Well ok, maybe not brutal, but frank, honest and constructive.
My first piece was published today and i'm really anxious to get some helpful feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39367
Just in case anyone may be offended the story does have a BDSM theme but nothing at all extreme.
Thank you in advance for your time.
My first piece was published today and i'm really anxious to get some helpful feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39367
Just in case anyone may be offended the story does have a BDSM theme but nothing at all extreme.
Thank you in advance for your time.
