone else having this problem??

I usually come back into the Forum section and try to look up their name in the search tool...then send a PM. Never had much luck or response from the "send author a message" option?
 
And to all you other authors on this thread:

Please, let us know when you have a story up. In my opinion, it doesn't really even matter if it's a bisex story or not. If you're looking for readers who should have a more open mind than some out there, who better than your friends here? Besides, while we're very partial to bi stuff, I think we're all interested in reading a good story.

I'll take you up on you're offer. My latest effort is a 3 part cuckold story...A Cuckold's Journey. It is what I would cal a loving three-way relationship between a wife with a sub husband and her dominant boss. I was trying to show that not all cuckold relationships follow the harsh and abusive trope so common in this genre. If interested, just follow the link below to my story page. Thanks for the offer to spread the word a bit ;)
 
author feedback

It has become more than evident that the moderators for the stories are either too lazy or incompetent to be aware of their site. Having talked with numerous authors it would appear the only way they are able to get feedback is if they have email addresses on their profile.
The authors blame the readers for lack of feedback, but in fact, it is the failing of the contact page.
Would be nice if someone would fix the problem. I have sent several notices to the "dark side", but have heard nothing back.

So from me - you that author bi-stories, as well as all venues are doing a great job. Keep it up...
 
Just read a great story and wanted to share. Wanted to send comment to author but still am unable. So here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/double-the-presents
Hope you enjoy.

Thanks for posting. The premise for the story was great. A little bit rushed though. I know how the author felt. He started slow then jumped into some crazy action (ie at the end when he fucks him just happens). With a little work this could be even better.

That said i liked it and it made me hard.
 
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It has become more than evident that the moderators for the stories are either too lazy or incompetent to be aware of their site. Having talked with numerous authors it would appear the only way they are able to get feedback is if they have email addresses on their profile.
The authors blame the readers for lack of feedback, but in fact, it is the failing of the contact page.
Would be nice if someone would fix the problem. I have sent several notices to the "dark side", but have heard nothing back.

So from me - you that author bi-stories, as well as all venues are doing a great job. Keep it up...

As one who writes stories here, the comments are appreciated. I've been able to receive an email notice for messages, so it seems to work. All authors have the option to turn off the comment function, and that may be the case here. Have you tried leaving your feedback in the comments section at the end of the story? In general we can see; the number of views, the number of comments, the number of favorites and the average scoring. Another thought, you may be able to look the user name up here on the forum and send a PM. Anyway, CuriousMe...thanks for being one of the rare ones who leave comments ~ :rose:
 
Yukon is correct.

As authors on this site, we have the option to allow or disallow feedback. Not many utilize this option, but some do. I, myself, have turned off anonymous feedback, primarily because I found the kind of feedback I was getting from readers who refused to give their "names" weren't giving me anything that helped further my writing.

So, it is possible that the particular author you speak of has turned off feedback of any kind. Doesn't happen often, but it's a personal choice...

Just keep reading, Keep trying to send feedback to the authors when you can, and if you can't, move on to the next story and hopefully that author will allow you to tell them what you think.
 
Yukon is correct.

As authors on this site, we have the option to allow or disallow feedback. Not many utilize this option, but some do. I, myself, have turned off anonymous feedback, primarily because I found the kind of feedback I was getting from readers who refused to give their "names" weren't giving me anything that helped further my writing.

So, it is possible that the particular author you speak of has turned off feedback of any kind. Doesn't happen often, but it's a personal choice...

Just keep reading, Keep trying to send feedback to the authors when you can, and if you can't, move on to the next story and hopefully that author will allow you to tell them what you think.

This issue of feedback comes up quite often in the Authors Forum. The abusive anonymous comments tend to cluster around certain subject matter and in certain categories. For the most part Gay Male and Transgender/Crossdressers aren't one of those. I leave my stories open to comments and simply delete the vitriolic and ugly ones. I agree with susurrus, Leave your feedback in the same way we leave our stories...as a gift to those who might find it. I for one read all comments and appreciate them.

