RisiaSkye
Artistic
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- May 1, 2000
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Hey all....
I recently posted a non-erotic poem called "In Memory of Naomi" and really need some feedback on it. It's only gotten a few votes, and very little e-mail, so it's hard for me to judge the response. And, because it's a big departure for me, I could really use a little help.
Anyone? Here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14475
Thanks in advance..and if you give me a title, I'll gladly return the favor!
Risia
[Edited by RisiaSkye on 06-03-2001 at 03:17 AM]
I recently posted a non-erotic poem called "In Memory of Naomi" and really need some feedback on it. It's only gotten a few votes, and very little e-mail, so it's hard for me to judge the response. And, because it's a big departure for me, I could really use a little help.
Anyone? Here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14475
Thanks in advance..and if you give me a title, I'll gladly return the favor!
Risia
[Edited by RisiaSkye on 06-03-2001 at 03:17 AM]
