Best friend's mom

[flopnut]

You're supposed to meet your best friend at his house. His mom answer's the door in a towel and says he just called and says he'll be home in 45 minutes. You don't have any way to get home, so she invites you to come in and wait for him, only she's in a huge rush to go somewhere. You sit down on the couch and she starts running around to get ready and eventually goes in to take a shower. Only she's in such a hurry, she forgets to close the door all the way, so you can see her while she's undressing and showering. Maybe she's in such a hurry that she puts her towel back on afterward and it starts falling off while she's getting ready, or maybe she's in such a rush that she doesn't put on underwear. You decide from here

 

[Fantasies_only]

You're supposed to meet your best friend at his house. His mom answer's the door in a towel and says he just called and says he'll be home in 45 minutes. You don't have any way to get home, so she invites you to come in and wait for him, only she's in a huge rush to go somewhere. You sit down on the couch and she starts running around to get ready and eventually goes in to take a shower. Only she's in such a hurry, she forgets to close the door all the way, so you can see her while she's undressing and showering. Maybe she's in such a hurry that she puts her towel back on afterward and it starts falling off while she's getting ready, or maybe she's in such a rush that she doesn't put on underwear. You decide from here

I can see the potential.
The problem is this is too general a situation.
We need specifics for it to work.
Now I know a story starter doesn't deal in specifics, but you should have a general idea of where to go with the storyline, the characters involved, and the relationship of the characters.
Saying "best friend" is kinda generalizing it.

 

[agedmac]

noted one earlier from real life when I was much much younger. Visiting at my cousin's..he had to run an errand and I sat on the couch, watching tv. His mom (yes, my aunt) came out singing softly, went to the kitchen, bent over got something from under the sink; then got a drink of water, came over and sat on the edge of the couch watching tv. Oh, did I forget to mention she was naked? GRIN

OK, she eventually glanced over and saw me. Her hand to her mouth, she sat there for several seconds before squealing and running out of the room.

OK, where does the story go? I would suggest NOT in the expected direction (somehow he seduces her). Instead, she gets turned on by the fact that she has exposed herself accidently and the story line becomes her doing it again, only not with a relative! (oh, btw, nothing happened in real life either...she blushed a lot around me for a few weeks!)

 

[tommcgee]

Not sure if it is a match... but I have a series started called "The Seduction of Kathy." Check it out, maybe you'll like it.

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

check out the "mature" section - I think there are quite a few stories built upon such a premise. The chance, unplanned, accidental, unintended aspect of the encounter is enticing, if not a bit predictable...

 

[the_new_guy_234]

This is definitely a good idea for a story and i have considered writing one myself based on a similar premise. The problem is that there are so many of these stories around that theres no point in me writing another until i can think of something that will make it stand out.

 

[JRaven]

This is definitely a good idea for a story and i have considered writing one myself based on a similar premise. The problem is that there are so many of these stories around that theres no point in me writing another until i can think of something that will make it stand out.

To be honest, the fact that it's a story YOU wrote would make it unique amongst the others. Don't worry about how many times it's been done. Make it YOURS.

Jenny

 

[the_new_guy_234]

To be honest, the fact that it's a story YOU wrote would make it unique amongst the others. Don't worry about how many times it's been done. Make it YOURS.

Jenny

I see what you're saying but i would really like to make the story a little different so that when someone has finished reading it they don't feel like its the exact same story they've read 100 times before.