PS: For those who might be interested; If you have a story in your head that you wish would be written, don't overlook the Story Ideas Forum. Someone may just take it up and write it ;)
 
Yukon is correct.

As authors on this site, we have the option to allow or disallow feedback. Not many utilize this option, but some do. I, myself, have turned off anonymous feedback, primarily because I found the kind of feedback I was getting from readers who refused to give their "names" weren't giving me anything that helped further my writing.

So, it is possible that the particular author you speak of has turned off feedback of any kind. Doesn't happen often, but it's a personal choice...

Just keep reading, Keep trying to send feedback to the authors when you can, and if you can't, move on to the next story and hopefully that author will allow you to tell them what you think.

Great advice
 
my conservative wife reborn

After five years of marriage ( my second marriage ) our sex life got a little boring. My wife, by every stretch of the imagination, is a very liberated and sexual woman. She has no problem telling me what's on her mind and is quite a bundle of sexual energy but with that mindset, she is also loyal to me. My wife is a double for the later version of Kelly Bundy ( Christina Applegate ). I had to find some some way to spice it up a little and I made it was my mission to provide her with pleasure as a way to express my total love for her. As I experimented with different techniques the one thing that drove her really wild was role play. While eating her beautiful pussy I'd tell her how one of the black guys I knew and worked with wanted to eat her and fuck her silly. As I feasted on her wonderful pussie I told her she knew him very well, and that he had the biggest cock I ever saw. By this time she is just gushing with pussy juice. Out of breath and barely able to speak, she softly asked me if it was John, to which I replied,"yes". I move up on my wife and stuck my cock into the wettest cunt ever. While gently fucking my lusting bride I realized I struck one hell of a sexual nerve. I whispered in her ear that John asked me to ask you, if the situation presented itself would you suck his big black cock and the fuck him. That set her off bigtime! I've never seen her in such a lustfull a condition. She was was going off like firecrackers, her cunt actually squeezing my cock. As my wife lay there possessed by pure lust, she looked me right in the eye and told me that if I was OK with it then John can have his wish. Those words did me in and opened the floodgates. A few days went by and on my way out the door I kissed my wife good-by and asked her if everything she said the other night was a fluke. She smiled at me and said "not at all". Later that day I told John that my Cyndy was OK with his advances and my beautiful is available tonight, won't she be surprised! When we arrived at the house we could hear my wife in the shower. I hollered to her "I'm home", "be out in a minute" she replied. As John sat down I got us beer while waiting. A few minutes went by when the bathroom door opened and my beautiful naked wife entered the living to greet me unaware we had company. As John watched my naked wife his huge cock bulging in his pants. I kissed wife hello and turned my unsuspecting wife towards John for introduction. John stood to greet her giving her a good view of his monster bulge. My wife just looked at me with glazed eyes, knees trembling mumbling"OH MY" and blurted out"hi". As John hugged my naked wife I told her everything is OK, John knows of our little talk. I asked John to show Cyndy his cock. My wife sat down on our easy chair as John stood in front of her undoing his pants and pulling out his cock. Once out, he gently rubbed the head of his cock all over her lovely face moistening her beatiful lips with pre cum. I bent over, kissed my wifes moist lips and explained we were out of beer and that I'd be back in a little while with more asking my wife to keep John company while I'm gone. Knowing my wife was getting the fucking of her life made it very hard to shop for beer with a raging hardon. An hour went by, time to head back. When I entered the house I witnessed the hottest scene of my entire life. There, on the floor, lying on her back, legs wide open, her beautiful and freshly fucked cunt oozing cum out of this gaping hole with large deposits of John's sperm just inside her opening. I watched in amazement as my wife, just laying there, eyes glazed over in lust, mouth wide open as John, kneeling by her face, unloading another huge load of cum into her wide open mouth and all over her face. When he finished with my wifes mouth he squeezed one last big drop of cum which my wife, staring me in the eyes with a look of total lustful bliss, lovingly tongued out of his piss slit. While Jonn put himself back together I just gazed down at my beautiful wife Cyndy knowing how much she enjoyed herself. She asked me if I thought she went to far over the line. I layed down with my face between her legs and ate the hottest, messiest creampie. As I poked my tongue deep into her ass I slowly worked it up to her pussy scooping up all the cum. While eating her to another orgasm I took a moment to ask her if next time I could eat her while Ken fucked her. Her reply, "I'm OK with if your OK with it.
 
