BDSM Story

[MzDeviancy]

Hello all you lovely BDSM people;

I've been writing - off and on - a BDSM story that I'd like to get some feedback on. Before anyone starts in on me about this belonging in Story Feedback, I posted this here because I'd like to have some actual BDSM folk giving me criticism now because that's the audience it will be posted for.

I'm not looking for an editor to comb through for spelling and grammar errors, just someone to look at the BDSM aspects of my story and make suggestions/comments.

Any help is greatly appreciated.

 

[LadyAria]

Hello all you lovely BDSM people;

I've been writing - off and on - a BDSM story that I'd like to get some feedback on. Before anyone starts in on me about this belonging in Story Feedback, I posted this here because I'd like to have some actual BDSM folk giving me criticism now because that's the audience it will be posted for.

I'm not looking for an editor to comb through for spelling and grammar errors, just someone to look at the BDSM aspects of my story and make suggestions/comments.

Any help is greatly appreciated.

Include your link. I'll go take a look.

 

[graceanne]

Yeah, a link would be very helpful.

 

[MzDeviancy]

I meant the story is still being written. I'd have to e-mail it to anyone willing to have a look.

 

[FurryFury]

I meant the story is still being written. I'd have to e-mail it to anyone willing to have a look.

Feel free to PM your story. I'd be happy to look at it.

Fury

 

[babiesmiles]

I read your other stories and even if not my "genre" they were plausible and well written ( english is not my first language but I am able to distinguish a good story from a poor one ) .

 

[MzDeviancy]

I read your other stories and even if not my "genre" they were plausible and well written ( english is not my first language but I am able to distinguish a good story from a poor one ) .

Thank you very much ;o)

 

[WyldChylde]

Feel free to shoot me a copy if you like. I actually work as a tutor in the writing and speech center at my univeristy, so I'm VERY used to looking over things and helping writers out without acting as an editor.