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[James G 5]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: James' Story!!

LOL, you are really too funny


But HELL YA on the idea

Funny?
HOW am I funny?
Do I make you LAUGH?
Am I a CLOWN, here to AMUSE you?

 

[redelicious]

James

What's Kallima?

Red

(showing her ignorance again)

 

[Cipher]

Re: Re: James' Story!

Glad ya liked it
I use some odd phrasing & archaic words to give feeling & atmosphere
Makes the spell&vocabulary checkers go NUTS tho LOL
And I try to confine my deviousness to stories & willing play partners
For my NEXT topic.......was thinking about a Kallima story
I have trouble writing about things that're too close to home, but I'm plugging way (so to speak) at a story with Porphry in it, based on actual incidents
We'll see

Actually, i like that way you used your words..in vampire stories, i feel it almost necessary to speak with "vampiric articulation"..
When vamp stories are just like "ohh suck my blood"..that's a turn off for me. Like i said..your story was very well written..i do hope you do more.

Red, i hate a ditz..LoL So i understand what you mean..LoL

 

[redelicious]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: James' Story!!

Funny?
HOW am I funny?
Do I make you LAUGH?
Am I a CLOWN, here to AMUSE you?

Yes
You have a wicked sence of humor
Yes
Hmmm, doesn't seem like you . . .

*Face reddening, eyes downward*
Perhaps I mispoke. Please forgive me. *plaintive smile*

 

[James G 5]

Re: James

What's Kallima?

Red

(showing her ignorance again)

She's another Lit member
I'm a fan of hers

I get cool ideas from visual images, comes from being a photographer, I guess

 

[redelicious]

Re: Re: James

She's another Lit member
I'm a fan of hers

I get cool ideas from visual images, comes from being a photographer, I guess

OHHHHHH, she's a person

*feeling like a ditz her own self

 

[James G 5]

Re: Re: Re: James' Story!

Actually, i like that way you used your words..in vampire stories, i feel it almost necessary to speak with "vampiric articulation"..
When vamp stories are just like "ohh suck my blood"..that's a turn off for me. Like i said..your story was very well written..i do hope you do more.

well, there was no real dialogue, and I HATE when people get repetitious & use the same descriptive words & phrases over & over again, so I try to avoid it
Plus, I'm a very visual writer, people talk about the quality of my imagery
I find the very descriptive use of phrasing helps carry the images
I HAVE more, most of it's just not erotica
I'm working on more of THAT to post here

 

[James G 5]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: James' Story!!

Yes
You have a wicked sence of humor
Yes
Hmmm, doesn't seem like you . . .

*Face reddening, eyes downward*
Perhaps I mispoke. Please forgive me. *plaintive smile*

Was TEASING
that was a Joe Pesci line LOL

 

[redelicious]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: James' Story!!

Was TEASING
that was a Joe Pesci line LOL

Silly, I knew that!!!

But I totally missed the reference. My step-mom's (*choke* *shudder*) ditzyness has really rubbed off on me tonight. Maybe a very hot bath will help (or a very strong drink)

 

[porphry]

Re: Re: James' Story!

Glad ya liked it
I use some odd phrasing & archaic words to give feeling & atmosphere
Makes the spell&vocabulary checkers go NUTS tho LOL
And I try to confine my deviousness to stories & willing play partners
For my NEXT topic.......was thinking about a Kallima story
I have trouble writing about things that're too close to home, but I'm plugging way (so to speak) at a story with Porphry in it, based on actual incidents
We'll see

Tread carefully

 

[casper3110]

Re: unabashed plug

WE NOW INTERUPT YOUR REGULARLY SCHEDULED THREAD.......

I got a story posted!!!!
It's my first, a vampire sex fantasy about one of the ladies here on Lit
Ya'll go read it and vote PLEASE??

Did both! Great story, James!!!

 

[Guest]

good monday morning everyone!

hope everyone had a great weekend....


loved your story james
(yes, i voted )

 

[caligula]

good monday morning everyone!

hope everyone had a great weekend....


loved your story james
(yes, i voted )

Hey there stranger.

 

[hrnyhrny]

Re: Re: Re: James' Story!

Tread carefully

I just love biographies.

 

[Guest]

Hey there stranger.

hello caligula !!
how's life been treating you???

 

[redelicious]

Hi All

Hope everyone had a decent Monday!!

Jasmine, I really like the AV!!

Red

 

[Cipher]

Yourz ain't too shabby either Ms.thang!!!!

My monday is nice thanks!! How about urz??

 

[redelicious]

Yourz ain't too shabby either Ms.thang!!!!

My monday is nice thanks!! How about urz??

Thank you!!!!

Its going well. Just me and the baby.

 

[Cipher]

Thank you!!!!

Its going well. Just me and the baby.

You're welcome!!

Glad to hear, how is the baby today???

 

[redelicious]

You're welcome!!

Glad to hear, how is the baby today???

Ohh, he is so cute! He is napping right now

 

[Cipher]

Ohh, he is so cute! He is napping right now

Awww..i like watching babies sleep..they look like lil cherubs!!
Tooo cute girl!!

 

[Guest]

Re: Hi All

Hope everyone had a decent Monday!!

Jasmine, I really like the AV!!

Red

thanks red.. yours is yummy !!!
absolutely gorgeous!!


hope no one else has it LOL

 

[Guest]

hi cipher !

 

[redelicious]

Re: Re: Hi All

thanks red.. yours is yummy !!!
absolutely gorgeous!!


hope no one else has it LOL

Thank you Sweetie

It's a one of a kind

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Hi All

thanks red.. yours is yummy !!!
absolutely gorgeous!!


hope no one else has it LOL

blond moment !! my first of the week..
what i meant to say... was...
i hope i didn't have someone else's av.. lol
sorry about that red