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After five years of marriage ( my second marriage ) our sex life got a little boring. My wife, by every stretch of the imagination, is a very liberated and sexual woman. She has no problem telling me what's on her mind and is quite a bundle of sexual energy but with that mindset, she is also loyal to me. My wife is a double for the later version of Kelly Bundy ( Christina Applegate ). I had to find some some way to spice it up a little and I made it was my mission to provide her with pleasure as a way to express my total love for her. As I experimented with different techniques the one thing that drove her really wild was role play. While eating her beautiful pussy I'd tell her how one of the black guys I knew and worked with wanted to eat her and fuck her silly. As I feasted on her wonderful pussie I told her she knew him very well, and that he had the biggest cock I ever saw. By this time she is just gushing with pussy juice. Out of breath and barely able to speak, she softly asked me if it was John, to which I replied,"yes". I move up on my wife and stuck my cock into the wettest cunt ever. While gently fucking my lusting bride I realized I struck one hell of a sexual nerve. I whispered in her ear that John asked me to ask you, if the situation presented itself would you suck his big black cock and the fuck him. That set her off bigtime! I've never seen her in such a lustfull a condition. She was was going off like firecrackers, her cunt actually squeezing my cock. As my wife lay there possessed by pure lust, she looked me right in the eye and told me that if I was OK with it then John can have his wish. Those words did me in and opened the floodgates. A few days went by and on my way out the door I kissed my wife good-by and asked her if everything she said the other night was a fluke. She smiled at me and said "not at all". Later that day I told John that my Cyndy was OK with his advances and my beautiful is available tonight, won't she be surprised! When we arrived at the house we could hear my wife in the shower. I hollered to her "I'm home", "be out in a minute" she replied. As John sat down I got us beer while waiting. A few minutes went by when the bathroom door opened and my beautiful naked wife entered the living to greet me unaware we had company. As John watched my naked wife his huge cock bulging in his pants. I kissed wife hello and turned my unsuspecting wife towards John for introduction. John stood to greet her giving her a good view of his monster bulge. My wife just looked at me with glazed eyes, knees trembling mumbling"OH MY" and blurted out"hi". As John hugged my naked wife I told her everything is OK, John knows of our little talk. I asked John to show Cyndy his cock. My wife sat down on our easy chair as John stood in front of her undoing his pants and pulling out his cock. Once out, he gently rubbed the head of his cock all over her lovely face moistening her beatiful lips with pre cum. I bent over, kissed my wifes moist lips and explained we were out of beer and that I'd be back in a little while with more asking my wife to keep John company while I'm gone. Knowing my wife was getting the fucking of her life made it very hard to shop for beer with a raging hardon. An hour went by, time to head back. When I entered the house I witnessed the hottest scene of my entire life. There, on the floor, lying on her back, legs wide open, her beautiful and freshly fucked cunt oozing cum out of this gaping hole with large deposits of John's sperm just inside her opening. I watched in amazement as my wife, just laying there, eyes glazed over in lust, mouth wide open as John, kneeling by her face, unloading another huge load of cum into her wide open mouth and all over her face. When he finished with my wifes mouth he squeezed one last big drop of cum which my wife, staring me in the eyes with a look of total lustful bliss, lovingly tongued out of his piss slit. While Jonn put himself back together I just gazed down at my beautiful wife Cyndy knowing how much she enjoyed herself. She asked me if I thought she went to far over the line. I layed down with my face between her legs and ate the hottest, messiest creampie. As I poked my tongue deep into her ass I slowly worked it up to her pussy scooping up all the cum. While eating her to another orgasm I took a moment to ask her if next time I could eat her while Ken fucked her. Her reply, "I'm OK with if your OK with it.

