bad girl fucks teacher

tam

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dark haird 18yo bad school girl seduces humiliates and dominates new young female school teacher while she is on detention
 
Could be good! Do you picture the tale as being one where the teacher loves the humiliation and willingly submits, or one where she is blackmailed or in some other way made to do the teen girl's bidding?

-T
 
teacher eventualy learns to enjoy it but to begin with she is just to shy and timid to resist even though she apears confident the girl has guesed that she is really submisive and the girl flaunts herself at the teacher and during an argument in the class room the dark haird girl slaps the teacher and tells her that she is going to fuck her and it begins
 
So you envision the story as a 1 scene kind of thing, with the student and teacher trying to act upon their individual agendas in the 50 or so minutes they have afterschool.

That could possibly work.

Is the student looking for a girlfriend, someone she can humiliate and push around, or is she just spiteful and vindictive, angry that she got detention? How about the teacher? Is she just in it for some quickie sex, or does she want this to continue? Is it the lesbian sex aspect that turns the student on, or is it the gradual reduction of another's will that makes her wet?

-T
 
agemdas

the teacher is hot looking and has a confident air about her but she is in reality inocent and timid a born victam she dosn't have an agenda the student is bi fucks men and women but likes to be in control of women her sub girlfriand has a crush on teacher and the student has decided to dominate the women in front of her
 
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tam said:
The student is bi fucks men and women but likes to be in control of women her sub girlfriand has a crush on teacher and the student has decided to dominate the women in front of her

Thats the stuff I want to hear! I have a better feel for the scenario now. I can almost visualize the people involved. The addition of a 3rd participant was a nice touch. Having her sub present will almost ensure that the student won't back down. A Dom/me needs to maintain an air of strength and integrity around those who rely upon them. If she promises to do something, she must strive to accomplish it. Not that she would be less of a person in her sub's eyes, but the loss of esteem would belittle her in her own.

Perhaps the student purposely stirred the shit in class so that she'd get detention, and her 50 minutes alone with the teacher?

-T
 
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Um ... That post above was me. Forgot to log in (again!)

-T
 
tam wrote on 03-11-2002 04:12 AM:

Bad girl stirs in class. She passes a note to her sub taunting her with what she is going to do with the teacher but she makes sure the teacher sees the note and gives her detention. Will can you describe how you see the characters?

Teacher:
Early 30's, tall, physically fit, but insecure. Dark hair, green eyes, pale skin. Feels out of her league. Wanted to teach elementary school, not in the worst high school in the district. Average looks, thin build, dresses conservatively and frugally. Not much $$$ earned on a starting teacher's salary. Lonely. No man in her life.
*** Ripe for mental abuse, intimidation ***

Bad Girl:
18, short, muscular, pretty. Blonde hair, black eyes. Typical trailer trash. Got everything by selling sex or stealing from others. Views sex as a weapon, a tool and a medium of exchange. She loves no one but herself. She is a Narcissist, and only keeps subs around to feed her ego, not because she loves anyone. She seeks to protect her precious supply of adulation. She also needs to double the hit, thus desires to recruit/train a new sub. Help her sub = help herself.
*** Danger to all around her. A brave coward. No real strength other than the strength others give her. ***

The Submissive GF
18, tall, red haired, freckled, hazel eyes. Beautiful, intelligent, soft spoken. Loves music. She is talented and gifted. She is also a lesbian in a small town. This keeps her introverted, and lonely. She was ripe for the picking by Bad Girl. Sub is smart enough to know that B.G. doesn't care for her, but feels she has no other options. That is, not until Teacher came into her life. On her own, Sub would never approach Teacher. But Sub has a tool she can manipulate at her disposal ...
*** Those without physical strength can often work wonders with the intellect. Who opens more doors, the woman with the brawn, or the woman with the keys? ***

Agendas:

Bad Girl - Get new sub
Teacher - Explore wild side, and thrill of submission
Sub - Find kindred spirit and experience warmth and affection, not just raw sex

The drama to play out in Room 112, between 3:30 and 4:20, Wed night after school!

-T
 
BGs sub

I like your ideas but would prefer if the sub girl was an asian girl
 
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tam said:
I like your ideas but would prefer if the sub girl was an asian girl

Asian woman? Why not. Nothing sacred about red hair. (Sure. That's why I get stupid over redheads with green eyes. )

Any preference as to nationality, Tam? (Japanese, Filippino, Chinese, Korean, etc)

How about her other details? The sub is obviously your focal character, whether you realize it or not. You didn't blink when I changed your dark haired, bi Bad Girl to a blonde, or your hot, young, outwardly confident schoolteacher to a mature, conservatively dressed, insecure woman. You did, however, take exception when I filled in details for a character you in no way described, other than to call her submissive.

