BDSM and Time Stopping hijinks

John Blackhawk

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Ok lets say you had a time stopping device and an interest in enslaving a girl in a BDSM context. What would you do?
 
How does the time stopping device work, do you just hit the button and everything stops, presumably except you?

Not sure how you would use this to enslave somebody, that would need them to the be moving too. Perhaps anyone your touching when you press the button remains in motion like you.

It certainly has a lot of possibilities from a voyeurism point of view, imagine stopping time in a busy train carriage. You could walk up and down checking out all the people on the train, perhaps you could slip a pair of panties around a girls ankles, unzip a guys fly and hang his cock out and then restart time...
 
I wouldn't call it BDSM since while you certainly could use it to antagonize and enslave someone, there's no real trust or consent with the premise (unless you wanted to make the story about a guy who uses the device to spice up his love life with a consenting partner.

Silverswords is right, you would need to explain the time stop. Maybe have it so anything you touch while time is stopped can move but verrrry slowly. Otherwise, you're having instantly fast touches, penetrations, and fondling occurring which would probably more likely end in someone's death rather than any sexy times.

Silversword: it would probably work by the time stopper using their power to seem omnipotent. For example. Let's say the victim is a coworker. Time stopper stops time and types a message on her screen. Coworker thinks someone hacked her but of course there's no proof. The messages become more and more sexual and demanding.

For example:

YOU'RE PANTIES ARE DRENCHED

"You're insane"

*time stop*

THEY FEEL DRENCHED

*reaches beneath her skirt or pants and finds her panties are gone*

Time stopper torments them for the rest of the day. Fondling and caressing her whole time is stopped makes her think she' should becoming aroused by it all. As the story progresses, she eventually submits as she's at the time stopper's mercy.
 
We can't really stop external time. We *can* (theoretically) accelerate ourselves to move much faster than can be discerned by most life forms. (Insects with very high visual frame rates could still see us.) Alas, we'd either burn to a crisp whilst speeding along, or freeze into an ice chunk when the acceleration stops. Oops.

Let's try a magical time-plug that handles those nasty kinetic energy issues. And it's magical enough that it only affects the bearer, not anything or anyone they touch. Now you glide up to your victim with the leather harness in which to ensnare them... but wait! The harness isn't affected by the magic field, so it's too static to move. Oops.

Okay, let's tweak the magic a little. Now the mystic field envelops you and whatever you wish to speed along with you. You gesture at the harness and it becomes pliant. You glide up to your victim and fit the harness to their static-frozen body. Hmm, can't get it tight, because their clothes are frozen. How to thaw the clothes but not the person? Magic, sure. With magic, you can do anything. Until the magic runs out.

For drama, magic has a price. Using magic costs you -- vigor, or lifetime, or brainpower. Cost-free magic means you can do anything without resistance, fine for a stroker fantasy but feh. Total power means total corruption and no plot. That's why I dislike mindcontrol stories. They're for lazy authors.

Forget all the quibbles. Write a stroker. Wave your authorial hands and invoke magic. Lead the reader through LIT fantasyland. It's all for fun, and quite forgetable. Enjoy.
 
How does the time stopping device work, do you just hit the button and everything stops, presumably except you?

Not sure how you would use this to enslave somebody, that would need them to the be moving too. Perhaps anyone your touching when you press the button remains in motion like you.

It certainly has a lot of possibilities from a voyeurism point of view, imagine stopping time in a busy train carriage. You could walk up and down checking out all the people on the train, perhaps you could slip a pair of panties around a girls ankles, unzip a guys fly and hang his cock out and then restart time...

Think of it from more of a non-conscent view. After the target is picked, go into her workplace, strip her, put in pleasure devices, find her contact information and redress her. Then exit and contact her. If she trys to resist, creatively punish her

if she tries to remove the pleasure devices, stop time and keep putting them back in her

now punishments this is where i need creative advice on.

So far i have blackmail pictures with coworkers
stripping her clothing off one piece at a time using time stop
 
Think of it from more of a non-conscent view. After the target is picked, go into her workplace, strip her, put in pleasure devices, find her contact information and redress her. Then exit and contact her. If she trys to resist, creatively punish her

if she tries to remove the pleasure devices, stop time and keep putting them back in her

now punishments this is where i need creative advice on.

So far i have blackmail pictures with coworkers
stripping her clothing off one piece at a time using time stop

Perhaps it doesn't need to be put back in perhaps the scenario can dictate it. Going back to the train carriage idea stop time, insert one of the those remote control vibes.

Perhaps you are sitting opposed the woman, maybe she's with her boyfriend. Stop time, insert the device, redress her so everything looks as it did before. Then simply restart time, she'll know something is amiss but can't so anything about it on a busy train.

Then you turn it on, she doesn't know where to look, maybe at her boyfriend, surely it can't have been anyone else could it. You start to increase the speed and you can see the conflict, she try desperately to get her boyfriend to stop but he's clueless. She pulls him in close trying to hide but she can't help but gasp when she inevitably comes.

Everyone turns to look at her she's flushed both from her orgasm and with embarrassment. You turn the turn the device off, and she seems to relax. Her boyfriend gives he a really funny look, and then you turn it back on...
 
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