Did John watch you eat his cum from her? You didn't want to clean him up?
 
Did John watch you eat his cum from her? You didn't want to clean him up?

No, Not this time. I urged him to leave so I could be alone with my wife. I must say she was quite puzzled at my enthusiasm for pleasuring her in that manner. I had an older friend with a wife not capable of sexual activity that I met before I met my wife, a very long story by itself. Long story short I serviced him countless times before I remarried and having a man's sperm in my mouth was nothing new for me. I'm pretty sure it was then my wife realised I might be bi and seemed to be turned on by it. I did admit to her that I thought he had a really nice cock and I wanted to watch it in her up close and personal and expressed my interest in eating her while he fucked her and she was cool with that. After many discussions on the subject and reassuring each other that it would not damage our marriage and we would remain true to each other we promised each other to only have fun out in the open as we planned our next get together with John. Sex was never hotter between us!! We made our fantasy a hot reality. I asked John over the house for a beer and ran our fantasy by him while the wife was out on errands. It was a hard sell to John, who wanted nothing to do with his cock that close to a man's mouth. I told John that my Cyndy was very hot on this idea of two men pleasuring her at the same time. I told John how he turned my shy, but sexually liberated wife into a cum craving puddle goo. As John sipped his beer, steeped in deep thought, Cyndy walked in, radiant and smiling away wearing a thin soft yellow sundress which clung to her beautiful body like a second skin and almost see thru. When she saw John her face flushed red as she walked towards John to say hi. When John got up to hug her his big black cock got there first. I'm trying to convince John to join us in our little threesome without much success. As John and I sat down Cyndy looked at me and said "let me try". This women, who I thought I knew intimately, hiked up her dress, removed her soft panties so John could clearly see her beautiful pussy. Then to my amazement, she knelt between his legs undid his pants and pulled out his huge black cock. Her tiny fingers could not wrap all the way around its girth. As my Cyndy stared right into my eyes, she leaned forward pulling Johns cock to her lips. Without losing eye contact with me she placed the tip of her tongue deep in his piss slit gently slurping up his precum. Seeing my wifes soft milky white face making passionate oral love to this big black cock had me on the verge without even touching myself. Cyndy softly said "honey sit here real close to me so you can watch me suck John's big cock". I watched as Cyndy's mouth stretched over the head. She gently sucked the tip while slowly moving both hands up and down the hugh shaft. "That's it"," just like that" John said, he was getting close. "Cyndy" he uttered " I want your hubby to watch my cock fill your mouth with my cum". As I leaned in real close I could see my wifes mouth and face covered with precum and spit." Suck it hard baby here it cums". As my Cyndy pulled off just little and turned towards me, I could see John's thick pearly sperm flowing non stop into her open mouth. Cyndy was swirling her tongue around trying to make room for this huge load of cum. John pulled his still spasm cock out of her mouth to put his finishing touch all over her face. She moved closer to me to show me all the cum John unloaded. Her lower mouth was so full that if she tilted her head forward it would flow over her lips. Cyndy pulled my face to hers and put her mouth to mine in a gentle kiss using her tongue to push this really thick cum into my mouth. It felt like warm jello, a sensation I'm all too familiar with. John agreed to join us. I asked John if I could try something."Go ahead" he replied. I put his cock in my mouth and cleaned it off for him while Cyndy watched in amazement. As I licked and cleaned his cock I reminded him he has one more task to take care of. At this time time my wife was totally naked, took John's hand, led him into the bedroom where she was pounded into lustful insanity. No sex that night LOL sore for a week. I did give John a blowjob later on that week and asked him to rate who was better. We continued to meet with John. Just our little secret. I did eat my wife while she got pounded. The absolute hottest sex ever!!! I have more to share later.
 
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