-T
 
sub should be a petite japanese girl who starts out sub and ends up on top
 
tam said:
sub should be a petite japanese girl who starts out sub and ends up on top

Starts out sub and ends up on top? That's very inconsistent. Switches do exist, and subs aren't all simpering doormats, but realistically portraying someone suddenly flipping from submissive pet to dominant master would be a hard sell in 10-15 pages. That is, not unless I furnished a lot of flashback and remembrances of signs that the Sub GF had more backbone than she was letting on to BG. This would paint her as manipulative, which I want to avoid. I want Sub GF to be the protagonist and heroine, the BG to be the POV, and the Teacher to be the catalyst.

The story question of Silken Manacles (The working title) that I wish to explore, then answer is: What happens to an unhappy D/s relationship when a compatible, lonely third is added to the mix?

-T
 
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tam said:
sub should be a petite japanese girl

Very, very cool! My favourite oriental nationality! Check out my Ember and Ashe stories if you wish. They feature a Japanese prostitute named Eimi Yoshikawa, nicknamed Ember for her smouldering personality, seemingly dormant but readily rekindled. Find the links by clicking on the "WWW" button underneath this post.

I'll consider that to be the payment for writing this story for you.

Cheers!

-T
 
Tam;

Silken Manacles is done, and is just being cleaned up a wee bit. You have the entire text in a PM. If you want any changes made, let me know. I intend to submit it on Saturday night.

-T
 
bad girl

Sounds interesting, Tate. I will be looking.

You do have insight. Seems like sometimes you are writing everything in sight. Going for the Charlie Dickens Prolific Award?

You aren't alone. Green eyed redheads make me stupid too. Takes about one good look, she can have anything I own.
 
Tatewaki

Well just the outline got me goining I love it well done
 
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Axeltheswede said:
Sounds interesting, Tate. I will be looking.

You do have insight. Seems like sometimes you are writing everything in sight. Going for the Charlie Dickens Prolific Award?

You aren't alone. Green eyed redheads make me stupid too. Takes about one good look, she can have anything I own.

I keep 20-30 stories outlined and in various states of completion. I work on them more or less consecutively. I write for at least 2 hours every day. Problem is, that is not a lot of writing time when spread over such a large body of work!

I enjoy taking requests from this board because it gives me that push to actually complete the projects I start. I must focus on 2 or 3 stories, and put the remainder on ice until they are finished.

It may look like I'm writing everything in sight, but I don't think Tam was impressed. I agreed to do this story in early March, over 3 months ago. I haven't heard from him in awhile. I guess he thought I was taking too long with it.

Thanks for the compliment, Axel. I hope the final product lives up to your expectations! It changed a bit from my original concept.

Cheers!

-T
 
Re: Tatewaki

MsLinnet said:
Well just the outline got me goining I love it well done

Thanks, Linnet!

But the outline is only the intent, not the deed. What I wish to accomplish and what my writing accomplishes may very well be two different things.

Time will tell.

Regards,

-T
 
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Tatewaki said:


Thanks, Linnet!

But the outline is only the intent, not the deed. What I wish to accomplish and what my writing accomplishes may very well be two different things.

Time will tell.

Regards,

-T

Tell me about it

I am no where as prolific about writing as you andI find I loose interest in things very quickly but I to have a list of 20 storeys that are works in progress, but I am afraid I look at them and they are not sparking any interest.

How do you get re-motivated on a theme you have put down.
 
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MsLinnet said:


Tell me about it

I am no where as prolific about writing as you andI find I loose interest in things very quickly but I to have a list of 20 storeys that are works in progress, but I am afraid I look at them and they are not sparking any interest.

How do you get re-motivated on a theme you have put down.


Linnet;

While writing is a joy, it is also bloody hard work. At least, I've always found it so. When I am deep into a story, I always come up with an idea that seems more alive, more vibrant, just more fun to do than the drivel I'm pounding away at.

Resist the urge to abandon your present work. Write the idea down somewhere, then plow through your existing project.

If the thing you are working on is dead in the water, then by all means skip to the next project, but always with the intention of revisiting it within 30 days. By that time you will have had enough time to dissociate yourself with the problems you were experiencing, and to approach the problem from a different tack.

What happens if what you are working on no longer interests you in the slightest? Well, you can always do one of the following:

[1] Plow through it anyways, relying on your skill with the craft to see you through.

[2] Archive it for later, and hope that inspiration hits you at a later date. You can always steal snatches of the story to use in other projects.

[3] Call it a writing exercise and deep-six the lot.

Those are your choices, Linnet. Green, Yellow and Red. I believe less in motivation and more in perspiration. You must motivate yourself to do the work. Inspiration is so fickle that I never rely on it. If I did, my story output would be much more pathetic than it is right now! You just need to develop discipline.

Hope this helps, Linnet.

Warmest,

-T
 
Silken Manacles is up!

You can find it below:

Silken Manacles

I hope you guys like it! I haven't heard a peep out of Tam, the person who originally requested it.

Ah, well. Such is life.

Cheers!

-T
 
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